Comments received on poems by Lakshya



New beginning
sorenbarrett said:

A plea for love and being cared for in metaphor is at the root of this poem. Nicely written

March 30th, 2025 13:11

New beginning
Poetic Licence said:

A well written around the survival of the tree but could also apply to people, especially children, enjoyed the read

March 30th, 2025 11:49

Red string of fate
Bird In Red said:

That one hit hard. Amazing work!

March 7th, 2025 11:30

a hard day!!
Bird In Red said:

I totally see what you mean... Beautifully written, I love it.
Stay strong!

March 7th, 2025 11:29

a hard day!!
TommyDingo said:

Nice write. Theres no true answer for dealing with a bad day but I think no matter how bad a day youve had whatever the problem is its always a lot better tomorrow. I hope your ok

March 3rd, 2025 15:47

Clouds
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

February 9th, 2025 10:48

Clouds
Cassie58 said:

Dreaming on a cloud. Cloudscapes can be so interesting. Love the movement, texture and colour. Enjoyed my visit. Thank you.

February 9th, 2025 03:20

Death
vicecream said:

Wow what a thing to experience. Great write β™₯️

January 3rd, 2025 11:09

31/12/2024
Poetic Licence said:

Sometimes our eyes only see what we want them to, nicely written piece

December 31st, 2024 11:11

Winds
Poetic Licence said:

A heart as light as feathers, lovely line in a beautiful poem, enjoyed the read

December 21st, 2024 10:48

Death
teardrop said:

Great write, awesome thought process. Thank you for the read.

December 19th, 2024 05:52

Red string of fate
Qurrathul Ain said:

Reincarnation in the sense that, we\'ll definitely be brought back to life again after the current one ends. And I also believe in fate binding soulmates. This piece of writing is so beautiful.

December 18th, 2024 09:18

Red string of fate
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of recycled love that never ends

December 17th, 2024 12:46

Death
RSM0812 said:

Sounds like you found your hero.

November 27th, 2024 09:30

Death
2781 said:

The title could be life

November 27th, 2024 08:19

12/11/24
sunshine777 said:

I believe you will

November 26th, 2024 19:53

12/11/24
Young Fella said:

Nice flow. Gorgeous lines. Keep writing

November 12th, 2024 16:37

12/11/24
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 12th, 2024 12:14

Bees and flowers
Lorenz said:

Sensual and sensitive !

September 15th, 2024 12:09

Bees and flowers
MR.apocalypse said:

Short but sweet

September 14th, 2024 20:51

Bees and flowers
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

September 14th, 2024 19:41

Little 🐜 ants
Dan Williams said:

Humans would be so much better off if we modeled our society after ants. Plus, they wildly outnumber us. Good job.

August 31st, 2024 01:18

Little 🐜 ants
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 29th, 2024 18:51

Little 🐜 ants
sorenbarrett said:

Good motivational write

August 29th, 2024 10:54

Big black clouds
ChrisLynπŸ•Š said:

My heart goes out to those affected by the flood ✨

August 28th, 2024 12:39

World without war
Doggerel Dave said:

If you are really asking, then you must turn to History.

August 27th, 2024 23:04

World without war
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 27th, 2024 15:22

World without war
sorenbarrett said:

War a human thing from beginning to end unfortunately

August 27th, 2024 12:40

Thoughts into reality
sorenbarrett said:

A nice analogy that makes sense

August 26th, 2024 09:39

Key πŸ”‘
sorenbarrett said:

Good advice stated in good poetic form

August 22nd, 2024 15:55

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