Comments received on poems by Ife



The Bumble Bee
Cheeky Missy said:

I like it VERY much! The image with it is so perfect, of course. And the entire way you described those darling large fuzzy buzzing insects was delightful.....your similes were interesting to consider, and you painted it so well, that I was outside in the warm summertime again! Your touch of end-rhyming was very pleasant. Keep on composing!

December 18th, 2010 11:49