Comments received on poems by Lakshya



Winds
TobaniNataiella said:

A heart as light as feathers, lovely line in a beautiful poem, enjoyed the read

December 21st, 2024 10:48

Death
teardrop said:

Great write, awesome thought process. Thank you for the read.

December 19th, 2024 05:52

Red string of fate
Qurrathul Ain said:

Reincarnation in the sense that, we\'ll definitely be brought back to life again after the current one ends. And I also believe in fate binding soulmates. This piece of writing is so beautiful.

December 18th, 2024 09:18

Red string of fate
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of recycled love that never ends

December 17th, 2024 12:46

Death
RSM0812 said:

Sounds like you found your hero.

November 27th, 2024 09:30

Death
2781 said:

The title could be life

November 27th, 2024 08:19

12/11/24
sunshine777 said:

I believe you will

November 26th, 2024 19:53

12/11/24
Young Fella said:

Nice flow. Gorgeous lines. Keep writing

November 12th, 2024 16:37

12/11/24
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 12th, 2024 12:14

Bees and flowers
Lorenz said:

Sensual and sensitive !

September 15th, 2024 12:09

Bees and flowers
MR.apocalypse said:

Short but sweet

September 14th, 2024 20:51

Bees and flowers
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

September 14th, 2024 19:41

Little 🐜 ants
Dan Williams said:

Humans would be so much better off if we modeled our society after ants. Plus, they wildly outnumber us. Good job.

August 31st, 2024 01:18

Little 🐜 ants
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 29th, 2024 18:51

Little 🐜 ants
sorenbarrett said:

Good motivational write

August 29th, 2024 10:54

Big black clouds
ChrisLyn🕊 said:

My heart goes out to those affected by the flood ✨

August 28th, 2024 12:39

World without war
Doggerel Dave said:

If you are really asking, then you must turn to History.

August 27th, 2024 23:04

World without war
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 27th, 2024 15:22

World without war
sorenbarrett said:

War a human thing from beginning to end unfortunately

August 27th, 2024 12:40

Thoughts into reality
sorenbarrett said:

A nice analogy that makes sense

August 26th, 2024 09:39

Key 🔑
sorenbarrett said:

Good advice stated in good poetic form

August 22nd, 2024 15:55

Smile
kwrites said:

just hang in there ! lovely poem

August 21st, 2024 00:51

Smile
Tony36 said:

Love it

August 20th, 2024 11:12

Smile
sorenbarrett said:

Hope so too. A wishful poem that feels light and airy

August 20th, 2024 10:31

Motherly love❤
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful picture and loving thought. Lovely

August 19th, 2024 10:06

Motherly love❤
Tony36 said:

Love it

August 19th, 2024 09:48

Motherly love❤
kwrites said:

loved the description of the poem. a great write!

August 19th, 2024 09:10

Snake vs man
sorenbarrett said:

The title tells it all. And so the metaphor applies to all of us. Nice

August 18th, 2024 12:38

Towards a happy world 🙂✌
Soman Ragavan said:

Towards a happy world
My comments on the poem “Towards a happy world” by Lakshya Murali
Hatred leads to self-destruction. It stays in the mind and destroys you little by little. The best thing is to move on and not try to hit back. Soman Ragavan. 18 August, 2024
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August 17th, 2024 22:53

Lost identity
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 17th, 2024 13:01

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