Comments received on poems by Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi



rain is falling  like drunk acrobat...
Tony36 said:

Awesome

September 16th, 2024 06:38

night butterflies  think they\'re in the garden...
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

September 10th, 2024 14:44

a dreamer boy sculpts bird\'s embryos from the dough and throws up...
ChrisLyn🕊 said:

Loved the write, but didn’t quite understand. Could you explain

August 28th, 2024 12:36

in places of darkness the fern is quiet like an old man in places of darkness...
sorenbarrett said:

A metaphor indeed. From birth to death we need to listen. Nicely done

August 27th, 2024 12:48

lightning is coming like a woman with a blue past...
sorenbarrett said:

Nicely written and beautiful this poem is thought provoking

August 26th, 2024 09:15

meteor was that dwarf leading in a night lane...
sorenbarrett said:

Enigmatic this poem holds more beneath the surface. Full of great images.

August 24th, 2024 09:31

venous night flows on the white breasts of god...
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 23rd, 2024 14:28

venous night flows on the white breasts of god...
2781 said:

It felt like a sad ending but I could be wrong?

August 23rd, 2024 09:45

venous night flows on the white breasts of god...
sorenbarrett said:

This wonderful write of night and dreams of gods and all they bring set so surreal in clouds of slumber. What a wonderful feel.

August 23rd, 2024 08:42

stars become embryos of nobody\'s parents
2781 said:

And the stars of heaven fell unto the earth, even as a fig tree casteth her untimely figs, when she is shaken of a mighty wind.

January 6th, 2024 12:25

man was hunting an endless fox
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

December 31st, 2023 12:59