Unseen Scars
Maplespal said:

I like this a lot. I like the broken flow of it. Sometimes that is what is needed.
I wouldn\'t want you to change your poem, it is just I read line 12 as \"But no one sees my truthful eyes.\". It makes the flow smoother for that 4 lines.
Just a friendly idea.

June 18th, 2024 17:01

Achieving Hope in Nature
Absolute said:

An amazing write! So echoing a soothing verve, with gently gliding words and a rich imagery. Fabulous composition!

June 15th, 2024 09:42