Comments received on poems by Jowi
I Loved My Friend
Cassie58 said:
A little poem of loss. How hurtful it can be when friendships end, however the reason. You convey sadness here and this reader felt it.
December 18th, 2023 14:42
Cassie58 said:
A little poem of loss. How hurtful it can be when friendships end, however the reason. You convey sadness here and this reader felt it.
December 18th, 2023 14:42
My World End.
Nicholas Browning said:
\"Every new beginning comes from some other beginning\'s end\" - Semisonic, \"Closing Time\"
December 14th, 2023 06:47
Nicholas Browning said:
\"Every new beginning comes from some other beginning\'s end\" - Semisonic, \"Closing Time\"
December 14th, 2023 06:47
The beauty of Becoming
Pop64 said:
A wonderful message in this piece, that speaks of strength despite adversity. You\'ve conveyed a beautiful well received meaning within a beautiful write.
October 16th, 2023 07:54
Pop64 said:
A wonderful message in this piece, that speaks of strength despite adversity. You\'ve conveyed a beautiful well received meaning within a beautiful write.
October 16th, 2023 07:54
The beauty of Becoming
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent. Between pain and nothingness, always chose pain, at least you know you are alive. Well done.
October 16th, 2023 00:22
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent. Between pain and nothingness, always chose pain, at least you know you are alive. Well done.
October 16th, 2023 00:22
The beauty of Becoming
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Micro and now a macro.. I liked that✨
October 15th, 2023 11:41
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Micro and now a macro.. I liked that✨
October 15th, 2023 11:41
The beauty of Becoming
novaa said:
\'I am the beauty and the becoming is me\'...Beautifully penned!
October 15th, 2023 10:16
novaa said:
\'I am the beauty and the becoming is me\'...Beautifully penned!
October 15th, 2023 10:16
To Kiss a Wound
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(thanks for sharing, dear poet)
September 29th, 2023 06:47
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(thanks for sharing, dear poet)
September 29th, 2023 06:47
To Kiss a Wound
Pop64 said:
A beautiful sentiment of honest love with the hopes that the recipient not so much acknowledge but rather accept and use the passed on love for mending the self. Beautiful!
September 29th, 2023 05:30
Pop64 said:
A beautiful sentiment of honest love with the hopes that the recipient not so much acknowledge but rather accept and use the passed on love for mending the self. Beautiful!
September 29th, 2023 05:30
Three Thoughts 💭
Pop64 said:
Wow, this write started out on a happy now, the possibility of something, the re-occurring 3 thoughts, amazing concept. But then this piece turned sad, yet stayed with the concept of 3 thoughts. The poem style being free-form allowed the reader to truly understand the phases, the time. Very well written.
September 28th, 2023 07:34
Pop64 said:
Wow, this write started out on a happy now, the possibility of something, the re-occurring 3 thoughts, amazing concept. But then this piece turned sad, yet stayed with the concept of 3 thoughts. The poem style being free-form allowed the reader to truly understand the phases, the time. Very well written.
September 28th, 2023 07:34
Ask One More Time
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A beautiful and much needed message! Thank you for sharing!
September 28th, 2023 05:13
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A beautiful and much needed message! Thank you for sharing!
September 28th, 2023 05:13
Ask One More Time
Teddy.15 said:
Such a simple question that can really change the day of a person. Are you ok? Today I\'m very well thank you 💗 beautifully lined.
September 28th, 2023 05:09
Teddy.15 said:
Such a simple question that can really change the day of a person. Are you ok? Today I\'m very well thank you 💗 beautifully lined.
September 28th, 2023 05:09
Waves 🌊
Teddy.15 said:
This is very powerful and may I also say beautiful. We have to take back the power otherwise the waves drown us. ❤️
September 27th, 2023 10:57
Teddy.15 said:
This is very powerful and may I also say beautiful. We have to take back the power otherwise the waves drown us. ❤️
September 27th, 2023 10:57
