Comments received on poems by Raidoc



Our Beach Vaction
Cheeky Missy said:

You\'re culling a smirk...was the title deliberately missing an \"a,\" eh? Yes, the fact tis tendered in seeming rhymed couplets, the concept delightfully rendered with charming poignancy and excellent imagery, who shan\'t enjoy this? Thank you for sharing.

November 6th, 2024 19:19

Ambition - in Kamals own words
sorenbarrett said:

I\'ll wait and see the comedy of parody in the next election. Nicely written

August 24th, 2024 18:44

No Gain without Pain - a Runners tale
Doggerel Dave said:

From my armchair I can see the truth here....Seriously, it did dredge up a memory from my youth. Thanks.

August 7th, 2024 17:41

No Gain without Pain - a Runners tale
Raidoc said:

Thanks for the kind words

August 7th, 2024 10:20

No Gain without Pain - a Runners tale
sorenbarrett said:

Energized this poem. Nicely done

August 7th, 2024 10:11

Let them Wonder - in Kamala\'s own words
Doggerel Dave said:

As parody it hits just the right spot.
You can slap it right on top of that piece of toast and feed it forcibly if necessary.

August 2nd, 2024 19:39

Let them Wonder - in Kamala\'s own words
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 2nd, 2024 18:20

Let them Wonder - in Kamala\'s own words
sorenbarrett said:

Clever and well put together with many facts and details included. Nicely rhymed as well. A good read

August 2nd, 2024 16:24

The Coronation of Trump
Doggerel Dave said:

I do hope reflection becomes the order of the day. Needed in large quantities.

Do hang about for a while - MPS needs you. It can be lively, is an easy site to use, despite some minor idiosyncrasies.

July 19th, 2024 17:48

Butterflies Love Dance
Cassie58 said:

Butterflies have a very spiritual meaning for me. Your poetry is laden with beautiful imagery. Pleased I stopped by to read your work today. Thank you.

July 12th, 2024 13:01

Florida Pelicans - majestic and cheeky
Tony36 said:

Live it

July 11th, 2024 09:47

The Boxer - in Trumps own words
Norman Flagtea said:

What is this? Campaining for a convicted crook on a poetry site? O.k. the other one is lame, but this one can\'t even cover up his visits to a hooker. Sigh..

July 9th, 2024 10:32