Comments received on poems by Fy_



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novaa said:

Simply beautiful!

October 17th, 2023 06:17

Absence a rosy
Soman Ragavan said:

My comments on the poem \"Absence of a rosy” by Fy_
This is a poem of sadness and wishing for the loved one to return. Notice the words showing despair or regrets : forgot the colors; in the dark; the only color you like now is black; when I need you; should have been; you with the frame; me with the cage; distinct stage; jail system.
Although the poem has just eight lines, they are full of sorrow.
What is the difference between the frame and the cage ? Anyway, cage represents jailing, preventing movements or freedom.
What is “distinct” ? It probably means separate.
Soman Ragavan. 1 September, 2023. //
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September 1st, 2023 06:36

Absence a rosy
MissD said:

beatiful and painful..loved it

August 31st, 2023 05:41