Comments received on poems by VIVAN ADITYA
WHAT IF TOMORROW NEVER COMES?
Bobby O said:
Such a great rhyme scheme that served to transport mood , morale, and motion together in unison achieving proper balance and purpose in poetic conveyance.
July 29th, 2023 05:02
Bobby O said:
Such a great rhyme scheme that served to transport mood , morale, and motion together in unison achieving proper balance and purpose in poetic conveyance.
July 29th, 2023 05:02
WHAT IF TOMORROW NEVER COMES?
2781 said:
Take therefore no thought for the morrow: for the morrow shall take thought of the things of itself. Sufficient unto the day is the evil thereof.
July 29th, 2023 02:38
2781 said:
Take therefore no thought for the morrow: for the morrow shall take thought of the things of itself. Sufficient unto the day is the evil thereof.
July 29th, 2023 02:38
