Comments received on poems by thoughtsFromB4
There Is An Angel Who Sits Upon My Shoulder Who Goes By The Name Of Death
HolesInMyJeans said:
“ darkest shadows of my brain\'s path-illogical landscape.” - profound. Clever brain. Enjoyed it.
June 1st, 2024 00:18
HolesInMyJeans said:
“ darkest shadows of my brain\'s path-illogical landscape.” - profound. Clever brain. Enjoyed it.
June 1st, 2024 00:18
There Is An Angel Who Sits Upon My Shoulder Who Goes By The Name Of Death
Doggerel Dave said:
I truly hope that someone somewhere will gain comfort or understand that they are not alone in this.
I’d also like to think that you/they one day, hopefully soon will find the strength to divert attention from these inner struggles, outward to a big bad sometimes beautiful world out there.
Good luck anyway.
May 31st, 2024 21:05
Doggerel Dave said:
I truly hope that someone somewhere will gain comfort or understand that they are not alone in this.
I’d also like to think that you/they one day, hopefully soon will find the strength to divert attention from these inner struggles, outward to a big bad sometimes beautiful world out there.
Good luck anyway.
May 31st, 2024 21:05
And Still, The Sun Will Rise
RockGoddess said:
I love this! I could feel the pain and the hope in it and the line that keeps repeating \"the sun will rise\" reads like a mantra and I can imagine telling myself this as I am working out or going through some struggle in life. This is truly fantastic work and you should be incredibly proud of this poem! This is truly one of my favorites! I want to put this in my room!
May 9th, 2024 19:17
RockGoddess said:
I love this! I could feel the pain and the hope in it and the line that keeps repeating \"the sun will rise\" reads like a mantra and I can imagine telling myself this as I am working out or going through some struggle in life. This is truly fantastic work and you should be incredibly proud of this poem! This is truly one of my favorites! I want to put this in my room!
May 9th, 2024 19:17
A Piece of Peace
Doggerel Dave said:
Peace, Brother.
Come on , let\'s see more of, what I expect to be enigmatic pieces....
Enjoy your stay here. This place works best with participation and response (although we seem to be approaching the festive season and a few regulars have taken a break.....)
December 10th, 2023 01:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Peace, Brother.
Come on , let\'s see more of, what I expect to be enigmatic pieces....
Enjoy your stay here. This place works best with participation and response (although we seem to be approaching the festive season and a few regulars have taken a break.....)
December 10th, 2023 01:32
