Comments received on poems by Elle King
In The Hollow Of My Chest
peto said:
Short sharp with a great flow
Thoroughly enjoyed the read
November 26th, 2023 20:22
peto said:
Short sharp with a great flow
Thoroughly enjoyed the read
November 26th, 2023 20:22
Insomnia
Pop64 said:
So many times I wake up, possibly worried about the family, work, etc. Sometimes even with a line that might start or be part of a new poem or story. However, time awake, when supposed to be sleeping can be draining, as this write seems to convey. Great clarity!
September 13th, 2023 11:28
Pop64 said:
So many times I wake up, possibly worried about the family, work, etc. Sometimes even with a line that might start or be part of a new poem or story. However, time awake, when supposed to be sleeping can be draining, as this write seems to convey. Great clarity!
September 13th, 2023 11:28
She is Gone
Teddy.15 said:
So very touched by this, and I can also relate immensely even having the bravery to share with others shows your courage, I don\'t know at what point you will actually stop hurting, but I can promise you that one day you will. đź’–
September 12th, 2023 13:46
Teddy.15 said:
So very touched by this, and I can also relate immensely even having the bravery to share with others shows your courage, I don\'t know at what point you will actually stop hurting, but I can promise you that one day you will. đź’–
September 12th, 2023 13:46
She is Gone
Pop64 said:
Such a sad write, but so heart wrenchingly clear. My prayers to you.
September 12th, 2023 08:30
Pop64 said:
Such a sad write, but so heart wrenchingly clear. My prayers to you.
September 12th, 2023 08:30
I Wish
Pop64 said:
As humans, we see our own flaws but not so much those of others, hence the grass is always greener on the other side. Truth is, we can wish, but it\'s up to us to make things happen. Terrific flow and rhyme to this thought provoking piece.
September 11th, 2023 14:08
Pop64 said:
As humans, we see our own flaws but not so much those of others, hence the grass is always greener on the other side. Truth is, we can wish, but it\'s up to us to make things happen. Terrific flow and rhyme to this thought provoking piece.
September 11th, 2023 14:08
I Wish
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"I wish” by Elle King
You say : “I wish my hair were black…”
This is amazing… Many people with black hair wish it were blonde !…
We always seek that which we don’t have. That which we don’t have attracts us so much. People with straight hair wish to have curly ones…
Have a nice day…
Soman Ragavan 11 September, 2023
September 11th, 2023 09:18
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"I wish” by Elle King
You say : “I wish my hair were black…”
This is amazing… Many people with black hair wish it were blonde !…
We always seek that which we don’t have. That which we don’t have attracts us so much. People with straight hair wish to have curly ones…
Have a nice day…
Soman Ragavan 11 September, 2023
September 11th, 2023 09:18
Gone
peto said:
Welcome Elle
Great debut
Got a song vibe to it
Very smooth
Title says gone
I say you have arrived
Looking forward to reading more from you
September 10th, 2023 09:03
peto said:
Welcome Elle
Great debut
Got a song vibe to it
Very smooth
Title says gone
I say you have arrived
Looking forward to reading more from you
September 10th, 2023 09:03
Creep
peto said:
Welcome Elle
Great start
Nice format
Keep writing and watch the healing creep in
Looking forward to reading more from you
September 6th, 2023 10:28
peto said:
Welcome Elle
Great start
Nice format
Keep writing and watch the healing creep in
Looking forward to reading more from you
September 6th, 2023 10:28
