Comments received on poems by bevan tse stuart
Somehow
David Wakeling said:
All relationships fail.The parties want different things.Its no-ones fault.
August 7th, 2023 18:10
David Wakeling said:
All relationships fail.The parties want different things.Its no-ones fault.
August 7th, 2023 18:10
Vodka burns
L. B. Mek said:
I so relate,
that alcohol bitterness
fits with our hurt so well
thanks for sharing
July 21st, 2023 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
I so relate,
that alcohol bitterness
fits with our hurt so well
thanks for sharing
July 21st, 2023 04:55
Too much
LIZ said:
No, it\'s not too much! But, I\'ve learned, people will only meet you as far as they can reach. Just because you\'re ready, it doesn\'t mean anyone else is. I\'ve learn to not force things, especially love! I can feel the frustration! Love looks so different to every person, even though it\'s universal; it can sometimes be complicated. But it doesn\'t have to be! Thank you for sharing!
July 4th, 2023 10:28
LIZ said:
No, it\'s not too much! But, I\'ve learned, people will only meet you as far as they can reach. Just because you\'re ready, it doesn\'t mean anyone else is. I\'ve learn to not force things, especially love! I can feel the frustration! Love looks so different to every person, even though it\'s universal; it can sometimes be complicated. But it doesn\'t have to be! Thank you for sharing!
July 4th, 2023 10:28
Too much
LIZ said:
No, it\'s not too much! But, I\'ve learned, people will only meet you as far as they can reach. Just because you\'re ready, it doesn\'t mean anyone else is. I\'ve learn to not force things, especially love! I can feel the frustration! Love looks so different to every person, even though it\'s universal; it can sometimes be complicated. But it doesn\'t have to be! Thank you for sharing!
July 4th, 2023 10:28
LIZ said:
No, it\'s not too much! But, I\'ve learned, people will only meet you as far as they can reach. Just because you\'re ready, it doesn\'t mean anyone else is. I\'ve learn to not force things, especially love! I can feel the frustration! Love looks so different to every person, even though it\'s universal; it can sometimes be complicated. But it doesn\'t have to be! Thank you for sharing!
July 4th, 2023 10:28
Saying
L. B. Mek said:
if you\'re willing to commit, dive-in
heart first
embrace the fear, hurdle the obstacles
better to have tried and failed
than being left wondering
what could have been
\'shoulda, woulda, coulda
are the last words of a fool\'
(but what do i know, lol
do what feels right to you)
thanks for sharing
July 3rd, 2023 03:43
L. B. Mek said:
if you\'re willing to commit, dive-in
heart first
embrace the fear, hurdle the obstacles
better to have tried and failed
than being left wondering
what could have been
\'shoulda, woulda, coulda
are the last words of a fool\'
(but what do i know, lol
do what feels right to you)
thanks for sharing
July 3rd, 2023 03:43
And yes
LIZ said:
Isn\'t that one of the most uncomfortable, hurtful situations? You know better...but still! So many feelings!
June 25th, 2023 15:43
LIZ said:
Isn\'t that one of the most uncomfortable, hurtful situations? You know better...but still! So many feelings!
June 25th, 2023 15:43
Hands
L. B. Mek said:
same as me, fractured my arm once
passed out, got back up
went on for a few days
before
I got convinced to visit hospital
six months in cast...
some of us are sadly
just too used to pain
to recognise, a new one
being added to the pile...
a great write, dear poet
love the sincerity
(please, permit me to share with you
one of my favourite poems of all time:
\'\"This living hand, now warm and capable\"
BY JOHN KEATS
This living hand, now warm and capable
Of earnest grasping, would, if it were cold
And in the icy silence of the tomb,
So haunt thy days and chill thy dreaming nights
That thou would wish thine own heart dry of blood
So in my veins red life might stream again,
And thou be conscience-calm’d–see here it is–
I hold it towards you.\')
June 23rd, 2023 03:48
L. B. Mek said:
same as me, fractured my arm once
passed out, got back up
went on for a few days
before
I got convinced to visit hospital
six months in cast...
some of us are sadly
just too used to pain
to recognise, a new one
being added to the pile...
a great write, dear poet
love the sincerity
(please, permit me to share with you
one of my favourite poems of all time:
\'\"This living hand, now warm and capable\"
BY JOHN KEATS
This living hand, now warm and capable
Of earnest grasping, would, if it were cold
And in the icy silence of the tomb,
So haunt thy days and chill thy dreaming nights
That thou would wish thine own heart dry of blood
So in my veins red life might stream again,
And thou be conscience-calm’d–see here it is–
I hold it towards you.\')
June 23rd, 2023 03:48
Hands
David Wakeling said:
This is okay.Thew hands are certainly a wonder to behold.Well done
June 22nd, 2023 17:37
David Wakeling said:
This is okay.Thew hands are certainly a wonder to behold.Well done
June 22nd, 2023 17:37
Head
LIZ said:
This deadly silence can bring clarity. Sitting with our emotions, creating, away from outside influences! Is it painful? Of course. But, if we survive it, the ending result can be....understanding, awareness, forgiveness. Thank you for sharing!
June 20th, 2023 15:20
LIZ said:
This deadly silence can bring clarity. Sitting with our emotions, creating, away from outside influences! Is it painful? Of course. But, if we survive it, the ending result can be....understanding, awareness, forgiveness. Thank you for sharing!
June 20th, 2023 15:20
How to burn it away
David Wakeling said:
This is quite involved and sad.Certainly a very powerful piece.Well done
June 19th, 2023 17:39
David Wakeling said:
This is quite involved and sad.Certainly a very powerful piece.Well done
June 19th, 2023 17:39
