Comments received on poems by Mystery\'s Creation



Silence
Tony36 said:

Awesome

October 31st, 2024 09:57

Silence
JuneM said:

Amazingly written my friend :)

October 31st, 2024 08:59

From This Day Forward
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 30th, 2024 09:28

Two Sides of the Same Coin
sorenbarrett said:

Many pearls here. Great line after great line. They say wisdom comes with age and so in this poem on aging it seems so. Nicely done

August 7th, 2024 04:46

The Essence of Intimacy
lunarchloedip said:

amazing!!

November 27th, 2023 10:05

The Essence of Intimacy
2781 said:

I liked it.

November 27th, 2023 09:30

Just What is Poetry?
novaa said:

Enjoyed the rhymings. Great read!

October 19th, 2023 09:39

Just What is Poetry?
Lorenz said:

In poetry I don\'t trust.

October 19th, 2023 08:18

Haiku\'s of advice
novaa said:

Conveys a good message. Thankyou for this beautiful read!

October 14th, 2023 10:04

Haiku\'s of Concern
Pop64 said:

Strong message in a well formatted write.

October 12th, 2023 08:26

Holiday Haiku\'s
Christina8 said:

I am a christmas lover, I spend all year waiting for it! I just loved your haiku\'s!!

October 8th, 2023 09:26

Holiday Haiku\'s
novaa said:

A nice depiction of a christmas day with the loved ones!

October 8th, 2023 08:57

Just my Opinion
NinjaGirl said:

Very nice!

October 7th, 2023 12:42

My Favorite Time of Year
Pop64 said:

The haiku format served well for this more than descriptive and enjoyable read!

October 5th, 2023 08:07

Interspersed Haiku\'s
Christina8 said:

I really like these Haiku\'s! Romance first? Always. I see you are a fellow Michigan resident. Isn\'t it grand (except for the snow lol)

September 30th, 2023 10:43

If I.....
Pop64 said:

Love the flow of this read and the directness, as it speaks to that someone special. Very well done!

September 22nd, 2023 07:39

My Angel\'s in Heaven
BlessedbyGod said:

I\'m so sorry about your mother and the attempted suicide.
I was contemplating it at one point in my life and the Only thing that saved me was God,and His love,I called out to him for help and He did,

Don\'t let this break you mystery, thank you for sharing this, it had to be very difficult,
You have a big family here on MPS, don\'t hesitate to reach out,
Love u brother, hang in there!

September 18th, 2023 10:46

My Angel\'s in Heaven
Pop64 said:

A truly sad write, but clear in its delivery. The lines below really got to me. Awesome writing and expression of missing your mother.
For the Queen to my lowly pawn

The Doe to my helpless fawn

I must realize now had gone

As I struggle to confront the dawn

September 18th, 2023 09:42

Ruby\'s Eyes
Mystery\'s Creation said:

Hello.I hope you had a great Weekend and your Week\'s starting of well.
Thanks so much for your kindness!!
Have a great,safe and peaceful day and best of luck to you!!!!! 😊 ☺

September 11th, 2023 08:39

Ruby\'s Eyes
BlessedbyGod said:

πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯😒😒😒😒this reminds me of someone that used to be on MPS before she passed away idk of you might remember her Ruby Rae,
You could see the would in her eyes, may they rest peacefully in God\'s mighty arms😭😭😭😭

September 11th, 2023 07:26

Path to Intimacy
vividvoid14 said:

amazing

September 5th, 2023 15:39

The Star and the Angel
Pop64 said:

Absolutely beautiful in every way, from the rhyme, fluidity of the read and the imagery. Splendid!

September 1st, 2023 07:30

Fables of Whispering Ghosts
2781 said:

Interesting.

August 21st, 2023 07:48

Us vs. Them
2781 said:

Power to you.

August 21st, 2023 07:47

9-11
tallisman said:

Hi Ed, enjoyed this and your back catalogue as well, good rhyming schemes. Thanks for sharing.

August 21st, 2023 00:45

Us vs. Them
2781 said:

I enjoyed your observations.
Feeling privileged!

August 19th, 2023 08:25

The Whipporwill
Doggerel Dave said:

Why +18?

August 16th, 2023 20:40

Looking at a Painting
orchidee said:

Good write Fred, erm, Mystery! lol.

August 11th, 2023 08:59