Comments received on poems by falcon_mn
The wizard under my chalk
L. B. Mek said:
oh dear God bless you
for saving us from the bleak worst
I was reading with one eyes closed
waiting for the worst..
(if this was a creative endeavour
I laud your imagination
and attention to detail)
but, if as I fear this was
but an edited snippet
of your own experiences
I champion
your poetic chalk wizardry
\'STAY\' strong, brave poet
thank you for sharing
October 9th, 2023 03:25
L. B. Mek said:
oh dear God bless you
for saving us from the bleak worst
I was reading with one eyes closed
waiting for the worst..
(if this was a creative endeavour
I laud your imagination
and attention to detail)
but, if as I fear this was
but an edited snippet
of your own experiences
I champion
your poetic chalk wizardry
\'STAY\' strong, brave poet
thank you for sharing
October 9th, 2023 03:25
Trenches
L. B. Mek said:
of war fields, you speak
unmarked by history\'s battles
no, this
crimson scarring of earth
takes place
beyond public eyes, where
words and fists and worse
defile,
trusting unblemished hearts
curating
a generation\'s newly minted
warmongerers...
October 6th, 2023 07:49
L. B. Mek said:
of war fields, you speak
unmarked by history\'s battles
no, this
crimson scarring of earth
takes place
beyond public eyes, where
words and fists and worse
defile,
trusting unblemished hearts
curating
a generation\'s newly minted
warmongerers...
October 6th, 2023 07:49
Room number four
Parisab said:
Reads like a great 19th century novel by masters-so descriptive and I couldn\'t take my eyes off the details. Powerful piece…
October 3rd, 2023 18:01
Parisab said:
Reads like a great 19th century novel by masters-so descriptive and I couldn\'t take my eyes off the details. Powerful piece…
October 3rd, 2023 18:01
Cradle
Parisab said:
Powerful voice about the love of freedom and the motherland. No matter where your country, May it stand tall, without more cost of blood.
October 3rd, 2023 17:28
Parisab said:
Powerful voice about the love of freedom and the motherland. No matter where your country, May it stand tall, without more cost of blood.
October 3rd, 2023 17:28
Wasteland
Parisab said:
Wow it is a universal story and yet so personal to your family’s legacy-it must be hard to watch this-May you find other fertile places in your life…
October 2nd, 2023 23:46
Parisab said:
Wow it is a universal story and yet so personal to your family’s legacy-it must be hard to watch this-May you find other fertile places in your life…
October 2nd, 2023 23:46
Wasteland
Parisab said:
Mother Earth needs to be fertile or we have “stony graves” haunting poem, but I like it.
October 1st, 2023 22:33
Parisab said:
Mother Earth needs to be fertile or we have “stony graves” haunting poem, but I like it.
October 1st, 2023 22:33
Room number four
L. B. Mek said:
such vivid imagery
sad, that you express such despair
so clearly
I\'m sorry for what experiences
gave you this level of insight..
I imagine
\'the what-if I\'m next, fears\'
and the waiting were the worst..
thank you! for choosing to share
\'stay\' strong!
September 22nd, 2023 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
such vivid imagery
sad, that you express such despair
so clearly
I\'m sorry for what experiences
gave you this level of insight..
I imagine
\'the what-if I\'m next, fears\'
and the waiting were the worst..
thank you! for choosing to share
\'stay\' strong!
September 22nd, 2023 05:35
Highlander
L. B. Mek said:
great imagery
thanks for sharing
(heritage, can be a strength
or a weakness
like anything, what we do
with it
defines it...)
September 15th, 2023 06:37
L. B. Mek said:
great imagery
thanks for sharing
(heritage, can be a strength
or a weakness
like anything, what we do
with it
defines it...)
September 15th, 2023 06:37
Small yellow car
2781 said:
I found I had never really experienced love until I held my newborn daughter for the first time.
I can\'t imagine the grief of losing such a gift.
My sincerest condolences.
Isaiah: the righteous are taken and no one considered they taken from the evil to come.
I don\'t want to preach, maybe some comfort.
September 14th, 2023 20:48
2781 said:
I found I had never really experienced love until I held my newborn daughter for the first time.
I can\'t imagine the grief of losing such a gift.
My sincerest condolences.
Isaiah: the righteous are taken and no one considered they taken from the evil to come.
I don\'t want to preach, maybe some comfort.
September 14th, 2023 20:48
Wreath
Elle King said:
I’m so sorry for your loss. What a beautiful tribute to someone gone too soon.
September 13th, 2023 19:21
Elle King said:
I’m so sorry for your loss. What a beautiful tribute to someone gone too soon.
September 13th, 2023 19:21
Bumblebee
L. B. Mek said:
very creative
really well written, thanks for sharing
September 1st, 2023 04:25
L. B. Mek said:
very creative
really well written, thanks for sharing
September 1st, 2023 04:25
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