Comments received on poems by Mystery\'s Creation



My Angel\'s in Heaven
Pop64 said:

A truly sad write, but clear in its delivery. The lines below really got to me. Awesome writing and expression of missing your mother.
For the Queen to my lowly pawn

The Doe to my helpless fawn

I must realize now had gone

As I struggle to confront the dawn

September 18th, 2023 09:42

Ruby\'s Eyes
Mystery\'s Creation said:

Hello.I hope you had a great Weekend and your Week\'s starting of well.
Thanks so much for your kindness!!
Have a great,safe and peaceful day and best of luck to you!!!!! 😊 ☺

September 11th, 2023 08:39

Ruby\'s Eyes
BlessedbyGod said:

😥😥😥😥😢😢😢😢this reminds me of someone that used to be on MPS before she passed away idk of you might remember her Ruby Rae,
You could see the would in her eyes, may they rest peacefully in God\'s mighty arms😭😭😭😭

September 11th, 2023 07:26

Path to Intimacy
vividvoid14 said:

amazing

September 5th, 2023 15:39

The Star and the Angel
Pop64 said:

Absolutely beautiful in every way, from the rhyme, fluidity of the read and the imagery. Splendid!

September 1st, 2023 07:30

Fables of Whispering Ghosts
2781 said:

Interesting.

August 21st, 2023 07:48

Us vs. Them
2781 said:

Power to you.

August 21st, 2023 07:47

9-11
tallisman said:

Hi Ed, enjoyed this and your back catalogue as well, good rhyming schemes. Thanks for sharing.

August 21st, 2023 00:45

Us vs. Them
2781 said:

I enjoyed your observations.
Feeling privileged!

August 19th, 2023 08:25

The Whipporwill
Doggerel Dave said:

Why +18?

August 16th, 2023 20:40

Looking at a Painting
orchidee said:

Good write Fred, erm, Mystery! lol.

August 11th, 2023 08:59

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