Comments received on poems by Star hunter
Dear Mum
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
That’s really sad .. to be neglected by yoir mum . Sorry you have to go through that
I can relate , in ways .. it can affect us into adulthood ,
You expressed this well tho
July 19th, 2023 14:41
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
That’s really sad .. to be neglected by yoir mum . Sorry you have to go through that
I can relate , in ways .. it can affect us into adulthood ,
You expressed this well tho
July 19th, 2023 14:41
HUNTING STARS
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing )) like your words
July 12th, 2023 12:35
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing )) like your words
July 12th, 2023 12:35
8 Letters
orchidee said:
Try writing 7 or 9 letters then, see if things improve! lol.
July 8th, 2023 14:50
orchidee said:
Try writing 7 or 9 letters then, see if things improve! lol.
July 8th, 2023 14:50
Comfort
lostmoon said:
Love it. The imagery, the scene itself- beautiful. And I totally agree.
July 7th, 2023 04:20
lostmoon said:
Love it. The imagery, the scene itself- beautiful. And I totally agree.
July 7th, 2023 04:20
Comfort
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really nice poem 🙂 I liked reading this
Especially like the lines :
Where a lake kisses the crystal blue sky
Wind blowing, caressing the light green grass
Beautiful words
July 6th, 2023 15:48
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really nice poem 🙂 I liked reading this
Especially like the lines :
Where a lake kisses the crystal blue sky
Wind blowing, caressing the light green grass
Beautiful words
July 6th, 2023 15:48
I\'m tired
lostmoon said:
I hope that you find something that makes your fatigue go away and that you reach your goal. For that, just keep heading on. Beautifully written, by the way.
July 6th, 2023 13:22
lostmoon said:
I hope that you find something that makes your fatigue go away and that you reach your goal. For that, just keep heading on. Beautifully written, by the way.
July 6th, 2023 13:22
I\'m tired
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
That’s really sad I’m sorry you feel that way
July 4th, 2023 02:15
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
That’s really sad I’m sorry you feel that way
July 4th, 2023 02:15
I\'m tired
peto said:
Chase that goal
You will reach it
When you do, it will revitalize you
Cant hunt stars so fatigued or paranoid
Keep writing it out
Got a talent for it
July 3rd, 2023 09:04
peto said:
Chase that goal
You will reach it
When you do, it will revitalize you
Cant hunt stars so fatigued or paranoid
Keep writing it out
Got a talent for it
July 3rd, 2023 09:04
The way of hearts
L. B. Mek said:
yup, sometimes agreeing to disagree
and getting distance from that toxic
environment
is all we can do to survive, i so relate
thanks for sharing
June 30th, 2023 07:19
L. B. Mek said:
yup, sometimes agreeing to disagree
and getting distance from that toxic
environment
is all we can do to survive, i so relate
thanks for sharing
June 30th, 2023 07:19
Death\'s wings
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A magnificent way to describe death, as a vulture in the night, unseen, never expected. Excellent metaphor. Well written. ❤
June 29th, 2023 14:49
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A magnificent way to describe death, as a vulture in the night, unseen, never expected. Excellent metaphor. Well written. ❤
June 29th, 2023 14:49
