SILLY HEART
Meera Mere said:

You expressed it so beautifully.
Cherish the memories and move on.
Set your heart free.
Coz heart can be silly without any limits on its delusions.

March 16th, 2024 08:18

Long Lost Smile
Soman Ragavan said:

My comments on the poem \"Long lost smile” by illusions
The poetess asks herself the reason for her change from a smiling mood to a negative one. The words “driving herself” might imply that the poetess herself is responsible for the situation. Note the words “cruel world.” Thus, she must have been facing obstacles for some time. Crying does not seem to help. She is clearly seeking a solution for the problem. “When will it end” : she wants the misery to end. She points out that she was jovial in the past. She ends with an optimistic wish that all will work out for the better.
Do keep up your spirits, friend. Best wishes. Keep posting on this site. Soman Ragavan. 10 September, 2023. Website : www.somanragavan.org //
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September 10th, 2023 09:49