Comments received on poems by Rathna Senthil
Its Funny How You Just Find Things
L. B. Mek said:
(a wonderful read, thanks for sharing)
it just takes a second
a look-back - glimpse
a meeting of eyes
a tender brush of lips
and every frog
is left feeling like a prince
ready to worship, his Queen..
(ermm
or a King
or a Queen and a Queen
or erm
a King and a King
and erm whatever
pond combination
I might have missed
in between..)
lol
(covering my basis, never
I am not petrified of the PC
tyranny.. not very, at least..)
October 2nd, 2023 06:34
L. B. Mek said:
(a wonderful read, thanks for sharing)
it just takes a second
a look-back - glimpse
a meeting of eyes
a tender brush of lips
and every frog
is left feeling like a prince
ready to worship, his Queen..
(ermm
or a King
or a Queen and a Queen
or erm
a King and a King
and erm whatever
pond combination
I might have missed
in between..)
lol
(covering my basis, never
I am not petrified of the PC
tyranny.. not very, at least..)
October 2nd, 2023 06:34