Comments received on poems by Phylicia 2023
I Wish It Was
NinjaGirl said:
Oh, hon, we all wish life was easy. And I certainly wish it was too. Beautiful writing, stunning job.
November 5th, 2023 21:23
NinjaGirl said:
Oh, hon, we all wish life was easy. And I certainly wish it was too. Beautiful writing, stunning job.
November 5th, 2023 21:23
LOVE IS NOT AN IRONY
Bobby O said:
Nice write. May I submit, he’s not able to know. Furthermore , he’s not able to gauge his own reaction. It’s a parallel tenet of The Five To Midnight Syndrome.
July 14th, 2023 17:05
Bobby O said:
Nice write. May I submit, he’s not able to know. Furthermore , he’s not able to gauge his own reaction. It’s a parallel tenet of The Five To Midnight Syndrome.
July 14th, 2023 17:05
MYSTERY of LOVE
L. B. Mek said:
\'Love was just a noun she found very Abstract .\'
now we\'re swimming in metaphysical deep waters
loved your tonality and flow
it reads like you\'re rushing
to work out the problem
and come what may, move on
I so relate
thanks for sharing
(is love
a concept or an ideal
a solution or a trap
a feeling realised
or
a surrender of selfhood
to belong, to a mirage promise
determined by the prenup
imbued in its concussive layers
dare we, excavate too deep
dare we..?)
lol
scary thoughts, best left
shoved back in the back of the closet
with our regret skeletons
and bedtime monsters, I think..
July 14th, 2023 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'Love was just a noun she found very Abstract .\'
now we\'re swimming in metaphysical deep waters
loved your tonality and flow
it reads like you\'re rushing
to work out the problem
and come what may, move on
I so relate
thanks for sharing
(is love
a concept or an ideal
a solution or a trap
a feeling realised
or
a surrender of selfhood
to belong, to a mirage promise
determined by the prenup
imbued in its concussive layers
dare we, excavate too deep
dare we..?)
lol
scary thoughts, best left
shoved back in the back of the closet
with our regret skeletons
and bedtime monsters, I think..
July 14th, 2023 04:46
MYSTERY of LOVE
Bobby O said:
I may politely suggest that most of the mystery is solved. So many that proclaim about the elusive have erred in the personal approach and the mystery forever will elude due to incomplete immersion bordered with their unseen selfish method that surely leaves all their future equation wanting, forever diminished success guaranteed. You , rather than be ambled by personal fails have done the very most. The best preparation is described in your yearnings and while I read the sadness I certainly want to congratulate fir mastering the hardest part. The selfless committed journey few really do undertake. So, pretty lady , it’s just happenstance , not a barrier of imperfect journey that not describes the genuine place you now inhabit. Joyful commiseration is the reward due and I’m certain it will be fun to hear you gather bounty with a bevy if joyful noises.
July 13th, 2023 21:40
Bobby O said:
I may politely suggest that most of the mystery is solved. So many that proclaim about the elusive have erred in the personal approach and the mystery forever will elude due to incomplete immersion bordered with their unseen selfish method that surely leaves all their future equation wanting, forever diminished success guaranteed. You , rather than be ambled by personal fails have done the very most. The best preparation is described in your yearnings and while I read the sadness I certainly want to congratulate fir mastering the hardest part. The selfless committed journey few really do undertake. So, pretty lady , it’s just happenstance , not a barrier of imperfect journey that not describes the genuine place you now inhabit. Joyful commiseration is the reward due and I’m certain it will be fun to hear you gather bounty with a bevy if joyful noises.
July 13th, 2023 21:40
WHY?
orchidee said:
Someone used to drive me mad. He replied \'why\' to everything people said, even if they were not asking questions!
July 9th, 2023 01:46
orchidee said:
Someone used to drive me mad. He replied \'why\' to everything people said, even if they were not asking questions!
July 9th, 2023 01:46
LOVE
L. B. Mek said:
being in love, with love
is a wonderful state of mind
thanks for sharing
June 5th, 2023 02:47
L. B. Mek said:
being in love, with love
is a wonderful state of mind
thanks for sharing
June 5th, 2023 02:47
