Comments received on poems by Swarovski20
ALBY&SY years 1999-2004
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seemed to change as memories change and drift from the reality. A creative and lovely write
May 27th, 2025 10:46
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seemed to change as memories change and drift from the reality. A creative and lovely write
May 27th, 2025 10:46
‘’HIDDEN FIGURES’’ FILM EMOTIONS 2016
Soman Ragavan said:
“She shouted very high. Shouted: To the NEGROS toilets- very far away….”
They made separate toilets for Blacks and Whites. But they saw not that the sewerage pipes joined up at some point….
During apartheid in South Africa, there were separate wards in hospitals for Whites, Blacks and other communities. When a patient arrived, they had to be directed according to their race. There was one case where the race was not clear. Staff took so long to decide that the patient died on the trolley…
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May 25th, 2025 07:39
Soman Ragavan said:
“She shouted very high. Shouted: To the NEGROS toilets- very far away….”
They made separate toilets for Blacks and Whites. But they saw not that the sewerage pipes joined up at some point….
During apartheid in South Africa, there were separate wards in hospitals for Whites, Blacks and other communities. When a patient arrived, they had to be directed according to their race. There was one case where the race was not clear. Staff took so long to decide that the patient died on the trolley…
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May 25th, 2025 07:39
‘’HIDDEN FIGURES’’ FILM EMOTIONS 2016
sorenbarrett said:
The piece reflects the same message of the film (nicely summarized) of discrimination toward race and gender and one could take it further toward any minority difference. The world changes slowly in social areas compared to its rapid change in technology. A reflection that merits consideration and its implications.
May 25th, 2025 06:22
sorenbarrett said:
The piece reflects the same message of the film (nicely summarized) of discrimination toward race and gender and one could take it further toward any minority difference. The world changes slowly in social areas compared to its rapid change in technology. A reflection that merits consideration and its implications.
May 25th, 2025 06:22
THE PRE-ANNOUNCED BOMBING- WHILE SWIMMING 1992.
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write of the battle of justice against greed and of honor over submission. Nicely done
May 23rd, 2025 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write of the battle of justice against greed and of honor over submission. Nicely done
May 23rd, 2025 08:57
MY EDUCATIONAL PATH
sorenbarrett said:
A rather extensive set of memoirs from young childhood to present in story style. Nicely done
May 21st, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
A rather extensive set of memoirs from young childhood to present in story style. Nicely done
May 21st, 2025 04:42
JOB WITH THE INDIANS PART I
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling of impersonality of the computer age. Cold as the dried ink on the contract. As much feeling as dark spots on a screen. Suspense and tension as to the outcome. All conveyed very well in this piece. Nicely done.
May 20th, 2025 06:25
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling of impersonality of the computer age. Cold as the dried ink on the contract. As much feeling as dark spots on a screen. Suspense and tension as to the outcome. All conveyed very well in this piece. Nicely done.
May 20th, 2025 06:25
SHALL WE REMAIN OR SHALL WE LEAVE: June 2016 REFERENDUM
sorenbarrett said:
A write that outlines political ramifications and decisions. Nice write
May 13th, 2025 15:24
sorenbarrett said:
A write that outlines political ramifications and decisions. Nice write
May 13th, 2025 15:24
IT IS NOT BEAUTIFUL WHAT IS BEAUTIFUL BUT IT IS BEAUTIFUL WHAT YOU LIKE: NOT FOR ME!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Philosophical to its core. Well done on this piece. What is beautiful? What is Ugliness? And how do we actually tell the two apart? Love this poem for its depth, its use of Italian, and its structure. All stood out to me. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
May 4th, 2025 18:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Philosophical to its core. Well done on this piece. What is beautiful? What is Ugliness? And how do we actually tell the two apart? Love this poem for its depth, its use of Italian, and its structure. All stood out to me. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
May 4th, 2025 18:22
IT IS NOT BEAUTIFUL WHAT IS BEAUTIFUL BUT IT IS BEAUTIFUL WHAT YOU LIKE: NOT FOR ME!
sorenbarrett said:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder but then why is there so much agreement on beauty and ugliness? A most philosophical write. Nicely done
May 4th, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder but then why is there so much agreement on beauty and ugliness? A most philosophical write. Nicely done
May 4th, 2025 05:00
THE RAINY EASTER MONDAY DAY!
Swarovski20 said:
A point to stress out, many gaps in societies, have the main responsability of local authorities and govenment. Very rich companies can do more in some cases.
April 27th, 2025 11:33
Swarovski20 said:
A point to stress out, many gaps in societies, have the main responsability of local authorities and govenment. Very rich companies can do more in some cases.
April 27th, 2025 11:33
THE RAINY EASTER MONDAY DAY!
sorenbarrett said:
So many feelings of the present day hypocrisy of a society that preaches unity and helping others yet everyone feels isolated. Nicely done
April 21st, 2025 14:46
sorenbarrett said:
So many feelings of the present day hypocrisy of a society that preaches unity and helping others yet everyone feels isolated. Nicely done
April 21st, 2025 14:46
Fernando: temporary experience and emotions of a former colleague 2019-2021
sorenbarrett said:
A work with a sudden beginning and sudden end that leaves me wondering just as I do with many acquaintances I have had. A very real feel to this piece. Lovely
April 8th, 2025 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
A work with a sudden beginning and sudden end that leaves me wondering just as I do with many acquaintances I have had. A very real feel to this piece. Lovely
April 8th, 2025 06:18
THE DEEP DREAM REVEALING SOMETHING 4TH March 2025
sorenbarrett said:
Passion rules a part of out brain but the frontal lobes get in the way. The subconscious verses the conscious. A very descriptive write
March 9th, 2025 08:11
sorenbarrett said:
Passion rules a part of out brain but the frontal lobes get in the way. The subconscious verses the conscious. A very descriptive write
March 9th, 2025 08:11
ON A SAINT FAUSTINO’ S DAY IN 2025
Poetic Licence said:
This was a very enjoyable history lesson, i never had one of those at school !!!, interesting and enjoyable read
February 16th, 2025 06:30
Poetic Licence said:
This was a very enjoyable history lesson, i never had one of those at school !!!, interesting and enjoyable read
February 16th, 2025 06:30
ON A SAINT FAUSTINO’ S DAY IN 2025
sorenbarrett said:
That is what I love about these readings, I learn something new. Never too old to learn. Lovely
February 16th, 2025 06:25
sorenbarrett said:
That is what I love about these readings, I learn something new. Never too old to learn. Lovely
February 16th, 2025 06:25
ON A SAINT FAUSTINO’ S DAY IN 2025
Swarovski20 said:
l\'amore di coppia come espanzione dell\'io.
February 16th, 2025 05:46
Swarovski20 said:
l\'amore di coppia come espanzione dell\'io.
February 16th, 2025 05:46
ON A SAINT FAUSTINO’ S DAY IN 2025
arqios said:
That’s an event and phenomenon that was never part of my experience. Could’ve been quite interesting! 🙏🏻🕊
February 16th, 2025 05:45
arqios said:
That’s an event and phenomenon that was never part of my experience. Could’ve been quite interesting! 🙏🏻🕊
February 16th, 2025 05:45
FIRST LOVE POEM AND LAST ONES.
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of isolation and lonliness in this poem that mingles with acceptance and overflows into reality and the realization that love is just a word a phase that comes for some goes for other and doesn\'t exist for the rest. A steril seed expected to sprout that with age becomes nothing more than a shell. Your use of biographical speech enhances the feeling making it more credible and real. This poem pulls on feelings of compasion and a changing of view as to what love is and is not. Brilliant!
February 11th, 2025 08:38
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of isolation and lonliness in this poem that mingles with acceptance and overflows into reality and the realization that love is just a word a phase that comes for some goes for other and doesn\'t exist for the rest. A steril seed expected to sprout that with age becomes nothing more than a shell. Your use of biographical speech enhances the feeling making it more credible and real. This poem pulls on feelings of compasion and a changing of view as to what love is and is not. Brilliant!
February 11th, 2025 08:38
THE SUPER HANDSOME HALF BASTARD AND HALF NOBLE MAN.
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
February 9th, 2025 10:45
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
February 9th, 2025 10:45
THE SUPER HANDSOME HALF BASTARD AND HALF NOBLE MAN.
Swarovski20 said:
the quoted part is taked from the book.
February 9th, 2025 05:15
Swarovski20 said:
the quoted part is taked from the book.
February 9th, 2025 05:15
HELENA R
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful tribute to an inspirational and amazing woman. Helena Rubenstein. What an incredible life she had. A most informative write. Thank you for sharing. I can see a great deal of work was put into this piece.
February 5th, 2025 19:30
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful tribute to an inspirational and amazing woman. Helena Rubenstein. What an incredible life she had. A most informative write. Thank you for sharing. I can see a great deal of work was put into this piece.
February 5th, 2025 19:30
THE SEXUAL REVOLUTION AND MORE REVOLUTIONS IN THE 17TH CENTURY ENGLAND
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you i have enjoyed having a bit of a history lesson and reading this piece.
February 4th, 2025 15:16
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you i have enjoyed having a bit of a history lesson and reading this piece.
February 4th, 2025 15:16
THE SEXUAL REVOLUTION AND MORE REVOLUTIONS IN THE 17TH CENTURY ENGLAND
Tony36 said:
Great write
February 4th, 2025 14:52
Tony36 said:
Great write
February 4th, 2025 14:52
THE BOOKS I HAVE BEEN INTO THROUGH THE YEARS.
sorenbarrett said:
Impressive! I have read some of these does the second part to come include Dostoievski, Thomas Hardy, Lao Tzu, Sun Tzu, Tolstoy, Melvile or Plato? Oh by the way I did like Hemingway and Steinbeck even Oliver Wendel Holmes. Books contain knowledge of the past sent on for future generations. A most wonderful write revealing layers of learning contained inside of you.
February 2nd, 2025 07:16
sorenbarrett said:
Impressive! I have read some of these does the second part to come include Dostoievski, Thomas Hardy, Lao Tzu, Sun Tzu, Tolstoy, Melvile or Plato? Oh by the way I did like Hemingway and Steinbeck even Oliver Wendel Holmes. Books contain knowledge of the past sent on for future generations. A most wonderful write revealing layers of learning contained inside of you.
February 2nd, 2025 07:16
THE BOOKS I HAVE BEEN INTO THROUGH THE YEARS.
Swarovski20 said:
Reading based on recommendations does not lead further. Reading only what you think you need to explore in that particular time. If you want to read it after many years a second and a third time, a new message is underneath, that you did not grasp ealier.
February 2nd, 2025 05:41
Swarovski20 said:
Reading based on recommendations does not lead further. Reading only what you think you need to explore in that particular time. If you want to read it after many years a second and a third time, a new message is underneath, that you did not grasp ealier.
February 2nd, 2025 05:41
PATHETIC SCENARIO 17th JANUARY 2025
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
A wonderfully funny
and uplifting write!! 🤣
Very witty and a
treat to recite!! 🤩
Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹 Thad
January 29th, 2025 10:23
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
A wonderfully funny
and uplifting write!! 🤣
Very witty and a
treat to recite!! 🤩
Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹 Thad
January 29th, 2025 10:23
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