Comments received on poems by Ethan Mikel StAmour
Alzheimers
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting senryu that gives one pause to think of possibilities. Well written
November 22nd, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting senryu that gives one pause to think of possibilities. Well written
November 22nd, 2025 03:54
I miss you dad
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a twist at the end that reverses the previous assumed meaning just as a mirror reverses the image. Well done
November 21st, 2025 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a twist at the end that reverses the previous assumed meaning just as a mirror reverses the image. Well done
November 21st, 2025 03:48
lilys under a dawn morning
sorenbarrett said:
Another beautiful haiku that shares its image. Lovely
November 20th, 2025 20:33
sorenbarrett said:
Another beautiful haiku that shares its image. Lovely
November 20th, 2025 20:33
Crimson desert
sorenbarrett said:
You produce haiku after haiku a specialist and good for you. This one is most colorful and almost able to be tasted. Nicely done.
November 18th, 2025 03:38
sorenbarrett said:
You produce haiku after haiku a specialist and good for you. This one is most colorful and almost able to be tasted. Nicely done.
November 18th, 2025 03:38
Fire among the water
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful haiku of sunset or sunrise on the water. Nicely done
November 17th, 2025 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful haiku of sunset or sunrise on the water. Nicely done
November 17th, 2025 03:43
dont walk away
sorenbarrett said:
A sad senryu that says a lot in so few words. Well done
November 16th, 2025 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
A sad senryu that says a lot in so few words. Well done
November 16th, 2025 04:04
Something is watching above
Bragee said:
Just enough to not be too much!
Thought provoking
November 15th, 2025 14:31
Bragee said:
Just enough to not be too much!
Thought provoking
November 15th, 2025 14:31
Something is watching above
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting haiku and one must ask is it God, aliens, the weather, our own mood, satellites, big brother and the number of possibilities increases the uncertainty and thereby its presence. Nicely done
November 15th, 2025 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting haiku and one must ask is it God, aliens, the weather, our own mood, satellites, big brother and the number of possibilities increases the uncertainty and thereby its presence. Nicely done
November 15th, 2025 03:42
Hidden in the water
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of the Man of War, a floating demon floating on the waves whose sting leaves welts and strong pain. Another great haiku
November 12th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of the Man of War, a floating demon floating on the waves whose sting leaves welts and strong pain. Another great haiku
November 12th, 2025 04:34
Ghosts of Yakuza
sorenbarrett said:
This senryu is graphic in implied imagery and powerful in its meaning. Well done
November 11th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
This senryu is graphic in implied imagery and powerful in its meaning. Well done
November 11th, 2025 04:23
The Sand Spirits
RSM0812 said:
Great rhyme scheme with good imagery. Nice job.
November 9th, 2025 10:59
RSM0812 said:
Great rhyme scheme with good imagery. Nice job.
November 9th, 2025 10:59
The Sand Spirits
sorenbarrett said:
I have been to the desert and walked through it and this poem paints its picture well. Loved it. It feels vaguely familiar like a home that has been left for a long time.
November 8th, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
I have been to the desert and walked through it and this poem paints its picture well. Loved it. It feels vaguely familiar like a home that has been left for a long time.
November 8th, 2025 04:55
The Life Element
sorenbarrett said:
A great haiku who\'s image stands out in my mind. Nicely done
November 8th, 2025 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
A great haiku who\'s image stands out in my mind. Nicely done
November 8th, 2025 03:45
The Earth Element
Paul Bell said:
Earth in a nugget.
Then man came and put his stamp on it.
Still an awesome place mind you.
November 7th, 2025 04:45
Paul Bell said:
Earth in a nugget.
Then man came and put his stamp on it.
Still an awesome place mind you.
November 7th, 2025 04:45
The Earth Element
sorenbarrett said:
A great haiku with beautiful images of nature or in metaphor could be a powerful senryu as well. Well done
November 7th, 2025 03:35
sorenbarrett said:
A great haiku with beautiful images of nature or in metaphor could be a powerful senryu as well. Well done
November 7th, 2025 03:35
The Water Element
sorenbarrett said:
I love this haiku it paints a most beautiful and descriptive picture of nature and is most beautiful
November 6th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
I love this haiku it paints a most beautiful and descriptive picture of nature and is most beautiful
November 6th, 2025 04:28
The fire element
sorenbarrett said:
It is the strength of anticipation that gives this poem its power. Short but like a spark it can set a field afire. Well done
November 3rd, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
It is the strength of anticipation that gives this poem its power. Short but like a spark it can set a field afire. Well done
November 3rd, 2025 03:54
Glowing Mushrooms
sorenbarrett said:
Mushrooms in all their glory tease the tongue with their taste, tickle the mind with visions. As for mine I like them sautéed with melted butter on top of a steak medium rare. A fun read
October 31st, 2025 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
Mushrooms in all their glory tease the tongue with their taste, tickle the mind with visions. As for mine I like them sautéed with melted butter on top of a steak medium rare. A fun read
October 31st, 2025 04:00
Flowers in the night {Haiku}
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely not a haiku. Three rich regular haikus!
October 30th, 2025 18:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely not a haiku. Three rich regular haikus!
October 30th, 2025 18:01
Flowers in the night {Haiku}
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images cast in these three haikus each one very nice
October 30th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images cast in these three haikus each one very nice
October 30th, 2025 03:55
Flowers Along The Stream (Short)
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful picture painted in these poetic words. It is a most peaceful painting. Lovely
October 28th, 2025 07:49
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful picture painted in these poetic words. It is a most peaceful painting. Lovely
October 28th, 2025 07:49
Night Walker
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the image of time cast here with symbolic colors as well. Very nicely done.
October 21st, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the image of time cast here with symbolic colors as well. Very nicely done.
October 21st, 2025 04:30
No man\'s land of the Crimson Painter
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of power by force and the blade. Pride in strength and a primal yell for all to take notice and prepare. Lovely
October 16th, 2025 07:22
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of power by force and the blade. Pride in strength and a primal yell for all to take notice and prepare. Lovely
October 16th, 2025 07:22
Dusk until dawn
sorenbarrett said:
Depression a terrible foe it commits war crimes. A wonderful write that tells it as it is being raw and bloody a battlefield of the soul. Nicely penned
October 15th, 2025 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
Depression a terrible foe it commits war crimes. A wonderful write that tells it as it is being raw and bloody a battlefield of the soul. Nicely penned
October 15th, 2025 05:18
My love for my dear girl
Cassie58 said:
Brimful of love. Beautiful poetry. Lucky Brooklyn to be loved in such a way.
April 14th, 2024 16:10
Cassie58 said:
Brimful of love. Beautiful poetry. Lucky Brooklyn to be loved in such a way.
April 14th, 2024 16:10
The Purple Sun
Pop64 said:
the rhyme and flow of this poem is wonderful. The imagery you create is so clear, wonderfully vivid. A very good read!
July 24th, 2023 11:39
Pop64 said:
the rhyme and flow of this poem is wonderful. The imagery you create is so clear, wonderfully vivid. A very good read!
July 24th, 2023 11:39
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