Comments received on poems by Muhammad the Bully
LIFE OF A MUSLIM
Nicholas Browning said:
It\'s very interesting to see the writing style of two different ethnicities coincide like this. Interesting story sir.
July 11th, 2017 21:09
Nicholas Browning said:
It\'s very interesting to see the writing style of two different ethnicities coincide like this. Interesting story sir.
July 11th, 2017 21:09
I lie too
Stephen.Sapaugh said:
I encourage you to continue putting your emotions and feelings into your words. You described very candidly the emotions that go on inside of you, and the guilt that you feel when you lie. I only can direct you to the fact that there is only way out of that guilt that I have found, and that is faith hope and trust in Jesus Christ the savior of the Earth, and the God man who died for all of our lies. He nailed them on the cross for us, and in him we are forgiven of our transgressions. I am not looking to be preachy, but this is what this poem elicited in me. Because just like you I have lied, and been enthroned in that web. And just like you Christ forgives me of them. Keep writing, and keep working out your emotions through pen and ink. That is what we should do if so called to do.
July 5th, 2017 17:55
Stephen.Sapaugh said:
I encourage you to continue putting your emotions and feelings into your words. You described very candidly the emotions that go on inside of you, and the guilt that you feel when you lie. I only can direct you to the fact that there is only way out of that guilt that I have found, and that is faith hope and trust in Jesus Christ the savior of the Earth, and the God man who died for all of our lies. He nailed them on the cross for us, and in him we are forgiven of our transgressions. I am not looking to be preachy, but this is what this poem elicited in me. Because just like you I have lied, and been enthroned in that web. And just like you Christ forgives me of them. Keep writing, and keep working out your emotions through pen and ink. That is what we should do if so called to do.
July 5th, 2017 17:55
I lie too
Poetic Dan said:
Really liked this!
I tell no lie
have been beaten with that line
Your just a kid telling lies
He\'s never hit you
He only drinks sometimes
14 it came to walk with my truth
It\'s raw and ugly, to some beautiful
But I tell no lie
This from me is the truth
July 5th, 2017 17:18
Poetic Dan said:
Really liked this!
I tell no lie
have been beaten with that line
Your just a kid telling lies
He\'s never hit you
He only drinks sometimes
14 it came to walk with my truth
It\'s raw and ugly, to some beautiful
But I tell no lie
This from me is the truth
July 5th, 2017 17:18
I lie too
Nicholas Browning said:
We all do. Sometimes we don\'t want to see the most obvious and simple things. We lie to ourselves, to hopefully draw out the feeling of being content with ourselves. It\'s a pain, and I\'m not quite sure if there\'s a way to fix it, but all we can do is try.
July 5th, 2017 16:59
Nicholas Browning said:
We all do. Sometimes we don\'t want to see the most obvious and simple things. We lie to ourselves, to hopefully draw out the feeling of being content with ourselves. It\'s a pain, and I\'m not quite sure if there\'s a way to fix it, but all we can do is try.
July 5th, 2017 16:59
Loyalty died
Poetic Dan said:
Nice controlled rant I feel
Loyalty to brothers
Compassion for mothers
Empathy for the past
Truth be only truth
For me the only thing that\'s needed, is no more secrets and manipulation.
Plus as someone who has no choice but to be a commoner, any royal familys should be in a zoo.
June 23rd, 2017 14:55
Poetic Dan said:
Nice controlled rant I feel
Loyalty to brothers
Compassion for mothers
Empathy for the past
Truth be only truth
For me the only thing that\'s needed, is no more secrets and manipulation.
Plus as someone who has no choice but to be a commoner, any royal familys should be in a zoo.
June 23rd, 2017 14:55
Loyalty died
thehippiepoet said:
I really like how this seems unplanned and almost like a train of thought of the speaker. It\'s down to earth
June 23rd, 2017 09:14
thehippiepoet said:
I really like how this seems unplanned and almost like a train of thought of the speaker. It\'s down to earth
June 23rd, 2017 09:14
Loyalty died
thehippiepoet said:
I really like how this seems unplanned and almost like a train of thought of the speaker. It\'s down to earth
June 23rd, 2017 09:14
thehippiepoet said:
I really like how this seems unplanned and almost like a train of thought of the speaker. It\'s down to earth
June 23rd, 2017 09:14
\"What has this come to\"
lastbadbrad6 said:
are yu saying we shouldnt love god until we see him
June 23rd, 2017 05:47
lastbadbrad6 said:
are yu saying we shouldnt love god until we see him
June 23rd, 2017 05:47
Same issues
poetboy123 said:
This poem has a great message that I think everyone should read.
January 29th, 2017 16:13
poetboy123 said:
This poem has a great message that I think everyone should read.
January 29th, 2017 16:13
Same issues
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Nice rocking poem interesting to read. I like hat u mentioned the Quran. so whats yor fav verse?Thumbs up.
Pls do comment on my latest poem too, u r most welcome to.
January 29th, 2017 02:39
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Nice rocking poem interesting to read. I like hat u mentioned the Quran. so whats yor fav verse?Thumbs up.
Pls do comment on my latest poem too, u r most welcome to.
January 29th, 2017 02:39
Death upon life
Muhammad the Bully said:
meaning life and death are the same thing because once we all die death has to die also and you guys can follow me on Instagram if you want at muu_22_bravo and SnapChat xmuuxbravox
April 14th, 2016 02:46
Muhammad the Bully said:
meaning life and death are the same thing because once we all die death has to die also and you guys can follow me on Instagram if you want at muu_22_bravo and SnapChat xmuuxbravox
April 14th, 2016 02:46
