Comments received on poems by Mr. Poetic 243



In The Heart Where Love\'s Fires Burn Bright.
Poetic Licence said:

A nicely written write z the strength of the family unit and love will survive anything, enjoyed the read

July 24th, 2025 05:52

In The Heart Where Love\'s Fires Burn Bright.
sorenbarrett said:

Well constructed with good rhyme this poem hangs together from beginning to end like the family that it speaks of. Line upon line it builds as a wall. Well done and a fave

July 24th, 2025 04:27

In the Hush of Summer\'s Fading Light
Doggerel Dave said:

An idealised version of school life which I actually quite enjoyed....

July 31st, 2024 17:04

In the Hush of Summer\'s Fading Light
sorenbarrett said:

Well written rhyme and the flow of this pome pulls one onward. A fun message as well. Nicely done

July 31st, 2024 12:01