Comments received on poems by Mystery\'s Creation
Redemption and Apologies
sorenbarrett said:
A message to parents and to all listening that life goes on and that one fights the battles one at a time. There is determination in this piece. Well done
March 1st, 2026 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
A message to parents and to all listening that life goes on and that one fights the battles one at a time. There is determination in this piece. Well done
March 1st, 2026 08:19
Redemption and Apologies
Poetic Licence said:
A reassuring write to ones loved parent\'s as they look down and watch over their son, through all that life through at him and all the times he wanted to throw the towel in, he has made it through the darkness and now lives within the light. Well penned and expressed
March 1st, 2026 08:02
Poetic Licence said:
A reassuring write to ones loved parent\'s as they look down and watch over their son, through all that life through at him and all the times he wanted to throw the towel in, he has made it through the darkness and now lives within the light. Well penned and expressed
March 1st, 2026 08:02
End of My rope(haiku)
sorenbarrett said:
What a dark senryu well put together
February 16th, 2026 13:36
sorenbarrett said:
What a dark senryu well put together
February 16th, 2026 13:36
End of My rope(haiku)
marissa said:
Whatever you’re going through just know there’s always going to be someone there for you,wether you’re open to seeing it or not.Keep your chin up,life is cruel so be cruel back!
February 16th, 2026 13:01
marissa said:
Whatever you’re going through just know there’s always going to be someone there for you,wether you’re open to seeing it or not.Keep your chin up,life is cruel so be cruel back!
February 16th, 2026 13:01
Stuck in a Moment of Despair(a Haiku)
Vipassana said:
I can relate, unfortunately
February 11th, 2026 16:01
Vipassana said:
I can relate, unfortunately
February 11th, 2026 16:01
Stuck in a Moment of Despair(a Haiku)
sorenbarrett said:
And well it is. A strong poem although short
February 11th, 2026 14:21
sorenbarrett said:
And well it is. A strong poem although short
February 11th, 2026 14:21
Long Enough to Dream
sorenbarrett said:
For some such as a mosquito life is measured in days for some trees thousands of years. A poem very nicely written
December 10th, 2025 09:25
sorenbarrett said:
For some such as a mosquito life is measured in days for some trees thousands of years. A poem very nicely written
December 10th, 2025 09:25
Long Enough to Dream
coracaodacripta said:
It seems to me that we have a similar writing style, so I feel a connection to this poem. It has a larger meaning that is insinuated in some of the words you chose to describe it, and I am fond of the message. Well done.
December 10th, 2025 09:24
coracaodacripta said:
It seems to me that we have a similar writing style, so I feel a connection to this poem. It has a larger meaning that is insinuated in some of the words you chose to describe it, and I am fond of the message. Well done.
December 10th, 2025 09:24
Witness to an Unrivaled Utopia:A Mortal\'s Take on a Deity\'s Beauty
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of cosmic proportions that bleeds into love. Nicely worded and with rhyme
September 6th, 2025 08:09
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of cosmic proportions that bleeds into love. Nicely worded and with rhyme
September 6th, 2025 08:09
Contradiction and dichotomy
2781 said:
There was a lot in that!
All I can say is, His glory goes one, and on, and on ,and on.......
May 15th, 2025 10:22
2781 said:
There was a lot in that!
All I can say is, His glory goes one, and on, and on ,and on.......
May 15th, 2025 10:22
Contradiction and dichotomy
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and thought provoking write, very enjoyable to read
May 15th, 2025 07:51
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and thought provoking write, very enjoyable to read
May 15th, 2025 07:51
Contradiction and dichotomy
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of opposites and their paradox. Very nicely worded and constructed. Thought provoking life and death one and the same.
May 15th, 2025 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of opposites and their paradox. Very nicely worded and constructed. Thought provoking life and death one and the same.
May 15th, 2025 06:32
Self Discovery
Cheeky Missy said:
If I may beg to differ, the creature cannot aspire to his creator, as shown by ours when He sends His prophet Jeremiah to the potter to observe. Yet your woven tale of chagrin and discovery is beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and an irresistible winsomeness. Thank you for sharing.
April 25th, 2025 17:45
Cheeky Missy said:
If I may beg to differ, the creature cannot aspire to his creator, as shown by ours when He sends His prophet Jeremiah to the potter to observe. Yet your woven tale of chagrin and discovery is beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and an irresistible winsomeness. Thank you for sharing.
April 25th, 2025 17:45
Self Discovery
sorenbarrett said:
A rhyme that comes in waves just as thoughts sometimes do. A very nice write
April 25th, 2025 15:41
sorenbarrett said:
A rhyme that comes in waves just as thoughts sometimes do. A very nice write
April 25th, 2025 15:41
Dreaming of a Fairy Tale Masquerading as a Phantom
Poetic Licence said:
Clever and very enjoyable piece of poetry
February 3rd, 2025 12:25
Poetic Licence said:
Clever and very enjoyable piece of poetry
February 3rd, 2025 12:25
Dreaming of a Fairy Tale Masquerading as a Phantom
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
February 3rd, 2025 10:28
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
February 3rd, 2025 10:28
The Scenic Beauty of Europe
Lorenz said:
Europe goes down in history by forgetting to flush the toilet !
January 10th, 2025 10:53
Lorenz said:
Europe goes down in history by forgetting to flush the toilet !
January 10th, 2025 10:53
Two Sides of the Same Coin
sorenbarrett said:
Many pearls here. Great line after great line. They say wisdom comes with age and so in this poem on aging it seems so. Nicely done
August 7th, 2024 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Many pearls here. Great line after great line. They say wisdom comes with age and so in this poem on aging it seems so. Nicely done
August 7th, 2024 04:46
Haiku\'s of advice
novaa said:
Conveys a good message. Thankyou for this beautiful read!
October 14th, 2023 10:04
novaa said:
Conveys a good message. Thankyou for this beautiful read!
October 14th, 2023 10:04
Holiday Haiku\'s
Christina8 said:
I am a christmas lover, I spend all year waiting for it! I just loved your haiku\'s!!
October 8th, 2023 09:26
Christina8 said:
I am a christmas lover, I spend all year waiting for it! I just loved your haiku\'s!!
October 8th, 2023 09:26
Holiday Haiku\'s
novaa said:
A nice depiction of a christmas day with the loved ones!
October 8th, 2023 08:57
novaa said:
A nice depiction of a christmas day with the loved ones!
October 8th, 2023 08:57
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