Comments received on poems by PreciousGurl



I Drink You In
sorenbarrett said:

Romantic and easy to read. Well done

August 1st, 2024 12:03

Chester
sorenbarrett said:

Sad and inspiring empathy for the puppy. Nicely written

July 30th, 2024 19:43

Shadows In The Sun
Cassie58 said:

You create some interesting imagery here of a desert landscape. I imagined a sand storm and the shifting of sand dunes. But most of all, I felt heat and exhaustion. Pleased I stopped by this evening. Nicely composed lines.

July 15th, 2024 14:32

Shadows In The Sun
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

July 15th, 2024 12:46

Street Life
2781 said:

The Lord will enter into judgement with the ancients of his people, and the princes thereof: for ye have eaten up the vineyard; the spoil of the poor is in your houses. What mean ye that you beat my people to peices, and grind the faces of the poor?

July 12th, 2024 05:14

Street Life
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and relatable.

July 10th, 2024 14:15