Comments received on poems by Carly



Eternal Epiphanies
Teddy.15 said:

Wow 😳 stunning. I know a couple who were soulmates and then one died this reminds.me of their love. Kudos ❀️

October 5th, 2023 12:34

Quiet Yearnings
Christina8 said:

This is a stunning piece of poetry, I was in awe of the imagery of your pain. It really has to be awful to be without the one you love. Just wonderful!!

October 3rd, 2023 16:57

Quiet Yearnings
Carly said:

Aw Teddy thank you so much for reading and for such a lovely comment πŸ’•

October 3rd, 2023 13:22

Quiet Yearnings
Teddy.15 said:

An incredibly beautiful and rhymeful poem, you held her hand until the end. Absolutely stunning and you should feel incredibly humbled to have been able to do it. I found myself right inside the imagery the pain and emotion equally felt. An absolutely beautiful piece of poetry. ❀️

October 3rd, 2023 11:29

Autumnal Witherings
rhmn_7 said:

I will be entering my favorite season with your poem, good work!

October 3rd, 2023 06:58

Autumnal Witherings
Parisab said:

Glad to meet you, Carly. Your poem connects beautifully with nature. These words are rhythmic by nature like the gradual changes of this season. Great hidden meaning about the impermanence of time.

October 3rd, 2023 01:03

Autumnal Witherings
Carly said:

Aww same, autumn and winter just has such a beautiful feel about it doesn’t it?

Thank you so much for taking your time to read πŸ€—

October 2nd, 2023 15:29

Autumnal Witherings
Christina8 said:

Welcome! I just wanted to say I found your poem to be remarkable, great cadence and rhymes!! Looking forward to more..

October 2nd, 2023 12:51

Autumnal Witherings
Teddy.15 said:

A very warm welcome to MPS dear Carly, what an autumn treat you bring in your stunning poem, I also see the autumn of ones life in this. I absolutely love every line
autumn is my favourite season. 🍁🍁🍁🌹

October 2nd, 2023 12:34

Autumnal Witherings
Pop64 said:

The rhythm in this read is simply wonderful, as is the imagery you create so well with your words. Love this!

October 2nd, 2023 12:10

Autumnal Witherings
Lorenz said:

I like a lot the musical elegance of this modest and half-toned text .

October 2nd, 2023 12:00

Autumnal Witherings
peto said:

This is a stunning debut Carly
Rhyme rhythm flow all immaculate
Looking forward to reading more from you
Superb

October 2nd, 2023 11:58