Comments received on poems by fanghuzhai
Huge Cylinder on the Road
sorenbarrett said:
Magic disappears in a puff of smoke and so did this. Well said
June 10th, 2026 14:30
sorenbarrett said:
Magic disappears in a puff of smoke and so did this. Well said
June 10th, 2026 14:30
China poems # 14--17
sorenbarrett said:
Several poems joined each with its own story. Well done
June 9th, 2026 12:24
sorenbarrett said:
Several poems joined each with its own story. Well done
June 9th, 2026 12:24
China poems 12
sorenbarrett said:
A poem reminiscing the past its friendships and events places and times. Well written
June 8th, 2026 18:30
sorenbarrett said:
A poem reminiscing the past its friendships and events places and times. Well written
June 8th, 2026 18:30
China poem 10-11: Poplar Tree; Pear Flowers Fall
sorenbarrett said:
Scenic and metaphoric this poem is most beautiful. Well done
June 5th, 2026 20:48
sorenbarrett said:
Scenic and metaphoric this poem is most beautiful. Well done
June 5th, 2026 20:48
Four poems of 2022
sorenbarrett said:
Many vivid images painted in this poem nicely done
May 25th, 2026 20:29
sorenbarrett said:
Many vivid images painted in this poem nicely done
May 25th, 2026 20:29
US poems 24-26
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written it paints a romantic picture in dress and image. Well done
May 23rd, 2026 19:03
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written it paints a romantic picture in dress and image. Well done
May 23rd, 2026 19:03
US poems 19-22
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a write right out of reality where little things make up the day. Nicely done
May 21st, 2026 18:41
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a write right out of reality where little things make up the day. Nicely done
May 21st, 2026 18:41
US Poems 16-18
Doggerel Dave said:
Yor entries here are something else. I\'m not sure how much I manage to absorb, but I find your poetry informative and well worth the effort.
May 21st, 2026 04:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Yor entries here are something else. I\'m not sure how much I manage to absorb, but I find your poetry informative and well worth the effort.
May 21st, 2026 04:48
US Poems 16-18
sorenbarrett said:
This seems almost a diary with excerpts and memories. Well done
May 20th, 2026 21:23
sorenbarrett said:
This seems almost a diary with excerpts and memories. Well done
May 20th, 2026 21:23
US poems No. 8-10
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting and formal in nature it has a stiff feel as if all protocol must be kept while the story is told. Nicely done
May 15th, 2026 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting and formal in nature it has a stiff feel as if all protocol must be kept while the story is told. Nicely done
May 15th, 2026 06:10
US poems 4-7
Doggerel Dave said:
Outside the limit of my perceptions - but you never know, I may be educated or the reality revealed one day...
May 14th, 2026 04:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Outside the limit of my perceptions - but you never know, I may be educated or the reality revealed one day...
May 14th, 2026 04:35
US poems 4-7
sorenbarrett said:
A series of poems that speak of the metropolis well done
May 14th, 2026 00:41
sorenbarrett said:
A series of poems that speak of the metropolis well done
May 14th, 2026 00:41
China poems 36, 40, 41: Yellow Leaves, Pillow Towel; Sorrow of July
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of goodbye and departure. Well written
May 12th, 2026 20:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of goodbye and departure. Well written
May 12th, 2026 20:43
US poems 1-3
sorenbarrett said:
Here are snapshots of an American country, not pretty but gritty. One by one layers peeled away
May 12th, 2026 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
Here are snapshots of an American country, not pretty but gritty. One by one layers peeled away
May 12th, 2026 05:06
China poems 8-9: Two poems on spring
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric, full of great images this poem takes one there. Well done
May 9th, 2026 22:07
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric, full of great images this poem takes one there. Well done
May 9th, 2026 22:07
China poem 7 Prometheus\' Tomb/
sorenbarrett said:
The eagle to tear out the liver every day to regenerate in continual torment freed at last by Heracles
May 7th, 2026 19:40
sorenbarrett said:
The eagle to tear out the liver every day to regenerate in continual torment freed at last by Heracles
May 7th, 2026 19:40
China poem-5 Farewell, My Village
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems not only a fragment of reality but a metaphor for change and moving on. We can not go back in time yet we hold feelings and memories that take us back. Well written
May 6th, 2026 20:40
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems not only a fragment of reality but a metaphor for change and moving on. We can not go back in time yet we hold feelings and memories that take us back. Well written
May 6th, 2026 20:40
China poems 2-3: Fierce Winds Howl outside the Door/ Coal
Friendship said:
Well done
May 6th, 2026 07:59
Friendship said:
Well done
May 6th, 2026 07:59
China poems 2-3: Fierce Winds Howl outside the Door/ Coal
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents a feeling of desolation and bareness of a god-forsaken place. Well done
May 5th, 2026 21:42
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents a feeling of desolation and bareness of a god-forsaken place. Well done
May 5th, 2026 21:42
CH-1 Flower
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem about a beautiful natural creation. Loved it
February 20th, 2026 19:34
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem about a beautiful natural creation. Loved it
February 20th, 2026 19:34
The Legend of Clear Water River
Cheeky Missy said:
There is a way to do things, and then there\'s all the wrong ways which more may well take successfully, while some likewise perish for having chosen to turn aside nor take the right way. This tale you\'ve poignantly related rends the reader\'s heart, for who can fail to feel for the lovers? Like the misnamed ancient legends, it stands as a warning to passersby. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 8th, 2024 15:32
Cheeky Missy said:
There is a way to do things, and then there\'s all the wrong ways which more may well take successfully, while some likewise perish for having chosen to turn aside nor take the right way. This tale you\'ve poignantly related rends the reader\'s heart, for who can fail to feel for the lovers? Like the misnamed ancient legends, it stands as a warning to passersby. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 8th, 2024 15:32
CA-33 Loch Lomond
sorenbarrett said:
A body of water can be beautiful, soft, giving, and very feminine. Loved the write it was a fun story.
August 16th, 2024 18:13
sorenbarrett said:
A body of water can be beautiful, soft, giving, and very feminine. Loved the write it was a fun story.
August 16th, 2024 18:13
CA-2 Alone at a Cliff Cottage
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful image overall with painted dashes and speckles of interest portrayed. A most lovely picture.
August 14th, 2024 13:05
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful image overall with painted dashes and speckles of interest portrayed. A most lovely picture.
August 14th, 2024 13:05
