Comments received on poems by marywritesx



Black Girl Magic
Bobby O said:

Nice entry. It sends and speaks of confidence and power

September 8th, 2023 23:40

Black Girl Magic
Pop64 said:

I found this to be empowering for she who reads, as it provides clarity and so much truth. While reading, I got held up at one point that I\'d like to offer advise for, but you do not have to take it. The part \"You are a black girl with love in your heart
You are a black girl with art in your part\" might sound better as \"You are a black girl with love in your heart
You are a black girl, a true vision of art\", but otherwise an exceptional write and read.

September 8th, 2023 12:59