Comments received on poems by ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ
Demons
NinjaGirl said:
Honestly quite beautiful, broken love is more real than fake love.
August 14th, 2025 20:00
NinjaGirl said:
Honestly quite beautiful, broken love is more real than fake love.
August 14th, 2025 20:00
Expressing
sorenbarrett said:
A well rhymed tercet completes this poem. Nicely done
August 8th, 2025 18:48
sorenbarrett said:
A well rhymed tercet completes this poem. Nicely done
August 8th, 2025 18:48
Demons
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this I wanted to know what kind of demons these were, ones for torment or mischief. A fun read that cleverly uses the word dance and the metaphor to invoke different images of meaning. Very nice
June 28th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this I wanted to know what kind of demons these were, ones for torment or mischief. A fun read that cleverly uses the word dance and the metaphor to invoke different images of meaning. Very nice
June 28th, 2025 03:52
Demons
Poetic Licence said:
We all have demons some more visible than others, enjoyed the read
June 28th, 2025 00:20
Poetic Licence said:
We all have demons some more visible than others, enjoyed the read
June 28th, 2025 00:20
Slave
sorenbarrett said:
So short and playing off subtle differences in terms and definitions. Well done
May 25th, 2025 03:22
sorenbarrett said:
So short and playing off subtle differences in terms and definitions. Well done
May 25th, 2025 03:22
Cozy Cabin
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of safety comes with this poem as well as one of peace. A great metaphor.
May 14th, 2025 14:07
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of safety comes with this poem as well as one of peace. A great metaphor.
May 14th, 2025 14:07
Take a breath
rainbow 1 said:
hey its me ethen were cade go we havent talked in a minute
March 26th, 2025 19:30
rainbow 1 said:
hey its me ethen were cade go we havent talked in a minute
March 26th, 2025 19:30
Take a breath
sorenbarrett said:
A good write where few understand that forgiveness is not for the forgiven but for the forgiver. Very nice
March 26th, 2025 15:01
sorenbarrett said:
A good write where few understand that forgiveness is not for the forgiven but for the forgiver. Very nice
March 26th, 2025 15:01
Stronger
sorenbarrett said:
Motivational and encouraging this poem tells the reader not to give up. Very nice
March 18th, 2025 19:51
sorenbarrett said:
Motivational and encouraging this poem tells the reader not to give up. Very nice
March 18th, 2025 19:51
A Warrior of Speech
Poetic Licence said:
The tongue is mightier than the sword, enjoyed the read
March 18th, 2025 02:58
Poetic Licence said:
The tongue is mightier than the sword, enjoyed the read
March 18th, 2025 02:58
A Warrior of Speech
Mutley Ravishes said:
For sure. Then there is the battle with our own inner talking.......
March 17th, 2025 18:24
Mutley Ravishes said:
For sure. Then there is the battle with our own inner talking.......
March 17th, 2025 18:24
A Warrior of Speech
sorenbarrett said:
Firm believer in this and yes the pen is mightier than the sword. Well said.
March 17th, 2025 13:47
sorenbarrett said:
Firm believer in this and yes the pen is mightier than the sword. Well said.
March 17th, 2025 13:47
Love and hate
sorenbarrett said:
The unity of love and hate a Janus face. There can not be one without the other. The following line could be What you think is destroying is really saving me.
March 15th, 2025 05:48
sorenbarrett said:
The unity of love and hate a Janus face. There can not be one without the other. The following line could be What you think is destroying is really saving me.
March 15th, 2025 05:48
Love and hate
Poetic Licence said:
Love and hate two sides to the same coin, enjoyed the read
March 15th, 2025 05:32
Poetic Licence said:
Love and hate two sides to the same coin, enjoyed the read
March 15th, 2025 05:32
Cries and lies
sorenbarrett said:
A rather foreboding poem that tells of a person I would rather avoid.
March 14th, 2025 11:27
sorenbarrett said:
A rather foreboding poem that tells of a person I would rather avoid.
March 14th, 2025 11:27
A Prayer
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful prayer poem for the little folk. Lovely
March 12th, 2025 14:05
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful prayer poem for the little folk. Lovely
March 12th, 2025 14:05
How is it?
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s one of the problems with life, we don\'t know, enjoyed the read
March 12th, 2025 03:21
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s one of the problems with life, we don\'t know, enjoyed the read
March 12th, 2025 03:21
How is it?
sorenbarrett said:
Many questions in this poem and they all lead to the same answer: you don\'t. Very nice
March 11th, 2025 19:46
sorenbarrett said:
Many questions in this poem and they all lead to the same answer: you don\'t. Very nice
March 11th, 2025 19:46
What you didn\'t teach me
sheta said:
sad and yet theres something else to this poem
March 11th, 2025 17:42
sheta said:
sad and yet theres something else to this poem
March 11th, 2025 17:42
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