Comments received on poems by Melody Votoire
WINDOWS
sorenbarrett said:
It sounds like quite a personal journey often lost and with no direction. Well done
June 20th, 2025 09:48
sorenbarrett said:
It sounds like quite a personal journey often lost and with no direction. Well done
June 20th, 2025 09:48
THE ONE THAT GOT AWAY
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully written story of what was, what could of been, was and is still desired, it takes a long tye journey in a beautiful way, enjoyed the read
June 20th, 2025 07:31
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully written story of what was, what could of been, was and is still desired, it takes a long tye journey in a beautiful way, enjoyed the read
June 20th, 2025 07:31
THE ONE THAT GOT AWAY
sorenbarrett said:
A most touching poem of what love used to be, could be, we wished it would be and what it never was. Images of sand castles in the air with white knights that are only dissipating clouds. Time is a great story teller. Well written this poem pulled at my heart strings
June 20th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
A most touching poem of what love used to be, could be, we wished it would be and what it never was. Images of sand castles in the air with white knights that are only dissipating clouds. Time is a great story teller. Well written this poem pulled at my heart strings
June 20th, 2025 04:38
The Eyes of Domestic Abuse
Doggerel Dave said:
Very honest.... I\'ll gladly tell you that \'you\' in the poem isn\'t me - and in all probability there are plenty of others it\'s not either.
March 2nd, 2024 21:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Very honest.... I\'ll gladly tell you that \'you\' in the poem isn\'t me - and in all probability there are plenty of others it\'s not either.
March 2nd, 2024 21:16
The Eyes of Domestic Abuse
David Wakeling said:
This certainly is a well written piece.Unfortunately the subject is all too common these days.Well done.
March 2nd, 2024 17:17
David Wakeling said:
This certainly is a well written piece.Unfortunately the subject is all too common these days.Well done.
March 2nd, 2024 17:17
The Eyes of Domestic Abuse
peto said:
Welcome
A fantastic debut
\"Finally agonisingly takes it\'s claws out of your back\"
At least now although carrying the scar
You won\'t get anymore
Loved the honesty of your feelings and thoughts
Looking forward to reading more from you
March 2nd, 2024 14:48
peto said:
Welcome
A fantastic debut
\"Finally agonisingly takes it\'s claws out of your back\"
At least now although carrying the scar
You won\'t get anymore
Loved the honesty of your feelings and thoughts
Looking forward to reading more from you
March 2nd, 2024 14:48
