A girl washed up on the beach
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS CHAZ - For sharing an excellent poem. Elegant in it structure - replete with Rhyme and Rhythm but so so tragic in its content. Tragedy is it happens somewhere every day. Our Ladies are so so vulnerable it sometimes makes me ashamed of being a Man. Such a waste of a beautiful life ~ Left naked on a postcard shore - RIP - Thanks BRIAN

June 2nd, 2016 17:47

Holy
dfharding said:

I see Holy in a new light, one that raises the spirit and does not raise questions. Thank you.

April 24th, 2016 08:24

Earth and Air
Severus Alexander said:

Let them know, the earth is dying~



March 29th, 2016 10:50

Graveyard
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI CHAZZ - Loved the poem because - despite the topic - it was full of rhyme and rhythm and asked the ultimate question. We will all die some day but just like you I want to know "What will my future hold - before I go underground ?" I love cemeteries - great places for a "photography project" Thanks for sharing - BRIAN

March 23rd, 2016 10:44

The Burning Carousel
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI CHAZ - I'M BRIANSODES !
Love your poem - rhyming couplets give it great rhythm. I'm a performance poet and it is great to recite out loud - it has the rhythm of a Carousel. I love Carousels and ride them whenever I can. They are nostalgic and unique - everyone different. This is a sad poem of a real event but also a comment on "Modern Society" which does not value "Heritage". What it does not burn it razes to the ground and replaces beauty with mindless and meaningless modernism. Thanks for sharing and caring - it made me cry ! BRIAN

March 22nd, 2016 06:00

The Empty House
Lady K said:

This is great! It really spoke to me!

March 12th, 2016 17:50