Comments received on poems by marywritesx
Black Girl Magic
Bobby O said:
Nice entry. It sends and speaks of confidence and power
September 8th, 2023 23:40
Bobby O said:
Nice entry. It sends and speaks of confidence and power
September 8th, 2023 23:40
Black Girl Magic
Pop64 said:
I found this to be empowering for she who reads, as it provides clarity and so much truth. While reading, I got held up at one point that I\'d like to offer advise for, but you do not have to take it. The part \"You are a black girl with love in your heart
You are a black girl with art in your part\" might sound better as \"You are a black girl with love in your heart
You are a black girl, a true vision of art\", but otherwise an exceptional write and read.
September 8th, 2023 12:59
Pop64 said:
I found this to be empowering for she who reads, as it provides clarity and so much truth. While reading, I got held up at one point that I\'d like to offer advise for, but you do not have to take it. The part \"You are a black girl with love in your heart
You are a black girl with art in your part\" might sound better as \"You are a black girl with love in your heart
You are a black girl, a true vision of art\", but otherwise an exceptional write and read.
September 8th, 2023 12:59