Comments received on poems by thoughtsFromB4



For Tommy
Dan Williams said:

Genuine and uplifting, nice work.

September 1st, 2024 00:44

For Tommy
Tony36 said:

Love it

August 30th, 2024 18:46

For Tommy
Cheeky Missy said:

Eloquent, poignant, evocative, tender and charmingly bittersweet. Very lovely. Thank you for sharing. I cannot manage to write about my late mother who was my best friend because I guess it hurts too much even after nearly a decade.

August 30th, 2024 18:43

Home
sorenbarrett said:

True it is and well penned. Hope we all find it.

August 29th, 2024 05:46

Home
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 28th, 2024 19:30

Home
Kenzie said:

Very Nice

August 28th, 2024 18:09

Over There
sorenbarrett said:

Nice internal as well as ending rhyme

August 24th, 2024 18:46

Cosmic Questions
Dan Williams said:

Ah, life\'s basic questions nicely put. Thank you for this.

August 24th, 2024 00:15

Cosmic Questions
sorenbarrett said:

Beautifully worded and with such a marvelous message that deserves reflection. Splendid write.

August 23rd, 2024 06:10

Cosmic Questions
Maplespal said:

Personally I would ask where my \"I\" starts.
Other then that, not much else needed to live this life.

August 23rd, 2024 05:37

Cosmic Questions
Cassie58 said:

Beautiful thoughts here. I have been a stargazer since childhood and have had many a conversation going inside my head. Relatable and lovely. Thank you.

August 23rd, 2024 04:33

There Is An Angel Who Sits Upon My Shoulder Who Goes By The Name Of Death
HolesInMyJeans said:

ā€œ darkest shadows of my brain\'s path-illogical landscape.ā€ - profound. Clever brain. Enjoyed it.

June 1st, 2024 00:18

There Is An Angel Who Sits Upon My Shoulder Who Goes By The Name Of Death
Doggerel Dave said:

I truly hope that someone somewhere will gain comfort or understand that they are not alone in this.
Iā€™d also like to think that you/they one day, hopefully soon will find the strength to divert attention from these inner struggles, outward to a big bad sometimes beautiful world out there.
Good luck anyway.


May 31st, 2024 21:05

And Still, The Sun Will Rise
RockGoddess said:

I love this! I could feel the pain and the hope in it and the line that keeps repeating \"the sun will rise\" reads like a mantra and I can imagine telling myself this as I am working out or going through some struggle in life. This is truly fantastic work and you should be incredibly proud of this poem! This is truly one of my favorites! I want to put this in my room!

May 9th, 2024 19:17

And Still, The Sun Will Rise
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

May 9th, 2024 17:49

A Piece of Peace
Doggerel Dave said:

Peace, Brother.
Come on , let\'s see more of, what I expect to be enigmatic pieces....
Enjoy your stay here. This place works best with participation and response (although we seem to be approaching the festive season and a few regulars have taken a break.....)

December 10th, 2023 01:32