Comments received on poems by gongmu
Beg to differ, Rohingya—the forgotten People
cynthiavkelly said:
I liked the part about the blue dot.
September 25th, 2023 19:46
cynthiavkelly said:
I liked the part about the blue dot.
September 25th, 2023 19:46
Write again
GeekSusie said:
Thanks for sharing your touching poem. It beautifully depicts your struggles and resonates on many levels. Being trapped in societal expectations and judgments, especially with ADHD and other health issues, can be isolating. I admire your candor in writing about it.
Your words remind me that society values traits that not everyone has or can easily demonstrate. However, your determination to \"pick at what life could not stop from healing\" shows your strength. You are more than a resume or diagnosis—you can grow, adapt, and contribute in your own way.
Even though life isn\'t fair and the playing field isn\'t level, your efforts to find your place in the world show an inner strength that\'s unmeasurable.
While the journey may be difficult, your poem suggests you\'re not defeated. As you journey, may you find strength, resilience, and light in the darkness.
September 23rd, 2023 09:57
GeekSusie said:
Thanks for sharing your touching poem. It beautifully depicts your struggles and resonates on many levels. Being trapped in societal expectations and judgments, especially with ADHD and other health issues, can be isolating. I admire your candor in writing about it.
Your words remind me that society values traits that not everyone has or can easily demonstrate. However, your determination to \"pick at what life could not stop from healing\" shows your strength. You are more than a resume or diagnosis—you can grow, adapt, and contribute in your own way.
Even though life isn\'t fair and the playing field isn\'t level, your efforts to find your place in the world show an inner strength that\'s unmeasurable.
While the journey may be difficult, your poem suggests you\'re not defeated. As you journey, may you find strength, resilience, and light in the darkness.
September 23rd, 2023 09:57