Comments received on poems by Raidoc



Three Thousand Years of Pain
Doggerel Dave said:

I reflect that it is an insoluble problem given the players and History. No wonder the problem is never resolved when the focus is religion. They are just the diversions observers like to imagine the participants are marching under.
Great try though.

October 22nd, 2025 18:44

Basket of Deplorables
Doggerel Dave said:

It was an unbelievable level of debate, there....

October 22nd, 2025 18:15

Yet another Politician
Doggerel Dave said:

Ply them all with drink? Great idea. Trouble is general electors haven\'t the kind of wealth to keep up supplies and gazump those whom pollies really suck up to..
Fun though..

October 22nd, 2025 18:10

Three Thousand Years of Pain
sorenbarrett said:

A most poignant poem that reaches out to all that have a heart. It will not happen until both realize that love of their brother is more important than love of their God and that forgiveness more important than justice. Revenge is not an answer but a cause. If religion leads to murder and war then make me an atheist.

October 22nd, 2025 10:18

What\'s in a Star Sign
sorenbarrett said:

A fun read so well worded and rhymed that it deserves a fave

September 4th, 2025 14:21

What\'s in a Star Sign
Lorenz said:

I am a genius autistic gemini but who is the other one ?

September 4th, 2025 14:06

I\'m just starting - in Trump\'s own words
Tony Grannell said:

Are you sure this is not verbatim - hahaha! He couldn\'t have said it better himself. You have really grasped the character of the man in an excellent parody, crowned in poetic deliciousness. Very well done indeed. Hats off to you.

Kind regards,

Tony.

August 17th, 2025 14:32

I\'m just starting - in Trump\'s own words
sorenbarrett said:

Are you sure that it\'s a parody sounds on point to me. A fun read

August 17th, 2025 14:07

I\'m just starting - in Trump\'s own words
Poetic Licence said:

I am glad I read the author\'s notes, it gave me a different view on it, when his time is up I wonder if he will behave the same in his next destination, enjoyed the read

August 17th, 2025 14:04

I\'m just starting - in Trump\'s own words
Demar Desu said:

Democracy works I feel

August 17th, 2025 13:59

A Golfing Wife
Poetic Licence said:

A passion for a game that can drive you insane, but also still love and appreciation for the wife, enjoyed the read

August 10th, 2025 13:57

A Golfing Wife
sorenbarrett said:

A passion felt in this poem of the greens. Nicely done

August 10th, 2025 13:17

An Arctic Story
sorenbarrett said:

A fun trip in poetic rhyme that was filled with images and a generally good time. Lovely

July 26th, 2025 12:32

An Arctic Story
Poetic Licence said:

I really enjoyed this, what a wonderful trip and story, nice to hear nothing was harmed in the making of this story, man or nature, lovely read

July 26th, 2025 11:32

A Crossroads for Iran
Poetic Licence said:

Nicely written piece for the chance for Iranians to reclaim their country, I feel sadly this will not be the case, it didn\'t work in Iraq and Afghanistan, they are just the same as they ever are and Syria will follow suit. It takes so much more than bombs to change a culture, enjoyed the read

June 22nd, 2025 10:37

A Crossroads for Iran
sorenbarrett said:

Ideological, political, historical, cultural developmental differences that converge and diverge in chaos. Lovely

June 22nd, 2025 10:09

Trump\'s Wild Tango
sorenbarrett said:

Reflections that show Trump as nothing more than a mirror view of ourselves that elected to give power to a part of us we shouldn\'t trust. Very nice write.

May 3rd, 2025 13:20

The War must end - Ukraine & Russia
Poetic Licence said:

At the moment for Ukrainian people to have peace means they have surrendered, for Russian people to have peace would mean they have just been allowed to take a democratic and free country. Your right that no one will win outright,but a peace deal should be for Ukraine as they were the ones invaded, not Russia or America\'s gain, enjoyed the read

February 18th, 2025 12:56

The War must end - Ukraine & Russia
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of war protest that rings out for all to hear. Very nice

February 18th, 2025 09:49

The Sledgehammer - in Trumps own words
sorenbarrett said:

A political poem on a hotly contested topic. Interesting and brave to say the least.

February 16th, 2025 17:32

And now it starts - in Trump\'s own words
Tristan Robert Lange said:

\"And now it starts\" indeed. You are right; he would say this...regardless of what truth might have to say. But then again, wasn\'t it once asked, \"What is truth?\" The parody is well done, friend. Sad that, in this day and age, you need to preface it as such 🙄...but well done.🌹

January 24th, 2025 19:32

And now it starts - in Trump\'s own words
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 24th, 2025 18:29

Yet another Politician
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

December 1st, 2024 14:54

Yet another Politician
Poetic Licence said:

I really enjoyed reading this, thank you

December 1st, 2024 13:23

Our Beach Vaction
Cheeky Missy said:

You\'re culling a smirk...was the title deliberately missing an \"a,\" eh? Yes, the fact tis tendered in seeming rhymed couplets, the concept delightfully rendered with charming poignancy and excellent imagery, who shan\'t enjoy this? Thank you for sharing.

November 6th, 2024 19:19

Ambition - in Kamalas own words
sorenbarrett said:

I\'ll wait and see the comedy of parody in the next election. Nicely written

August 24th, 2024 18:44

No Gain without Pain - a Runners tale
Doggerel Dave said:

From my armchair I can see the truth here....Seriously, it did dredge up a memory from my youth. Thanks.

August 7th, 2024 17:41

No Gain without Pain - a Runners tale
Raidoc said:

Thanks for the kind words

August 7th, 2024 10:20

No Gain without Pain - a Runners tale
sorenbarrett said:

Energized this poem. Nicely done

August 7th, 2024 10:11

Let them Wonder - in Kamala\'s own words
Doggerel Dave said:

As parody it hits just the right spot.
You can slap it right on top of that piece of toast and feed it forcibly if necessary.

August 2nd, 2024 19:39

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