Comments received on poems by ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ
No silence
sorenbarrett said:
Nice use of the last word technique. It worked well in this poem bringing the final thought back as an introduction to the next line. Very nice
March 10th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Nice use of the last word technique. It worked well in this poem bringing the final thought back as an introduction to the next line. Very nice
March 10th, 2025 04:46
No silence
Mutley Ravishes said:
Alan Watts said we don\'t think the thoughts in our heads. Instead we listen to them. Now that\'s something to chew on!
March 10th, 2025 02:37
Mutley Ravishes said:
Alan Watts said we don\'t think the thoughts in our heads. Instead we listen to them. Now that\'s something to chew on!
March 10th, 2025 02:37
What you didn\'t teach me
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point. Clearly worded.
March 8th, 2025 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point. Clearly worded.
March 8th, 2025 04:56
You lied
sheta said:
hey kenz didnt know you had a secret boy
why didnt you tell me
March 8th, 2025 00:05
sheta said:
hey kenz didnt know you had a secret boy
why didnt you tell me
March 8th, 2025 00:05
You lied
sorenbarrett said:
Strong statements in this poem reveal what I take as anger, even rage. This poem is highly emotional and makes powerful statements. Very nice
March 7th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Strong statements in this poem reveal what I take as anger, even rage. This poem is highly emotional and makes powerful statements. Very nice
March 7th, 2025 04:16
From the start to the end
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s what real friends are for, lovely write
March 6th, 2025 04:44
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s what real friends are for, lovely write
March 6th, 2025 04:44
From the start to the end
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of support saying that someone has your back. Very nicely written.
March 6th, 2025 03:33
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of support saying that someone has your back. Very nicely written.
March 6th, 2025 03:33
And I will fight
NinjaGirl said:
Because you will stand for what you believe in. Great daily dose of motivation!
March 5th, 2025 12:46
NinjaGirl said:
Because you will stand for what you believe in. Great daily dose of motivation!
March 5th, 2025 12:46
And I will fight
sorenbarrett said:
Whether mood, or concrete obstacles this poem speaks of determination and perseverance Very motivational.
March 5th, 2025 05:52
sorenbarrett said:
Whether mood, or concrete obstacles this poem speaks of determination and perseverance Very motivational.
March 5th, 2025 05:52
Scrolls
sorenbarrett said:
Dead sea scrolls? Magic? mysterious and well done form as well as wording
March 4th, 2025 17:41
sorenbarrett said:
Dead sea scrolls? Magic? mysterious and well done form as well as wording
March 4th, 2025 17:41
In the future to come????????
NafisaSB said:
a question we all keep asking, and seeking an answer to always
the uncertainty is so well expressed
March 4th, 2025 00:34
NafisaSB said:
a question we all keep asking, and seeking an answer to always
the uncertainty is so well expressed
March 4th, 2025 00:34
Maybe if...
NinjaGirl said:
Ooh, this is good! I love the shape, the rhyme, easy favorite!
March 3rd, 2025 13:22
NinjaGirl said:
Ooh, this is good! I love the shape, the rhyme, easy favorite!
March 3rd, 2025 13:22
Maybe if...
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a great little write, life in a few lines
March 3rd, 2025 05:43
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a great little write, life in a few lines
March 3rd, 2025 05:43
Maybe if...
sorenbarrett said:
A poem well engineered as to rhyme, meter and format. Each nicely worked. The meaning as well made for a great read.
March 3rd, 2025 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
A poem well engineered as to rhyme, meter and format. Each nicely worked. The meaning as well made for a great read.
March 3rd, 2025 05:29
Maybe if...
Mutley Ravishes said:
Got so tired of singing
The same old song
So I quit dreaming of
And started dreaming from
However, it\'s a long
Road to faith
Will I stay the course
Or lay myself waste?!
March 3rd, 2025 02:31
Mutley Ravishes said:
Got so tired of singing
The same old song
So I quit dreaming of
And started dreaming from
However, it\'s a long
Road to faith
Will I stay the course
Or lay myself waste?!
March 3rd, 2025 02:31
Trust
sheta said:
kenz i reached the 100 max inboxes so i cant send u anything else
March 2nd, 2025 23:56
sheta said:
kenz i reached the 100 max inboxes so i cant send u anything else
March 2nd, 2025 23:56
Trust
sorenbarrett said:
I like the jib of this poem, balance, rhyme, meter and all it tells its story well
March 2nd, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
I like the jib of this poem, balance, rhyme, meter and all it tells its story well
March 2nd, 2025 04:51
Trust
orchidee said:
Will a third chance come, if we do get a second chance and fail it?! Good write K.
March 2nd, 2025 03:16
orchidee said:
Will a third chance come, if we do get a second chance and fail it?! Good write K.
March 2nd, 2025 03:16
Beauty
Poetic Licence said:
Always look behind the cover to read the real story, powerful write
March 2nd, 2025 02:24
Poetic Licence said:
Always look behind the cover to read the real story, powerful write
March 2nd, 2025 02:24
Beauty
sorenbarrett said:
Beauty should never define a person, there is so much more. Loved the poem short and concise it rings with power.
March 1st, 2025 14:52
sorenbarrett said:
Beauty should never define a person, there is so much more. Loved the poem short and concise it rings with power.
March 1st, 2025 14:52
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