Comments received on poems by ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ
And I will fight
NinjaGirl said:
Because you will stand for what you believe in. Great daily dose of motivation!
March 5th, 2025 12:46
NinjaGirl said:
Because you will stand for what you believe in. Great daily dose of motivation!
March 5th, 2025 12:46
And I will fight
sorenbarrett said:
Whether mood, or concrete obstacles this poem speaks of determination and perseverance Very motivational.
March 5th, 2025 05:52
sorenbarrett said:
Whether mood, or concrete obstacles this poem speaks of determination and perseverance Very motivational.
March 5th, 2025 05:52
Scrolls
sorenbarrett said:
Dead sea scrolls? Magic? mysterious and well done form as well as wording
March 4th, 2025 17:41
sorenbarrett said:
Dead sea scrolls? Magic? mysterious and well done form as well as wording
March 4th, 2025 17:41
In the future to come????????
NafisaSB said:
a question we all keep asking, and seeking an answer to always
the uncertainty is so well expressed
March 4th, 2025 00:34
NafisaSB said:
a question we all keep asking, and seeking an answer to always
the uncertainty is so well expressed
March 4th, 2025 00:34
Maybe if...
NinjaGirl said:
Ooh, this is good! I love the shape, the rhyme, easy favorite!
March 3rd, 2025 13:22
NinjaGirl said:
Ooh, this is good! I love the shape, the rhyme, easy favorite!
March 3rd, 2025 13:22
Maybe if...
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a great little write, life in a few lines
March 3rd, 2025 05:43
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a great little write, life in a few lines
March 3rd, 2025 05:43
Maybe if...
sorenbarrett said:
A poem well engineered as to rhyme, meter and format. Each nicely worked. The meaning as well made for a great read.
March 3rd, 2025 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
A poem well engineered as to rhyme, meter and format. Each nicely worked. The meaning as well made for a great read.
March 3rd, 2025 05:29
Maybe if...
Mutley Ravishes said:
Got so tired of singing
The same old song
So I quit dreaming of
And started dreaming from
However, it\'s a long
Road to faith
Will I stay the course
Or lay myself waste?!
March 3rd, 2025 02:31
Mutley Ravishes said:
Got so tired of singing
The same old song
So I quit dreaming of
And started dreaming from
However, it\'s a long
Road to faith
Will I stay the course
Or lay myself waste?!
March 3rd, 2025 02:31
Trust
sheta said:
kenz i reached the 100 max inboxes so i cant send u anything else
March 2nd, 2025 23:56
sheta said:
kenz i reached the 100 max inboxes so i cant send u anything else
March 2nd, 2025 23:56
Trust
sorenbarrett said:
I like the jib of this poem, balance, rhyme, meter and all it tells its story well
March 2nd, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
I like the jib of this poem, balance, rhyme, meter and all it tells its story well
March 2nd, 2025 04:51
Trust
orchidee said:
Will a third chance come, if we do get a second chance and fail it?! Good write K.
March 2nd, 2025 03:16
orchidee said:
Will a third chance come, if we do get a second chance and fail it?! Good write K.
March 2nd, 2025 03:16
Beauty
Poetic Licence said:
Always look behind the cover to read the real story, powerful write
March 2nd, 2025 02:24
Poetic Licence said:
Always look behind the cover to read the real story, powerful write
March 2nd, 2025 02:24
Beauty
sorenbarrett said:
Beauty should never define a person, there is so much more. Loved the poem short and concise it rings with power.
March 1st, 2025 14:52
sorenbarrett said:
Beauty should never define a person, there is so much more. Loved the poem short and concise it rings with power.
March 1st, 2025 14:52
In the future to come????????
whats write for me said:
This has the feel of a song, what can you turn it into?
February 28th, 2025 15:06
whats write for me said:
This has the feel of a song, what can you turn it into?
February 28th, 2025 15:06
In the future to come????????
NinjaGirl said:
The idea of a future, something different, an adventure even, is so unbelievably exciting
February 27th, 2025 10:31
NinjaGirl said:
The idea of a future, something different, an adventure even, is so unbelievably exciting
February 27th, 2025 10:31
In the future to come????????
Poetic Licence said:
The future will be what it will be, nice write
February 27th, 2025 07:47
Poetic Licence said:
The future will be what it will be, nice write
February 27th, 2025 07:47
In the future to come????????
sorenbarrett said:
Question after question all with no answer because the future can not be told until it is written. Lovely
February 27th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
Question after question all with no answer because the future can not be told until it is written. Lovely
February 27th, 2025 04:38
Am I lost? Or is this a dream
sorenbarrett said:
This write has a surreal feel to it like coming out of a dream still not oriented. Very nicely written
February 26th, 2025 18:12
sorenbarrett said:
This write has a surreal feel to it like coming out of a dream still not oriented. Very nicely written
February 26th, 2025 18:12
Am I lost? Or is this a dream
NinjaGirl said:
\"dreamers wake up and leave their monsters behind\" I love this line, it tells me I\'m not dreaming, I\'m not crazy, or making things up-- it\'s trauma that\'s hard to leave behind
February 26th, 2025 12:53
NinjaGirl said:
\"dreamers wake up and leave their monsters behind\" I love this line, it tells me I\'m not dreaming, I\'m not crazy, or making things up-- it\'s trauma that\'s hard to leave behind
February 26th, 2025 12:53
BLACK IS THE COLOR
NinjaGirl said:
Black is actually the absence of color. (White is all colors mixed together). So it\'s interesting to think that black is absence. It\'s what we miss, it\'s what we deserved to have but didn\'t get. It\'s the absence of love, hope, and freedom in our lives. True black is when there\'s no light...when the memories haunt the soldier, that 100 yard stare is black. The memories...cause our good ones to have spots of black...the black seems to spread ever since we were hurt
February 22nd, 2025 19:37
NinjaGirl said:
Black is actually the absence of color. (White is all colors mixed together). So it\'s interesting to think that black is absence. It\'s what we miss, it\'s what we deserved to have but didn\'t get. It\'s the absence of love, hope, and freedom in our lives. True black is when there\'s no light...when the memories haunt the soldier, that 100 yard stare is black. The memories...cause our good ones to have spots of black...the black seems to spread ever since we were hurt
February 22nd, 2025 19:37
BLACK IS THE COLOR
sorenbarrett said:
Black has always been associated with death, sorrow, depression, anger, evil. This is well expressed in this poem.
February 22nd, 2025 13:38
sorenbarrett said:
Black has always been associated with death, sorrow, depression, anger, evil. This is well expressed in this poem.
February 22nd, 2025 13:38
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