Comments received on poems by maybel



waisy!
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of loss and the pain associated with it. There is some ambiguity in the line \"If you hadn\'t taken that step, my dear,
I would never have let you go, crystal clear.\" Was this animal hit by a car? or what happened? Sad in any case. Nicely written in good rhyme and meter.

June 11th, 2024 05:13

waisy!
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful.

June 3rd, 2024 23:16

waisy!
Meera Mere said:

Such a heartfelt poem dude.
May your dog rest in peace. Take care of yourself. He is happy wherever he is.... amazing poem

June 3rd, 2024 22:39