Comments received on poems by MA-Q



Inheritance
sorenbarrett said:

Dark, this poem reincarnates the dead and keeps the living at bay. Nicely worded it offers a gift of hell.

August 5th, 2024 21:26

Tonight the sky is stunning
sorenbarrett said:

Stunning images in this poem of death and life. The balance is evident and precarious at times but hopefully the desire to survive is stronger until death takes us.

August 2nd, 2024 05:13

Go Insane
Mutley Ravishes said:

I enjoyed this!

July 30th, 2024 04:07

Determination of the snail
sorenbarrett said:

Wonderful imagery in this piece with some metaphor as well. Nicely done.

July 27th, 2024 20:45

Portrait
sorenbarrett said:

Duality in all things. Very oriental I loved this perspective and have adopted it much of my life. Nicely written

July 26th, 2024 06:01

Mother, sweet woman.
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

July 21st, 2024 21:29

Wednesday Afternoon
dandelion.drafts said:

Beautiful - feels like ouroboros imagery.

July 21st, 2024 09:08

Clogged Drain
2781 said:

Try lime.

July 12th, 2024 09:30

Mysterious Flower
sunshine777 said:

Beautiful

July 8th, 2024 21:16

Two Little Box Turtles
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and sad.

July 7th, 2024 22:18

Invocation To My Soul
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:

Beautiful write Marco!

July 4th, 2024 19:04

Love Poem
peto said:

I\'m guessing as you were missing someone they won\'t see this fantastic write
I\'m glad I did
Love the rhyme flow and content
Great read Marco
Looking forward to more

July 2nd, 2024 18:50