Comments received on poems by sixthwrites
glitter
Aloo Denish Obiero said:
\"please tell me we can go back to the start\" !!! I couldn\'t help but read the poem again and again. Excellent
November 5th, 2024 07:14
Aloo Denish Obiero said:
\"please tell me we can go back to the start\" !!! I couldn\'t help but read the poem again and again. Excellent
November 5th, 2024 07:14
sixteen
Cheeky Missy said:
We cannot but love ourselves, which is the driving cause, I think, for our depression and misery since reality forces us to see how far short we fall from our inner, unspoken sense of grandeur. Knowing we\'re neither perceived as we think we should be, nor can justify ourselves that we\'ve attained the heights we instinctively know we should, we bow under the crushing burden of our perfection. Lovely and beautifully rendered with an excellent poignancy and great imagery. Thank you for sharing.
October 13th, 2024 13:06
Cheeky Missy said:
We cannot but love ourselves, which is the driving cause, I think, for our depression and misery since reality forces us to see how far short we fall from our inner, unspoken sense of grandeur. Knowing we\'re neither perceived as we think we should be, nor can justify ourselves that we\'ve attained the heights we instinctively know we should, we bow under the crushing burden of our perfection. Lovely and beautifully rendered with an excellent poignancy and great imagery. Thank you for sharing.
October 13th, 2024 13:06
soak
sorenbarrett said:
Symbolism runs through this piece coloring its story. Nicely done
July 30th, 2024 19:52
sorenbarrett said:
Symbolism runs through this piece coloring its story. Nicely done
July 30th, 2024 19:52
moment of bliss
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful image and metaphor set so well and framed. Loved this piece
July 29th, 2024 10:08
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful image and metaphor set so well and framed. Loved this piece
July 29th, 2024 10:08
sensitive
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely organized this write ends where it starts and covers the subject so well. It resolves its own problem. Very nicely done.
July 27th, 2024 19:51
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely organized this write ends where it starts and covers the subject so well. It resolves its own problem. Very nicely done.
July 27th, 2024 19:51
sensitive
2781 said:
And said, Hirtherto shall thou come, but no further: and here shall thou proud waves be stayed?
July 27th, 2024 08:27
2781 said:
And said, Hirtherto shall thou come, but no further: and here shall thou proud waves be stayed?
July 27th, 2024 08:27
falling
sorenbarrett said:
There you created an image of the soft serve ice cream tipping and falling needing to be held by the tongue to keep it from falling. Very nicely done
July 26th, 2024 12:29
sorenbarrett said:
There you created an image of the soft serve ice cream tipping and falling needing to be held by the tongue to keep it from falling. Very nicely done
July 26th, 2024 12:29
