Comments received on poems by Star hunter



Thief in the darkness
Nafis Light said:

Nice Story

September 23rd, 2023 10:36

Dear Mum
Caring dove said:

That’s really sad .. to be neglected by yoir mum . Sorry you have to go through that

I can relate , in ways .. it can affect us into adulthood ,

You expressed this well tho

July 19th, 2023 14:41

HUNTING STARS
Caring dove said:

Lovely writing )) like your words

July 12th, 2023 12:35

Comfort
orchidee said:

Good write S.

July 8th, 2023 14:50

8 Letters
orchidee said:

Try writing 7 or 9 letters then, see if things improve! lol.

July 8th, 2023 14:50

Comfort
lostmoon said:

Love it. The imagery, the scene itself- beautiful. And I totally agree.

July 7th, 2023 04:20

Comfort
Caring dove said:

Really nice poem 🙂 I liked reading this

Especially like the lines :

Where a lake kisses the crystal blue sky

Wind blowing, caressing the light green grass

Beautiful words


July 6th, 2023 15:48

I\'m tired
lostmoon said:

I hope that you find something that makes your fatigue go away and that you reach your goal. For that, just keep heading on. Beautifully written, by the way.

July 6th, 2023 13:22

I\'m tired
Caring dove said:

That’s really sad I’m sorry you feel that way

July 4th, 2023 02:15

I\'m tired
peto said:

Chase that goal
You will reach it
When you do, it will revitalize you
Cant hunt stars so fatigued or paranoid
Keep writing it out
Got a talent for it


July 3rd, 2023 09:04

The way of hearts
L. B. Mek said:

yup, sometimes agreeing to disagree
and getting distance from that toxic
environment
is all we can do to survive, i so relate
thanks for sharing

June 30th, 2023 07:19

The way of hearts
2781 said:

That will do it.

June 30th, 2023 06:50

Death\'s wings
Garth Rakumakoe said:

A magnificent way to describe death, as a vulture in the night, unseen, never expected. Excellent metaphor. Well written. ❤

June 29th, 2023 14:49