Comments received on poems by dtrusss
Churning Human Soil
Ma5on said:
Ok it’s a crazy train ride this one but I’m happy to book a ticket and travel with you on this one.
Maybe we are the Aliens?
M
November 7th, 2023 17:24
Ma5on said:
Ok it’s a crazy train ride this one but I’m happy to book a ticket and travel with you on this one.
Maybe we are the Aliens?
M
November 7th, 2023 17:24
Churning Human Soil
Yassin Tamam said:
i wake up everyday with a burden on my chest concluded of that poem of yours, immaculate presentation of our daily dread. but we do move and carry on eventually for a better tmrw i guess
November 7th, 2023 17:17
Yassin Tamam said:
i wake up everyday with a burden on my chest concluded of that poem of yours, immaculate presentation of our daily dread. but we do move and carry on eventually for a better tmrw i guess
November 7th, 2023 17:17
Five Minute Insanity
Sunsetmet said:
We fgeel life truly has meaning but to me the way I feel it could be hazardous to our way of thinking times to me reflect on so much tragedy but tragic can turn to love of magic stay with your well being. There is a light that shines within I hope this helps don\'t care what others think you should stick to your own beliefs Sunshine always
November 7th, 2023 08:43
Sunsetmet said:
We fgeel life truly has meaning but to me the way I feel it could be hazardous to our way of thinking times to me reflect on so much tragedy but tragic can turn to love of magic stay with your well being. There is a light that shines within I hope this helps don\'t care what others think you should stick to your own beliefs Sunshine always
November 7th, 2023 08:43
Five Minute Insanity
Teddy.15 said:
Calculation of reflection. This is wonderful. I too think about it all. Sometimes wouldn\'t it be easy to sit on a wall and just watch it all go by. 🤗
November 7th, 2023 01:07
Teddy.15 said:
Calculation of reflection. This is wonderful. I too think about it all. Sometimes wouldn\'t it be easy to sit on a wall and just watch it all go by. 🤗
November 7th, 2023 01:07
Five Minute Insanity
Ma5on said:
You’re looking for the answer but I’m not sure you have decided what the question really is yet!
I like the mishap approach and murky atmosphere. No clarity here; who needs it anyway!
Misshapen thought-driven poem!
Works for me!
M
November 6th, 2023 17:00
Ma5on said:
You’re looking for the answer but I’m not sure you have decided what the question really is yet!
I like the mishap approach and murky atmosphere. No clarity here; who needs it anyway!
Misshapen thought-driven poem!
Works for me!
M
November 6th, 2023 17:00
Corrupt Stardust
Thomas W Case said:
Superb. Reminiscent of Burroughs if he weren\'t so Burroughs. Fantastic writing.
October 31st, 2023 16:36
Thomas W Case said:
Superb. Reminiscent of Burroughs if he weren\'t so Burroughs. Fantastic writing.
October 31st, 2023 16:36
