Comments received on poems by sixthwrites



soak
sorenbarrett said:

Symbolism runs through this piece coloring its story. Nicely done

July 30th, 2024 19:52

moment of bliss
sorenbarrett said:

What a wonderful image and metaphor set so well and framed. Loved this piece

July 29th, 2024 10:08

sensitive
sorenbarrett said:

Very nicely organized this write ends where it starts and covers the subject so well. It resolves its own problem. Very nicely done.

July 27th, 2024 19:51

sensitive
2781 said:

And said, Hirtherto shall thou come, but no further: and here shall thou proud waves be stayed?

July 27th, 2024 08:27

falling
sorenbarrett said:

There you created an image of the soft serve ice cream tipping and falling needing to be held by the tongue to keep it from falling. Very nicely done

July 26th, 2024 12:29