Comments received on poems by ᛕꫀƺꫀ᥊᥊ꫀ



Mockingbird
NinjaGirl said:

The mockingbird, though innocent, was killed for what seemed like justice to an unjust society...

February 21st, 2025 12:20

Mockingbird
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of metaphor and with good imagery that paints the picture well. Nicely done

February 21st, 2025 05:53

Mockingbird
Poetic Licence said:

That\'s a very good write, well expressed feelings of rejection.

February 21st, 2025 04:39

Mockingbird
sheta said:

awesome!!!

February 21st, 2025 00:58

Rejected
sheta said:

thanks kexxex

February 19th, 2025 21:33

Rejected
Poetic Licence said:

It\'s your own thoughts and feelings that matter, clever write, enjoyed the read

February 19th, 2025 21:08

Rejected
sorenbarrett said:

It is all a state of mind. It is what you think that makes the difference. Very nice

February 19th, 2025 16:31

Keep on going
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:

👍gud

February 18th, 2025 18:17

Keep on going
DaBestPoemer said:

gud

February 18th, 2025 17:39

𝐹𝒶𝒾𝓁𝒾𝓃𝑔
NinjaGirl said:

Sad and beautiful..you won\'t fail until you give up

February 12th, 2025 13:29

𝐹𝒶𝒾𝓁𝒾𝓃𝑔
Poetic Licence said:

A sense of do not believe everything you first see, enjoyed the read.

February 12th, 2025 12:47

WHERE AM I?
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

February 10th, 2025 09:27

You wouldn\'t understand
NinjaGirl said:

It\'s so so hard to speak...to tell someone about it... This is truly beautiful, and you\'ll find your voice, even if its just via poem

February 8th, 2025 21:40

WHERE AM I?
sorenbarrett said:

A mysterious feeling prevades this poem and goes unanswered. Nicely done

February 4th, 2025 04:08

WHERE AM I?
Poetic Licence said:

I think that is well crafted and clever in its lay out, enjoyed the read

February 3rd, 2025 16:11

The played hate
LP2187 said:

I love these rhymes, Good write!

February 2nd, 2025 04:10

When the pain takes over
sheta said:

wow whos this for girl?

February 1st, 2025 02:16

When the pain takes over
sorenbarrett said:

The message alone deserves a fave in this poem of unity. Nicely worded as well it comes on strong with its most powerful message

January 31st, 2025 19:35

When the pain takes over
Poetic Licence said:

A fantastic piece of writing, with such an important and supportive message, great read

January 31st, 2025 13:56

When the pain takes over
LP2187 said:

Great poem, enjoyed reading it!

January 31st, 2025 13:16

Faded
Poetic Licence said:

The power of pain and how we let it control us sometimes, Few words but powerful statement.

January 31st, 2025 02:31

Faded
accross_world_with_u said:

Life is a tug of war. Nice write! 🫶

January 30th, 2025 20:35

Faded
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 30th, 2025 20:24

Death hurts. (Just something I was messin\' with) Not even rly a poem lol
Thad Wilk said:

👍👍
Two thumbs up!
A cool poem and great
\" Monorhyme\" indeed!💯
Thought provoking and
a treat to read!! ✌️
Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹 Thad

January 29th, 2025 18:28

Death hurts. (Just something I was messin\' with) Not even rly a poem lol
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This is quite the poem as It employs repetition, anaphora, monorhyme, parallelism, juxtaposition, alliteration, and symbolism...all of which are brilliant poetic devices. Don\'t sell yourself short, my friend. This is as much a poem (if not more so) than the next, and on top of that, it is quite profound. Well done! 🌹👏

January 27th, 2025 08:23

Death hurts. (Just something I was messin\' with) Not even rly a poem lol
arqios said:

Works for me! Words and phrases are fun 🤩👍

January 27th, 2025 03:41

Let me GO X_X
Thad Wilk said:

👍👍 Two thumbs up!!
Powerful penning,
very evocative indeed!!
Brilliantly composed poetess
and my pleasure to read!!🤩
Best wishes 🍀🤗🦻🌻 Thad

January 26th, 2025 11:38

Let me GO X_X
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Emotive expressed swell but don\'t go, just write n pray. Kudos!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too

January 26th, 2025 00:49

Let me GO X_X
sheta said:

nice rhyming

January 24th, 2025 14:20

Consumption
arqios said:

An anguished and well meditated plea 🙏🏻🕊

January 23rd, 2025 16:39

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