Comments received on poems by PreciousGurl
Chester
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and inspiring empathy for the puppy. Nicely written
July 30th, 2024 19:43
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and inspiring empathy for the puppy. Nicely written
July 30th, 2024 19:43
Shadows In The Sun
Cassie58 said:
You create some interesting imagery here of a desert landscape. I imagined a sand storm and the shifting of sand dunes. But most of all, I felt heat and exhaustion. Pleased I stopped by this evening. Nicely composed lines.
July 15th, 2024 14:32
Cassie58 said:
You create some interesting imagery here of a desert landscape. I imagined a sand storm and the shifting of sand dunes. But most of all, I felt heat and exhaustion. Pleased I stopped by this evening. Nicely composed lines.
July 15th, 2024 14:32
Street Life
2781 said:
The Lord will enter into judgement with the ancients of his people, and the princes thereof: for ye have eaten up the vineyard; the spoil of the poor is in your houses. What mean ye that you beat my people to peices, and grind the faces of the poor?
July 12th, 2024 05:14
2781 said:
The Lord will enter into judgement with the ancients of his people, and the princes thereof: for ye have eaten up the vineyard; the spoil of the poor is in your houses. What mean ye that you beat my people to peices, and grind the faces of the poor?
July 12th, 2024 05:14