Comments received on poems by Mystery\'s Creation
Haiku\'s of advice
novaa said:
Conveys a good message. Thankyou for this beautiful read!
October 14th, 2023 10:04
novaa said:
Conveys a good message. Thankyou for this beautiful read!
October 14th, 2023 10:04
Holiday Haiku\'s
Christina8 said:
I am a christmas lover, I spend all year waiting for it! I just loved your haiku\'s!!
October 8th, 2023 09:26
Christina8 said:
I am a christmas lover, I spend all year waiting for it! I just loved your haiku\'s!!
October 8th, 2023 09:26
Holiday Haiku\'s
novaa said:
A nice depiction of a christmas day with the loved ones!
October 8th, 2023 08:57
novaa said:
A nice depiction of a christmas day with the loved ones!
October 8th, 2023 08:57
My Favorite Time of Year
Pop64 said:
The haiku format served well for this more than descriptive and enjoyable read!
October 5th, 2023 08:07
Pop64 said:
The haiku format served well for this more than descriptive and enjoyable read!
October 5th, 2023 08:07
Interspersed Haiku\'s
Christina8 said:
I really like these Haiku\'s! Romance first? Always. I see you are a fellow Michigan resident. Isn\'t it grand (except for the snow lol)
September 30th, 2023 10:43
Christina8 said:
I really like these Haiku\'s! Romance first? Always. I see you are a fellow Michigan resident. Isn\'t it grand (except for the snow lol)
September 30th, 2023 10:43
If I.....
Pop64 said:
Love the flow of this read and the directness, as it speaks to that someone special. Very well done!
September 22nd, 2023 07:39
Pop64 said:
Love the flow of this read and the directness, as it speaks to that someone special. Very well done!
September 22nd, 2023 07:39
My Angel\'s in Heaven
BlessedbyGod said:
I\'m so sorry about your mother and the attempted suicide.
I was contemplating it at one point in my life and the Only thing that saved me was God,and His love,I called out to him for help and He did,
Don\'t let this break you mystery, thank you for sharing this, it had to be very difficult,
You have a big family here on MPS, don\'t hesitate to reach out,
Love u brother, hang in there!
September 18th, 2023 10:46
BlessedbyGod said:
I\'m so sorry about your mother and the attempted suicide.
I was contemplating it at one point in my life and the Only thing that saved me was God,and His love,I called out to him for help and He did,
Don\'t let this break you mystery, thank you for sharing this, it had to be very difficult,
You have a big family here on MPS, don\'t hesitate to reach out,
Love u brother, hang in there!
September 18th, 2023 10:46
My Angel\'s in Heaven
Pop64 said:
A truly sad write, but clear in its delivery. The lines below really got to me. Awesome writing and expression of missing your mother.
For the Queen to my lowly pawn
The Doe to my helpless fawn
I must realize now had gone
As I struggle to confront the dawn
September 18th, 2023 09:42
Pop64 said:
A truly sad write, but clear in its delivery. The lines below really got to me. Awesome writing and expression of missing your mother.
For the Queen to my lowly pawn
The Doe to my helpless fawn
I must realize now had gone
As I struggle to confront the dawn
September 18th, 2023 09:42
Ruby\'s Eyes
Mystery\'s Creation said:
Hello.I hope you had a great Weekend and your Week\'s starting of well.
Thanks so much for your kindness!!
Have a great,safe and peaceful day and best of luck to you!!!!! 😊 ☺
September 11th, 2023 08:39
Mystery\'s Creation said:
Hello.I hope you had a great Weekend and your Week\'s starting of well.
Thanks so much for your kindness!!
Have a great,safe and peaceful day and best of luck to you!!!!! 😊 ☺
September 11th, 2023 08:39
Ruby\'s Eyes
BlessedbyGod said:
😥😥😥😥😢😢😢😢this reminds me of someone that used to be on MPS before she passed away idk of you might remember her Ruby Rae,
You could see the would in her eyes, may they rest peacefully in God\'s mighty arms😭😭😭😭
September 11th, 2023 07:26
BlessedbyGod said:
😥😥😥😥😢😢😢😢this reminds me of someone that used to be on MPS before she passed away idk of you might remember her Ruby Rae,
You could see the would in her eyes, may they rest peacefully in God\'s mighty arms😭😭😭😭
September 11th, 2023 07:26
The Star and the Angel
Pop64 said:
Absolutely beautiful in every way, from the rhyme, fluidity of the read and the imagery. Splendid!
September 1st, 2023 07:30
Pop64 said:
Absolutely beautiful in every way, from the rhyme, fluidity of the read and the imagery. Splendid!
September 1st, 2023 07:30
9-11
tallisman said:
Hi Ed, enjoyed this and your back catalogue as well, good rhyming schemes. Thanks for sharing.
August 21st, 2023 00:45
tallisman said:
Hi Ed, enjoyed this and your back catalogue as well, good rhyming schemes. Thanks for sharing.
August 21st, 2023 00:45
