Comments received on poems by falcon_mn
Unborn baby girl
sorenbarrett said:
All the could be things in this world if we only knew. nicely written
August 23rd, 2024 12:16
sorenbarrett said:
All the could be things in this world if we only knew. nicely written
August 23rd, 2024 12:16
Unborn baby girl
magzzbaby said:
Made me tear up, it\'s never easy to let go of the unknown.
August 23rd, 2024 11:54
magzzbaby said:
Made me tear up, it\'s never easy to let go of the unknown.
August 23rd, 2024 11:54
Little red boots
sorenbarrett said:
This is a powerful poem that pulls at the heart strings using one of the most powerful tools that of a death of a child. Sad very sad.
August 21st, 2024 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
This is a powerful poem that pulls at the heart strings using one of the most powerful tools that of a death of a child. Sad very sad.
August 21st, 2024 05:09
A time lapse
sorenbarrett said:
This tells a story that somehow seems familiar as if I had been there. The imagery is wonderful and somehow beneath this evocative story is a metaphor
July 20th, 2024 11:01
sorenbarrett said:
This tells a story that somehow seems familiar as if I had been there. The imagery is wonderful and somehow beneath this evocative story is a metaphor
July 20th, 2024 11:01
Quien viene a mi sueño?
sorenbarrett said:
My Spanish only passable I still get the message from this poem well written in a very romantic manner. I particularly liked the last line. Very nice
July 18th, 2024 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
My Spanish only passable I still get the message from this poem well written in a very romantic manner. I particularly liked the last line. Very nice
July 18th, 2024 05:26
Train at six fifteen
Lorenz said:
I really like a lot this bottled philosophy !
January 31st, 2024 09:53
Lorenz said:
I really like a lot this bottled philosophy !
January 31st, 2024 09:53
Train at six fifteen
Tom Dylan said:
There\'s something really captivating about the feel of this poem. Really enjoyed.
January 31st, 2024 08:25
Tom Dylan said:
There\'s something really captivating about the feel of this poem. Really enjoyed.
January 31st, 2024 08:25
The river flows
John said:
Great poem... thanks...is there a couple of small spelling errors? Really sorry if not, just letting you know, I do it all the time myself
I really like a good ending too and you deliver...
January 29th, 2024 07:14
John said:
Great poem... thanks...is there a couple of small spelling errors? Really sorry if not, just letting you know, I do it all the time myself
I really like a good ending too and you deliver...
January 29th, 2024 07:14
Fig tree
Nicholas Browning said:
I love seeing people lend personification to nature.
Well done!
December 15th, 2023 05:28
Nicholas Browning said:
I love seeing people lend personification to nature.
Well done!
December 15th, 2023 05:28
paths
Parisab said:
A trail blazer of sorts and so brave-very descriptive-and I enjoyed that…
October 13th, 2023 17:55
Parisab said:
A trail blazer of sorts and so brave-very descriptive-and I enjoyed that…
October 13th, 2023 17:55
The wizard under my chalk
L. B. Mek said:
oh dear God bless you
for saving us from the bleak worst
I was reading with one eyes closed
waiting for the worst..
(if this was a creative endeavour
I laud your imagination
and attention to detail)
but, if as I fear this was
but an edited snippet
of your own experiences
I champion
your poetic chalk wizardry
\'STAY\' strong, brave poet
thank you for sharing
October 9th, 2023 03:25
L. B. Mek said:
oh dear God bless you
for saving us from the bleak worst
I was reading with one eyes closed
waiting for the worst..
(if this was a creative endeavour
I laud your imagination
and attention to detail)
but, if as I fear this was
but an edited snippet
of your own experiences
I champion
your poetic chalk wizardry
\'STAY\' strong, brave poet
thank you for sharing
October 9th, 2023 03:25
Trenches
L. B. Mek said:
of war fields, you speak
unmarked by history\'s battles
no, this
crimson scarring of earth
takes place
beyond public eyes, where
words and fists and worse
defile,
trusting unblemished hearts
curating
a generation\'s newly minted
warmongerers...
October 6th, 2023 07:49
L. B. Mek said:
of war fields, you speak
unmarked by history\'s battles
no, this
crimson scarring of earth
takes place
beyond public eyes, where
words and fists and worse
defile,
trusting unblemished hearts
curating
a generation\'s newly minted
warmongerers...
October 6th, 2023 07:49
Room number four
Parisab said:
Reads like a great 19th century novel by masters-so descriptive and I couldn\'t take my eyes off the details. Powerful piece…
October 3rd, 2023 18:01
Parisab said:
Reads like a great 19th century novel by masters-so descriptive and I couldn\'t take my eyes off the details. Powerful piece…
October 3rd, 2023 18:01
Cradle
Parisab said:
Powerful voice about the love of freedom and the motherland. No matter where your country, May it stand tall, without more cost of blood.
October 3rd, 2023 17:28
Parisab said:
Powerful voice about the love of freedom and the motherland. No matter where your country, May it stand tall, without more cost of blood.
October 3rd, 2023 17:28
Wasteland
Parisab said:
Wow it is a universal story and yet so personal to your family’s legacy-it must be hard to watch this-May you find other fertile places in your life…
October 2nd, 2023 23:46
Parisab said:
Wow it is a universal story and yet so personal to your family’s legacy-it must be hard to watch this-May you find other fertile places in your life…
October 2nd, 2023 23:46
Wasteland
Parisab said:
Mother Earth needs to be fertile or we have “stony graves” haunting poem, but I like it.
October 1st, 2023 22:33
Parisab said:
Mother Earth needs to be fertile or we have “stony graves” haunting poem, but I like it.
October 1st, 2023 22:33
Room number four
L. B. Mek said:
such vivid imagery
sad, that you express such despair
so clearly
I\'m sorry for what experiences
gave you this level of insight..
I imagine
\'the what-if I\'m next, fears\'
and the waiting were the worst..
thank you! for choosing to share
\'stay\' strong!
September 22nd, 2023 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
such vivid imagery
sad, that you express such despair
so clearly
I\'m sorry for what experiences
gave you this level of insight..
I imagine
\'the what-if I\'m next, fears\'
and the waiting were the worst..
thank you! for choosing to share
\'stay\' strong!
September 22nd, 2023 05:35
Highlander
L. B. Mek said:
great imagery
thanks for sharing
(heritage, can be a strength
or a weakness
like anything, what we do
with it
defines it...)
September 15th, 2023 06:37
L. B. Mek said:
great imagery
thanks for sharing
(heritage, can be a strength
or a weakness
like anything, what we do
with it
defines it...)
September 15th, 2023 06:37
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