Comments received on poems by Aloo Denish Obiero



Dusk and Dawn
Friendship said:

I enjoyed this poem. Your poem encapsulates the transition from one year to the next, emphasizing the themes of reflection, gratitude, and hope. It highlights the lessons learned from the past year and the new opportunities that the upcoming year may bring.

January 2nd, 2026 08:11

Dusk and Dawn
sorenbarrett said:

I love this poem and its sentiment where gratitude ends the old and anticipation starts the new. This has such a positive balance to it and hope reigns supreme. A fave

January 2nd, 2026 03:51

He Reigned but Never Ruled
Katie B. said:

Well penned! I invite you to check out mine if you like.

December 27th, 2025 11:33

He Reigned but Never Ruled
sorenbarrett said:

Quite an homage, powerful and well executed. This was a wonderful poem of honor and so nicely written. Loved it and a fave

December 27th, 2025 08:34

He Reigned but Never Ruled
Friendship said:

Well said. Your poem reflects on the life and contributions of Raila Amolo Odinga, a prominent figure in Kenyan politics. It celebrates his unwavering commitment to democracy, human rights, and social justice while also critiquing the political landscape that failed to fully embrace his leadership. The poet highlights the paradox of his significant influence and the missed opportunities for him to hold power.

December 27th, 2025 07:36

Not Money, Not Everything
Katie B. said:

Lovely, well written.

December 3rd, 2025 05:36

Not Money, Not Everything
Paul Bell said:

Today\'s life is built on banknotes and without them, you perish.
The footsie top hundred rule the world now, and they have no scruples on people\'s life whatsoever.


December 3rd, 2025 04:56

Not Money, Not Everything
sorenbarrett said:

The point is well taken that today is not a hunter gatherer society nor a farming community that today it is capitalistic and as cold as the jaws of a preditor of old are the teeth of the monetary system of today. Money or die

December 3rd, 2025 04:24

The Reign Without a Throne
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful and so well written it flows in logic and emotion together as all very good writes do. It depicts what is greatness and what will remain beyond the temporal life of a person. Well done

October 21st, 2025 05:33

The Elegy: Raila Amolo Odinga
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful tribute and homage to a past leader. Very nicely worded.

October 16th, 2025 04:57

The Classless Jealousy
Poetic Licence said:

A wonderful write and so true in its statement, enjoyed the read

June 18th, 2025 06:20

The Classless Jealousy
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

a wonderful write

June 18th, 2025 04:22

The Classless Jealousy
sorenbarrett said:

This is very well written with the final lines being the crowning cap. Loved it and agree with it as well.

June 18th, 2025 03:57

Time Marches On
Poetic Licence said:

How time never stands still and we are just passing through it, enjoyed the read

June 15th, 2025 02:39

Time Marches On
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of the unstoppable element of time and how we are just passing moments. Very nicely done

June 14th, 2025 20:11

Beyond the Past
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

those who dwell in the past hinder the future, enjoyed

April 21st, 2025 09:18

Beyond the Past
Starlight said:

You\'re writing is so delighting

November 27th, 2024 12:24

What is Biochemistry?
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 14th, 2024 14:26

Biochemistry: The Language of Life
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 12th, 2024 12:23

Biochemistry: The Language of Life
2781 said:

Many shall run to and fro, and knowledge shall be increased.

November 12th, 2024 09:26

Beyond Words
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Lovely poem and even lovelier thoughts

November 5th, 2024 06:44

Beyond the Past
NafisaSB said:

lovely message - worth sharing far and wide..keep writing

November 5th, 2024 00:49

Beyond the Past
Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke said:

Beautiful poem. Keep it up.

November 4th, 2024 17:45

The Reign of Thornbush
Doggerel Dave said:

The message, presented as a \'fable\' so neatly rendered, could not be clearer.
Thoroughly enjoyed both the work and endorse the truth which motivated it.

November 4th, 2024 13:46

Beyond the Past
Doggerel Dave said:

Much truth contained within a very well structured piece.

Thank you.

November 4th, 2024 13:31

Beyond the Past
Lorenz said:

Elegant style ! The past is our history and destiny ..my opinion !

November 4th, 2024 13:22

Beyond the Past
sorenbarrett said:

Cleverly worded this poem tells of not being stuck in the past but using it to learn from a great message.

November 4th, 2024 13:14

Beyond the Past
NinjaGirl said:

how very beautiful, thank you for sharing


November 4th, 2024 12:56

Beyond Words
sorenbarrett said:

Very nice this poem speaks wisdom in very few words. It seems Budistic or maybe from Proverbs regardless well said

October 31st, 2024 04:27

Beyond Words
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful, and I couldn\'t agree more.

October 31st, 2024 01:47

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