Comments received on poems by Sydney Zane
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rebellion_in_sanity said:
What a poem! I read it four times in a row. The sense I am left with is of hope and redemption. Please correct me if my interpretation is incorrect.
August 13th, 2024 23:21
rebellion_in_sanity said:
What a poem! I read it four times in a row. The sense I am left with is of hope and redemption. Please correct me if my interpretation is incorrect.
August 13th, 2024 23:21
If You Deem One Worthy Of Such Reprieve
rebellion_in_sanity said:
It is stunning. I am not much a \'beauty\' person but I felt the raw emotion of wonderment and final surrender. I also felt a sense of conflict. The lines \'A husk of creation weighted down by your gift of unveiled truths and memories\' will stay with me for a long time.
August 7th, 2024 23:15
rebellion_in_sanity said:
It is stunning. I am not much a \'beauty\' person but I felt the raw emotion of wonderment and final surrender. I also felt a sense of conflict. The lines \'A husk of creation weighted down by your gift of unveiled truths and memories\' will stay with me for a long time.
August 7th, 2024 23:15
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Bobby O said:
It was almost there for me.
Reside lied singing redeemed
Those words ended consecutive lines Maybe create a mini plot if those powerful ending words were at least loosely woven
Ie:
The redeemed were now singing
The sun gave strength they no longer cry
Truth covers lies , no shadows that hide
Sad shifts aside where joyous reside
August 6th, 2024 11:42
Bobby O said:
It was almost there for me.
Reside lied singing redeemed
Those words ended consecutive lines Maybe create a mini plot if those powerful ending words were at least loosely woven
Ie:
The redeemed were now singing
The sun gave strength they no longer cry
Truth covers lies , no shadows that hide
Sad shifts aside where joyous reside
August 6th, 2024 11:42
Hoisted Into The Open
sorenbarrett said:
Most intriguing in its wording and rhyme. It feels mystical in its nature.
August 1st, 2024 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
Most intriguing in its wording and rhyme. It feels mystical in its nature.
August 1st, 2024 05:19
Hoisted Into The Open
orchidee said:
A descriptive write S. though I\'m not into bewitching myself! (heehee).
August 1st, 2024 01:52
orchidee said:
A descriptive write S. though I\'m not into bewitching myself! (heehee).
August 1st, 2024 01:52
If You Deem One Worthy Of Such Reprieve
sorenbarrett said:
Written in a most classical style reminiscent of ancient Greek poetry but with modern language. Very nice
July 30th, 2024 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
Written in a most classical style reminiscent of ancient Greek poetry but with modern language. Very nice
July 30th, 2024 05:58
