Comments received on poems by roxanna
What If?
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet this tells such a story. We never know what can lie in wait from the simplest gestures. We never really know who we\'re smiling at, or who\'s hand we may be are shaking. You describe this quite elegantly, for the pain that it caused. Good Write!
September 11th, 2023 14:22
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet this tells such a story. We never know what can lie in wait from the simplest gestures. We never really know who we\'re smiling at, or who\'s hand we may be are shaking. You describe this quite elegantly, for the pain that it caused. Good Write!
September 11th, 2023 14:22
Wanna Be Yours
Bella Shepard said:
All consuming love described so beautifully! Rare when you find it, a treasure for sure.
September 11th, 2023 14:17
Bella Shepard said:
All consuming love described so beautifully! Rare when you find it, a treasure for sure.
September 11th, 2023 14:17
Wanna Be Yours
Pop64 said:
A true devotion and testament to the love you must have for this person. Wonderfully descriptive and so full of emotion.
September 6th, 2023 08:10
Pop64 said:
A true devotion and testament to the love you must have for this person. Wonderfully descriptive and so full of emotion.
September 6th, 2023 08:10
What If?
L. B. Mek said:
\'The misty rain falls carelessly.
No idea of the mood it sets for me,\'
\'Because of a petty smile,
You pulled the world from beneath me\'
(it was never your smile at fault
it was merely, ill-fate\'s decree..)
eventually
pain fades, in its place our lessons
surface
we just have to learn to move past
our mistakes
investing in a past, pot marked by regrets
is a futile sacrifice of our precious
life...
(wonderful flow and imagery
another wonderful write
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
August 28th, 2023 04:28
L. B. Mek said:
\'The misty rain falls carelessly.
No idea of the mood it sets for me,\'
\'Because of a petty smile,
You pulled the world from beneath me\'
(it was never your smile at fault
it was merely, ill-fate\'s decree..)
eventually
pain fades, in its place our lessons
surface
we just have to learn to move past
our mistakes
investing in a past, pot marked by regrets
is a futile sacrifice of our precious
life...
(wonderful flow and imagery
another wonderful write
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
August 28th, 2023 04:28
Waiting
Bella Shepard said:
Waiting has so many connotations, and time inexplicable. Reading this poem I think you\'ve melded the two concepts together in how it makes you feel, and have expressed it beautifully. Good write!
August 25th, 2023 15:41
Bella Shepard said:
Waiting has so many connotations, and time inexplicable. Reading this poem I think you\'ve melded the two concepts together in how it makes you feel, and have expressed it beautifully. Good write!
August 25th, 2023 15:41
Odd
L. B. Mek said:
hopefully the graphic self harm imagery
is just to emphasises the despair
in your poetic voice..
outliers and outsiders
are two sides of the same coin
a flip of fate
and now the nerds rule Hollywood
that\'s not saying it\'s not hard
solitude and loneliness
can also be two sides of the same
painful coin...
I think our best option
is to try and survive long enough
for the universe to remember
we too, Matter!
(hope things get better, stay strong
thanks for sharing)
August 25th, 2023 03:53
L. B. Mek said:
hopefully the graphic self harm imagery
is just to emphasises the despair
in your poetic voice..
outliers and outsiders
are two sides of the same coin
a flip of fate
and now the nerds rule Hollywood
that\'s not saying it\'s not hard
solitude and loneliness
can also be two sides of the same
painful coin...
I think our best option
is to try and survive long enough
for the universe to remember
we too, Matter!
(hope things get better, stay strong
thanks for sharing)
August 25th, 2023 03:53
Like A Bomb
Pop64 said:
This reads with clarity and a sad truth for many. Keep in mind, that the quiet that sometimes comes before the reaper also comes before a new page is turned. That darkness is so often interpreted as an absence of light, but truth is that it is a combination of so much light. Welcome to the site!
August 24th, 2023 12:45
Pop64 said:
This reads with clarity and a sad truth for many. Keep in mind, that the quiet that sometimes comes before the reaper also comes before a new page is turned. That darkness is so often interpreted as an absence of light, but truth is that it is a combination of so much light. Welcome to the site!
August 24th, 2023 12:45
Like A Bomb
Bella Shepard said:
Welcome my friend to this open space, where we share and share alike. Your first poem here is of a very profound nature, and your verse eloquent. The subject is one that plagues so many, and you have found release in expression. I look forward to reading your future poems. Take care!
August 24th, 2023 09:11
Bella Shepard said:
Welcome my friend to this open space, where we share and share alike. Your first poem here is of a very profound nature, and your verse eloquent. The subject is one that plagues so many, and you have found release in expression. I look forward to reading your future poems. Take care!
August 24th, 2023 09:11
