Comments received on poems by chaz2296



A girl washed up on the beach
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS CHAZ - For sharing an excellent poem. Elegant in it structure - replete with Rhyme and Rhythm but so so tragic in its content. Tragedy is it happens somewhere every day. Our Ladies are so so vulnerable it sometimes makes me ashamed of being a Man. Such a waste of a beautiful life ~ Left naked on a postcard shore - RIP - Thanks BRIAN

June 2nd, 2016 17:47

Funny old man moaning
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS CHAZ - I love Granddad poems - they always bring back memories of extended families. We don't miss our relatives until they've gone, Well structured poem replete with rhyme & rhythm. Thanks for sharing - BRIAN

April 29th, 2016 18:05

Holy
dfharding said:

I see Holy in a new light, one that raises the spirit and does not raise questions. Thank you.

April 24th, 2016 08:24

Holy
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks CHAZ - In God's sight we and everything around us is HOLY. Personally I treat everyone and everything as HOLY - BRIAN

April 23rd, 2016 16:50

Earth and Air
Severus Alexander said:

Let them know, the earth is dying~



March 29th, 2016 10:50

Graveyard
LaRose said:

Loved this chaz. But for the grace of God we may or maynot be alone at that final moment, but even if are with death is a loney thing to bear.

March 23rd, 2016 17:47

Graveyard
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI CHAZZ - Loved the poem because - despite the topic - it was full of rhyme and rhythm and asked the ultimate question. We will all die some day but just like you I want to know "What will my future hold - before I go underground ?" I love cemeteries - great places for a "photography project" Thanks for sharing - BRIAN

March 23rd, 2016 10:44

The Burning Carousel
MsMermaid said:

Your words painted a picture... a mixture of nostalgia and tragedy. A well crafted poem indeed.

March 22nd, 2016 07:11

The Burning Carousel
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI CHAZ - I'M BRIANSODES !
Love your poem - rhyming couplets give it great rhythm. I'm a performance poet and it is great to recite out loud - it has the rhythm of a Carousel. I love Carousels and ride them whenever I can. They are nostalgic and unique - everyone different. This is a sad poem of a real event but also a comment on "Modern Society" which does not value "Heritage". What it does not burn it razes to the ground and replaces beauty with mindless and meaningless modernism. Thanks for sharing and caring - it made me cry ! BRIAN

March 22nd, 2016 06:00

Interview with Jesus
Hoosierfan1973 said:

Great poem.

March 14th, 2016 13:46

The Empty House
Lady K said:

This is great! It really spoke to me!

March 12th, 2016 17:50