Comments received on poems by Swarovski20
IMAGES AND IMAGINATION
Swarovski20 said:
I too live without TV in fact when I first came here there was no electricity, your comment: mine in Italian, manage to translate.
June 16th, 2025 04:15
Swarovski20 said:
I too live without TV in fact when I first came here there was no electricity, your comment: mine in Italian, manage to translate.
June 16th, 2025 04:15
IMAGES AND IMAGINATION
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gives feelings of assurance that humans are just that because of spontaneity that machines don\'t have. A lovely write of humanity. For some reason my T.V. just turned on spontaneously lol
June 15th, 2025 07:12
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gives feelings of assurance that humans are just that because of spontaneity that machines don\'t have. A lovely write of humanity. For some reason my T.V. just turned on spontaneously lol
June 15th, 2025 07:12
THE RED LIPSTICK WITNESS MARCH 2025
sorenbarrett said:
Food and passion so easily intertwined. A poem of hunger. Most lovely
June 9th, 2025 06:13
sorenbarrett said:
Food and passion so easily intertwined. A poem of hunger. Most lovely
June 9th, 2025 06:13
ENDING UP IN DOWNING STREET BY CHANCE 2018.
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow! I love, love, love this one! Diary pages are so delicious and fascinating. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightful poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing.
June 8th, 2025 15:25
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow! I love, love, love this one! Diary pages are so delicious and fascinating. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightful poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing.
June 8th, 2025 15:25
ENDING UP IN DOWNING STREET BY CHANCE 2018.
Poetic Licence said:
I like the freedom of this, it just unravelled as the write did when you through, enjoyed the read
June 3rd, 2025 06:53
Poetic Licence said:
I like the freedom of this, it just unravelled as the write did when you through, enjoyed the read
June 3rd, 2025 06:53
ENDING UP IN DOWNING STREET BY CHANCE 2018.
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is like free floating thoughts for a moment in time. Most interesting
June 3rd, 2025 06:12
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is like free floating thoughts for a moment in time. Most interesting
June 3rd, 2025 06:12
MY PERSONALITY: - my colours
Cheeky Missy said:
Yet the colorless expense still lingers, void of the promised rainbow which haunted the suggestion, and the speaker is satisfied in themselves, the wealth or lack the emperor\'s new clothes, and I the child too young to know it is not nakedness. Fascinating and excellently rendered with lovely imagery and a curious poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 1st, 2025 11:26
Cheeky Missy said:
Yet the colorless expense still lingers, void of the promised rainbow which haunted the suggestion, and the speaker is satisfied in themselves, the wealth or lack the emperor\'s new clothes, and I the child too young to know it is not nakedness. Fascinating and excellently rendered with lovely imagery and a curious poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 1st, 2025 11:26
MY PERSONALITY: - my colours
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a Lovely write, of processing thoughts and beliefs as they travel through life and their mind, I really like the last line, loving and valueing ones self is so important, enjoyed the read
June 1st, 2025 07:43
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a Lovely write, of processing thoughts and beliefs as they travel through life and their mind, I really like the last line, loving and valueing ones self is so important, enjoyed the read
June 1st, 2025 07:43
MY PERSONALITY: - my colours
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is a diary of loneliness, despair, regret and final forgiveness. So many powerful revelations I don\'t feel it is appropriate fpr me to comment in detail.I did find some of the poem disturbing but completely honest. I applaud the courage needed to be so honest
June 1st, 2025 06:45
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is a diary of loneliness, despair, regret and final forgiveness. So many powerful revelations I don\'t feel it is appropriate fpr me to comment in detail.I did find some of the poem disturbing but completely honest. I applaud the courage needed to be so honest
June 1st, 2025 06:45
MY PERSONALITY: - my colours
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in passing thoughts follows the flow of consciousness through the mind. A lovely flow of a stream to the present from the past.
June 1st, 2025 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in passing thoughts follows the flow of consciousness through the mind. A lovely flow of a stream to the present from the past.
June 1st, 2025 05:57
ALBY&SY years 1999-2004
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seemed to change as memories change and drift from the reality. A creative and lovely write
May 27th, 2025 10:46
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seemed to change as memories change and drift from the reality. A creative and lovely write
May 27th, 2025 10:46
‘’HIDDEN FIGURES’’ FILM EMOTIONS 2016
Soman Ragavan said:
“She shouted very high. Shouted: To the NEGROS toilets- very far away….”
They made separate toilets for Blacks and Whites. But they saw not that the sewerage pipes joined up at some point….
During apartheid in South Africa, there were separate wards in hospitals for Whites, Blacks and other communities. When a patient arrived, they had to be directed according to their race. There was one case where the race was not clear. Staff took so long to decide that the patient died on the trolley…
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May 25th, 2025 07:39
Soman Ragavan said:
“She shouted very high. Shouted: To the NEGROS toilets- very far away….”
They made separate toilets for Blacks and Whites. But they saw not that the sewerage pipes joined up at some point….
During apartheid in South Africa, there were separate wards in hospitals for Whites, Blacks and other communities. When a patient arrived, they had to be directed according to their race. There was one case where the race was not clear. Staff took so long to decide that the patient died on the trolley…
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May 25th, 2025 07:39
‘’HIDDEN FIGURES’’ FILM EMOTIONS 2016
sorenbarrett said:
The piece reflects the same message of the film (nicely summarized) of discrimination toward race and gender and one could take it further toward any minority difference. The world changes slowly in social areas compared to its rapid change in technology. A reflection that merits consideration and its implications.
May 25th, 2025 06:22
sorenbarrett said:
The piece reflects the same message of the film (nicely summarized) of discrimination toward race and gender and one could take it further toward any minority difference. The world changes slowly in social areas compared to its rapid change in technology. A reflection that merits consideration and its implications.
May 25th, 2025 06:22
THE PRE-ANNOUNCED BOMBING- WHILE SWIMMING 1992.
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write of the battle of justice against greed and of honor over submission. Nicely done
May 23rd, 2025 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write of the battle of justice against greed and of honor over submission. Nicely done
May 23rd, 2025 08:57
MY EDUCATIONAL PATH
sorenbarrett said:
A rather extensive set of memoirs from young childhood to present in story style. Nicely done
May 21st, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
A rather extensive set of memoirs from young childhood to present in story style. Nicely done
May 21st, 2025 04:42
JOB WITH THE INDIANS PART I
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling of impersonality of the computer age. Cold as the dried ink on the contract. As much feeling as dark spots on a screen. Suspense and tension as to the outcome. All conveyed very well in this piece. Nicely done.
May 20th, 2025 06:25
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling of impersonality of the computer age. Cold as the dried ink on the contract. As much feeling as dark spots on a screen. Suspense and tension as to the outcome. All conveyed very well in this piece. Nicely done.
May 20th, 2025 06:25
SHALL WE REMAIN OR SHALL WE LEAVE: June 2016 REFERENDUM
sorenbarrett said:
A write that outlines political ramifications and decisions. Nice write
May 13th, 2025 15:24
sorenbarrett said:
A write that outlines political ramifications and decisions. Nice write
May 13th, 2025 15:24
IT IS NOT BEAUTIFUL WHAT IS BEAUTIFUL BUT IT IS BEAUTIFUL WHAT YOU LIKE: NOT FOR ME!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Philosophical to its core. Well done on this piece. What is beautiful? What is Ugliness? And how do we actually tell the two apart? Love this poem for its depth, its use of Italian, and its structure. All stood out to me. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
May 4th, 2025 18:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Philosophical to its core. Well done on this piece. What is beautiful? What is Ugliness? And how do we actually tell the two apart? Love this poem for its depth, its use of Italian, and its structure. All stood out to me. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
May 4th, 2025 18:22
IT IS NOT BEAUTIFUL WHAT IS BEAUTIFUL BUT IT IS BEAUTIFUL WHAT YOU LIKE: NOT FOR ME!
sorenbarrett said:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder but then why is there so much agreement on beauty and ugliness? A most philosophical write. Nicely done
May 4th, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder but then why is there so much agreement on beauty and ugliness? A most philosophical write. Nicely done
May 4th, 2025 05:00
THE RAINY EASTER MONDAY DAY!
Swarovski20 said:
A point to stress out, many gaps in societies, have the main responsability of local authorities and govenment. Very rich companies can do more in some cases.
April 27th, 2025 11:33
Swarovski20 said:
A point to stress out, many gaps in societies, have the main responsability of local authorities and govenment. Very rich companies can do more in some cases.
April 27th, 2025 11:33
THE RAINY EASTER MONDAY DAY!
sorenbarrett said:
So many feelings of the present day hypocrisy of a society that preaches unity and helping others yet everyone feels isolated. Nicely done
April 21st, 2025 14:46
sorenbarrett said:
So many feelings of the present day hypocrisy of a society that preaches unity and helping others yet everyone feels isolated. Nicely done
April 21st, 2025 14:46
Fernando: temporary experience and emotions of a former colleague 2019-2021
sorenbarrett said:
A work with a sudden beginning and sudden end that leaves me wondering just as I do with many acquaintances I have had. A very real feel to this piece. Lovely
April 8th, 2025 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
A work with a sudden beginning and sudden end that leaves me wondering just as I do with many acquaintances I have had. A very real feel to this piece. Lovely
April 8th, 2025 06:18
ON A SAINT FAUSTINO’ S DAY IN 2025
Poetic Licence said:
This was a very enjoyable history lesson, i never had one of those at school !!!, interesting and enjoyable read
February 16th, 2025 06:30
Poetic Licence said:
This was a very enjoyable history lesson, i never had one of those at school !!!, interesting and enjoyable read
February 16th, 2025 06:30
ON A SAINT FAUSTINO’ S DAY IN 2025
sorenbarrett said:
That is what I love about these readings, I learn something new. Never too old to learn. Lovely
February 16th, 2025 06:25
sorenbarrett said:
That is what I love about these readings, I learn something new. Never too old to learn. Lovely
February 16th, 2025 06:25
ON A SAINT FAUSTINO’ S DAY IN 2025
Swarovski20 said:
l\'amore di coppia come espanzione dell\'io.
February 16th, 2025 05:46
Swarovski20 said:
l\'amore di coppia come espanzione dell\'io.
February 16th, 2025 05:46
ON A SAINT FAUSTINO’ S DAY IN 2025
arqios said:
That’s an event and phenomenon that was never part of my experience. Could’ve been quite interesting! 🙏🏻🕊
February 16th, 2025 05:45
arqios said:
That’s an event and phenomenon that was never part of my experience. Could’ve been quite interesting! 🙏🏻🕊
February 16th, 2025 05:45
FIRST LOVE POEM AND LAST ONES.
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of isolation and lonliness in this poem that mingles with acceptance and overflows into reality and the realization that love is just a word a phase that comes for some goes for other and doesn\'t exist for the rest. A steril seed expected to sprout that with age becomes nothing more than a shell. Your use of biographical speech enhances the feeling making it more credible and real. This poem pulls on feelings of compasion and a changing of view as to what love is and is not. Brilliant!
February 11th, 2025 08:38
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of isolation and lonliness in this poem that mingles with acceptance and overflows into reality and the realization that love is just a word a phase that comes for some goes for other and doesn\'t exist for the rest. A steril seed expected to sprout that with age becomes nothing more than a shell. Your use of biographical speech enhances the feeling making it more credible and real. This poem pulls on feelings of compasion and a changing of view as to what love is and is not. Brilliant!
February 11th, 2025 08:38
THE SUPER HANDSOME HALF BASTARD AND HALF NOBLE MAN.
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
February 9th, 2025 10:45
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
February 9th, 2025 10:45
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