To the Deep
L. B. Mek said:

lol
ignore the wannabe poet masters
trying to dictate a world, where
the limits of their stunted
capabilities
is deemed a reality we can\'t try
to surpass
(do you! let your art soar
yeah, accessibility may be key
for most poetry, but so is
artistic licence and ambition)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
and your poem\'s\' perfectly understandable
for those that can read
above a highcool level
(\'to the deep\'
sands of time, ashore
waves of our inherited
lamented tears
we stand, as if planted
by a fate we dare not
comprehend
led weight in our veins, stunted
we inch forward
in the name of progress
heeding the whispers
of those that came before
hoping, our legacies
won\'t be as crimson tainted
for those generations
fated to surf on that we live
behind...)

June 30th, 2023 06:17

To the Deep
David Wakeling said:

I tried to read this but there are too many words missing so I gave up

June 29th, 2023 22:33