Comments received on poems by Xiaobai Yulan
1 Yellow Leaves, 2 Pillow Towel; 3 Sorrow of July
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of goodbye and departure. Well written
May 12th, 2026 20:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of goodbye and departure. Well written
May 12th, 2026 20:43
New York Subway/ XXX Shop/ Man Sleeping in Ground
sorenbarrett said:
Here are snapshots of an American country, not pretty but gritty. One by one layers peeled away
May 12th, 2026 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
Here are snapshots of an American country, not pretty but gritty. One by one layers peeled away
May 12th, 2026 05:06
1 The Pear Blossoms Have Fallen; 2 Poplar Tree
sorenbarrett said:
Blossoms fall regardless of color or type of tree and so it is with people as well. Nicely written it has a sense of melancholy to it.
May 10th, 2026 19:21
sorenbarrett said:
Blossoms fall regardless of color or type of tree and so it is with people as well. Nicely written it has a sense of melancholy to it.
May 10th, 2026 19:21
Two poems on spring
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric, full of great images this poem takes one there. Well done
May 9th, 2026 22:07
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric, full of great images this poem takes one there. Well done
May 9th, 2026 22:07
Prometheus\' Tomb/
sorenbarrett said:
The eagle to tear out the liver every day to regenerate in continual torment freed at last by Heracles
May 7th, 2026 19:40
sorenbarrett said:
The eagle to tear out the liver every day to regenerate in continual torment freed at last by Heracles
May 7th, 2026 19:40
Farewell My Village
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems not only a fragment of reality but a metaphor for change and moving on. We can not go back in time yet we hold feelings and memories that take us back. Well written
May 6th, 2026 20:40
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems not only a fragment of reality but a metaphor for change and moving on. We can not go back in time yet we hold feelings and memories that take us back. Well written
May 6th, 2026 20:40
1. Fierce Winds Howl outside the Door/ Coal
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents a feeling of desolation and bareness of a god-forsaken place. Well done
May 5th, 2026 21:42
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents a feeling of desolation and bareness of a god-forsaken place. Well done
May 5th, 2026 21:42
A Flower Plant
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem about a beautiful natural creation. Loved it
February 20th, 2026 19:34
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem about a beautiful natural creation. Loved it
February 20th, 2026 19:34
The Legend of Clear Water River
Cheeky Missy said:
There is a way to do things, and then there\'s all the wrong ways which more may well take successfully, while some likewise perish for having chosen to turn aside nor take the right way. This tale you\'ve poignantly related rends the reader\'s heart, for who can fail to feel for the lovers? Like the misnamed ancient legends, it stands as a warning to passersby. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 8th, 2024 15:32
Cheeky Missy said:
There is a way to do things, and then there\'s all the wrong ways which more may well take successfully, while some likewise perish for having chosen to turn aside nor take the right way. This tale you\'ve poignantly related rends the reader\'s heart, for who can fail to feel for the lovers? Like the misnamed ancient legends, it stands as a warning to passersby. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 8th, 2024 15:32
Loch Lomond
sorenbarrett said:
A body of water can be beautiful, soft, giving, and very feminine. Loved the write it was a fun story.
August 16th, 2024 18:13
sorenbarrett said:
A body of water can be beautiful, soft, giving, and very feminine. Loved the write it was a fun story.
August 16th, 2024 18:13
Alone at a Cliff Cottage
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful image overall with painted dashes and speckles of interest portrayed. A most lovely picture.
August 14th, 2024 13:05
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful image overall with painted dashes and speckles of interest portrayed. A most lovely picture.
August 14th, 2024 13:05
