Comments received on poems by houchins.linda
With Eyes So Dim
Pop64 said:
I love the message of this write and the rhyming scheme you incorporated into it. However, I had a stumble reading the last 2 lines and would like to offer these, \"My trust in Him, it will reside
And carry on with eyes so wide.\" As this would leave me to believe your eyes and heart would be open to Him, more than dimmed. Just an offering from a fellow poet.
September 13th, 2023 12:45
Pop64 said:
I love the message of this write and the rhyming scheme you incorporated into it. However, I had a stumble reading the last 2 lines and would like to offer these, \"My trust in Him, it will reside
And carry on with eyes so wide.\" As this would leave me to believe your eyes and heart would be open to Him, more than dimmed. Just an offering from a fellow poet.
September 13th, 2023 12:45
The Girl in the Chain Mail Dress
houchins.linda said:
Thank you very much. I appreciate your comment.
September 9th, 2023 09:16
houchins.linda said:
Thank you very much. I appreciate your comment.
September 9th, 2023 09:16
The Girl in the Chain Mail Dress
peto said:
Tremendous rhyme and flow
Superb debut
Looking forward to reading more from you
September 9th, 2023 04:44
peto said:
Tremendous rhyme and flow
Superb debut
Looking forward to reading more from you
September 9th, 2023 04:44
The Girl in the Chain Mail Dress
Miss_Dreamer said:
I love how clear the image is you create with this poem. I feel like I can see her, like I truly know her. Good stuff! Keep writing
September 8th, 2023 17:35
Miss_Dreamer said:
I love how clear the image is you create with this poem. I feel like I can see her, like I truly know her. Good stuff! Keep writing
September 8th, 2023 17:35
The Girl in the Chain Mail Dress
Pop64 said:
The rhyme and imagery of this write are wonderful. This leaves me to interpret this as her wearing either a costume to impress or armor to protect. They\'re almost the same. A good write leaves a reader to ponder, just as you have here.
September 8th, 2023 13:09
Pop64 said:
The rhyme and imagery of this write are wonderful. This leaves me to interpret this as her wearing either a costume to impress or armor to protect. They\'re almost the same. A good write leaves a reader to ponder, just as you have here.
September 8th, 2023 13:09
