Comments received on poems by Lynda May
The Devil Within
AuburnScribbler said:
This is a masterful tribute to your mother Lynda, written in a heartfelt and defiantly proud tone, with a gorgeous rhythm.
I think your mother would be proud, as what you did shows, that you are a most loving daughter and caring person.
Very much bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 4th, 2023 07:53
AuburnScribbler said:
This is a masterful tribute to your mother Lynda, written in a heartfelt and defiantly proud tone, with a gorgeous rhythm.
I think your mother would be proud, as what you did shows, that you are a most loving daughter and caring person.
Very much bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 4th, 2023 07:53
The Devil Within
Lynda May said:
I think its harder from the sidelines Bob. Watching so helplessly unable to do anything to stop it. My Mum didn\'t know what was happening to her. But she was adored and died in my arms when the time came. We gave her the best we could I\'m pleased to say. This gives me comfort.
Thank you for commenting & appreciating my poem.
August 3rd, 2023 03:05
Lynda May said:
I think its harder from the sidelines Bob. Watching so helplessly unable to do anything to stop it. My Mum didn\'t know what was happening to her. But she was adored and died in my arms when the time came. We gave her the best we could I\'m pleased to say. This gives me comfort.
Thank you for commenting & appreciating my poem.
August 3rd, 2023 03:05
The Devil Within
Bobby O said:
My HEART to you. I wish I could report that when my life was bludgeoned by this insidious intrusion I was able to meet it w leads fear and less tears. But it’s really not our fight it just a sidelined task of watching, wishing, and weary helplessness.
Two Taps on my heart.
August 2nd, 2023 18:52
Bobby O said:
My HEART to you. I wish I could report that when my life was bludgeoned by this insidious intrusion I was able to meet it w leads fear and less tears. But it’s really not our fight it just a sidelined task of watching, wishing, and weary helplessness.
Two Taps on my heart.
August 2nd, 2023 18:52
The Devil Within
peto said:
A tremendous debut
Although devastating you Express the feeling so well
Rhyme and flow enhance the write
Look forward to reading more from you
August 2nd, 2023 13:49
peto said:
A tremendous debut
Although devastating you Express the feeling so well
Rhyme and flow enhance the write
Look forward to reading more from you
August 2nd, 2023 13:49
