Comments received on poems by falcon_mn
Habitación número cuatro
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful in its horror, death in a haunting dream with images to fill the mind and predict the future. A most haunting poem loved it.
April 6th, 2025 06:38
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful in its horror, death in a haunting dream with images to fill the mind and predict the future. A most haunting poem loved it.
April 6th, 2025 06:38
The river flows
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem in nature images. More than this it is a great metaphor of life itself. from birth to death returning to its origin. I love the images so well described and fit into the meaning of the metaphor. Great lines within the poem. (like a story from the mother\'s bosom it hums softly like the words to her child) A line that is not only descriptive but endearing and tender. A wonderful poem a fave. Oh by the way I truly love your Spanish poems. Although I do not feel very competent in Spanish I am fluent in Portuguese and so understand the major gist and appreciate the beauty of poems in another language. Thank you for sharing I truly admire a poet that can write in more than one language. I have tried a couple of times but am still reticent.
April 4th, 2025 17:26
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem in nature images. More than this it is a great metaphor of life itself. from birth to death returning to its origin. I love the images so well described and fit into the meaning of the metaphor. Great lines within the poem. (like a story from the mother\'s bosom it hums softly like the words to her child) A line that is not only descriptive but endearing and tender. A wonderful poem a fave. Oh by the way I truly love your Spanish poems. Although I do not feel very competent in Spanish I am fluent in Portuguese and so understand the major gist and appreciate the beauty of poems in another language. Thank you for sharing I truly admire a poet that can write in more than one language. I have tried a couple of times but am still reticent.
April 4th, 2025 17:26
El cielo
sorenbarrett said:
We all want the sky is true and expect the sky even though we are offered a hand in its place. Hands are empty and we expect the sky to hold more but to our surprise the sky is just as empty maybe more. Very well written
April 4th, 2025 14:57
sorenbarrett said:
We all want the sky is true and expect the sky even though we are offered a hand in its place. Hands are empty and we expect the sky to hold more but to our surprise the sky is just as empty maybe more. Very well written
April 4th, 2025 14:57
Ni siquiera sabes
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful love poem cast in dreams. Loved it
April 2nd, 2025 03:35
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful love poem cast in dreams. Loved it
April 2nd, 2025 03:35
Esperando la mañana
sorenbarrett said:
Using the symbolism of nature a beautiful love poem whose words raise and fall like the sun and the tide. Very nice
March 31st, 2025 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Using the symbolism of nature a beautiful love poem whose words raise and fall like the sun and the tide. Very nice
March 31st, 2025 04:56
Silencio
sorenbarrett said:
It is the wording of this poem that gives it beauty. Wonderful choices of phrasing well done
March 18th, 2025 19:54
sorenbarrett said:
It is the wording of this poem that gives it beauty. Wonderful choices of phrasing well done
March 18th, 2025 19:54
LA NOCHE ES MIA
sorenbarrett said:
Simlimente bonita y mas genio. Excuse my Spanish it is a humble third tongue after English and Portuguese. Never the less I enjoyed the poem as a fave
February 18th, 2025 07:14
sorenbarrett said:
Simlimente bonita y mas genio. Excuse my Spanish it is a humble third tongue after English and Portuguese. Never the less I enjoyed the poem as a fave
February 18th, 2025 07:14
Unborn baby girl
sorenbarrett said:
All the could be things in this world if we only knew. nicely written
August 23rd, 2024 12:16
sorenbarrett said:
All the could be things in this world if we only knew. nicely written
August 23rd, 2024 12:16
Unborn baby girl
magzzbaby said:
Made me tear up, it\'s never easy to let go of the unknown.
August 23rd, 2024 11:54
magzzbaby said:
Made me tear up, it\'s never easy to let go of the unknown.
August 23rd, 2024 11:54
Little red boots
sorenbarrett said:
This is a powerful poem that pulls at the heart strings using one of the most powerful tools that of a death of a child. Sad very sad.
August 21st, 2024 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
This is a powerful poem that pulls at the heart strings using one of the most powerful tools that of a death of a child. Sad very sad.
August 21st, 2024 05:09
A time lapse
sorenbarrett said:
This tells a story that somehow seems familiar as if I had been there. The imagery is wonderful and somehow beneath this evocative story is a metaphor
July 20th, 2024 11:01
sorenbarrett said:
This tells a story that somehow seems familiar as if I had been there. The imagery is wonderful and somehow beneath this evocative story is a metaphor
July 20th, 2024 11:01
Quien viene a mi sueño?
sorenbarrett said:
My Spanish only passable I still get the message from this poem well written in a very romantic manner. I particularly liked the last line. Very nice
July 18th, 2024 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
My Spanish only passable I still get the message from this poem well written in a very romantic manner. I particularly liked the last line. Very nice
July 18th, 2024 05:26
Train at six fifteen
Lorenz said:
I really like a lot this bottled philosophy !
January 31st, 2024 09:53
Lorenz said:
I really like a lot this bottled philosophy !
January 31st, 2024 09:53
Train at six fifteen
Tom Dylan said:
There\'s something really captivating about the feel of this poem. Really enjoyed.
January 31st, 2024 08:25
Tom Dylan said:
There\'s something really captivating about the feel of this poem. Really enjoyed.
January 31st, 2024 08:25
The river flows
John said:
Great poem... thanks...is there a couple of small spelling errors? Really sorry if not, just letting you know, I do it all the time myself
I really like a good ending too and you deliver...
January 29th, 2024 07:14
John said:
Great poem... thanks...is there a couple of small spelling errors? Really sorry if not, just letting you know, I do it all the time myself
I really like a good ending too and you deliver...
January 29th, 2024 07:14
Fig tree
Nicholas Browning said:
I love seeing people lend personification to nature.
Well done!
December 15th, 2023 05:28
Nicholas Browning said:
I love seeing people lend personification to nature.
Well done!
December 15th, 2023 05:28
paths
Parisab said:
A trail blazer of sorts and so brave-very descriptive-and I enjoyed that…
October 13th, 2023 17:55
Parisab said:
A trail blazer of sorts and so brave-very descriptive-and I enjoyed that…
October 13th, 2023 17:55
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