Comments received on poems by poetaldo
I will avoid the aggravation
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of gratitude and sense of security that feels calming
March 25th, 2025 10:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of gratitude and sense of security that feels calming
March 25th, 2025 10:34
We will come us we are
sorenbarrett said:
Few realize how much their actions affect those around them. A sad write
March 24th, 2025 15:54
sorenbarrett said:
Few realize how much their actions affect those around them. A sad write
March 24th, 2025 15:54
Don\'t talk like that
mvvenkataraman said:
I, at times, think bad of my father,
My brother used to criticize him,
But, my father led a simple life,
Two old pants, and two old shirts,
Even for every joyful festivals,
He will get us new clothes,
But, won\'t buy for him new dress,
He didn\'t have even a cycle to ride,
He used to worry a lot due to his job,
He lived with only saddest thoughts,
He denied not anything for us,
Blood tears come to my eyes,
When I think of his sad life,
We sons were too young to pacify him
We didn\'t have the maturity to console,
Surely it is a curse inflicted by the Lord,
Whenever thoughts about him come,
My heart is filled with deepest sorrows,
He was a genius in math and English,
I must life only once in this world,
After my death I know not my state,
I feel crucified over my dad\'s gloom,
I pray my parents must be in Heaven
Too late as my father died long back,
I am agonized whenever I think of him,
I LOVE THIS POEM AND MY THANKS !
March 23rd, 2025 10:26
mvvenkataraman said:
I, at times, think bad of my father,
My brother used to criticize him,
But, my father led a simple life,
Two old pants, and two old shirts,
Even for every joyful festivals,
He will get us new clothes,
But, won\'t buy for him new dress,
He didn\'t have even a cycle to ride,
He used to worry a lot due to his job,
He lived with only saddest thoughts,
He denied not anything for us,
Blood tears come to my eyes,
When I think of his sad life,
We sons were too young to pacify him
We didn\'t have the maturity to console,
Surely it is a curse inflicted by the Lord,
Whenever thoughts about him come,
My heart is filled with deepest sorrows,
He was a genius in math and English,
I must life only once in this world,
After my death I know not my state,
I feel crucified over my dad\'s gloom,
I pray my parents must be in Heaven
Too late as my father died long back,
I am agonized whenever I think of him,
I LOVE THIS POEM AND MY THANKS !
March 23rd, 2025 10:26
Don\'t talk like that
mvvenkataraman said:
I, at times, think bad of my father,
My brother used to criticize him,
But, my father led a simple life,
Two old pants, and two old shirts,
Even for every joyful festivals,
He will get us new clothes,
But, won\'t buy for him new dress,
He didn\'t have even a cycle to ride,
He used to worry a lot due to his job,
He lived with only saddest thoughts,
He denied not anything for us,
Blood tears come to my eyes,
When I think of his sad life,
We sons were too young to pacify him
We didn\'t have the maturity to console,
Surely it is a curse inflicted by the Lord,
Whenever thoughts about him come,
My heart fill with deepest sorrows,
He was a genius in math and English,
I must life only once in this world,
After my death I know not my state,
I feel crucified over my dad\'s gloom,
I pray my parents must be in Heaven
Too late as my father died long back,
I am agonized whenever I think of him,
I LOVE THIS POEM AND MY THANKS !
March 23rd, 2025 10:26
mvvenkataraman said:
I, at times, think bad of my father,
My brother used to criticize him,
But, my father led a simple life,
Two old pants, and two old shirts,
Even for every joyful festivals,
He will get us new clothes,
But, won\'t buy for him new dress,
He didn\'t have even a cycle to ride,
He used to worry a lot due to his job,
He lived with only saddest thoughts,
He denied not anything for us,
Blood tears come to my eyes,
When I think of his sad life,
We sons were too young to pacify him
We didn\'t have the maturity to console,
Surely it is a curse inflicted by the Lord,
Whenever thoughts about him come,
My heart fill with deepest sorrows,
He was a genius in math and English,
I must life only once in this world,
After my death I know not my state,
I feel crucified over my dad\'s gloom,
I pray my parents must be in Heaven
Too late as my father died long back,
I am agonized whenever I think of him,
I LOVE THIS POEM AND MY THANKS !
March 23rd, 2025 10:26
Don\'t talk like that
mvvenkataraman said:
I, at times, think bad of my father,
My brother used to criticize him,
But, my father led a simple life,
Two old pants, and two old shirts,
Even for every joyful festivals,
He will get us new clothes,
But, won\'t buy for him new dress,
He didn\'t have even a cycle to ride,
He used to worry a lot due to his job,
He lived with only saddest thoughts,
He denied not anything for us,
Blood tears come to my eyes,
When I think of his sad life,
We sons were too young to pacify him
We didn\'t have the maturity to console,
Surely it is a curse inflicted by the Lord,
Whenever thoughts about him come,
My heart fill with deepest sorrows,
He was a genius in math and English,
I must life only once in this world,
After my death I know not my state,
I feel crucified over my dad\'s gloom,
I pray my parents must be in Heaven
Too late as my father died long back,
I am agonized whenever I think of him,
I LOVE THIS POEM AND MY THANKS !
March 23rd, 2025 10:26
mvvenkataraman said:
I, at times, think bad of my father,
My brother used to criticize him,
But, my father led a simple life,
Two old pants, and two old shirts,
Even for every joyful festivals,
He will get us new clothes,
But, won\'t buy for him new dress,
He didn\'t have even a cycle to ride,
He used to worry a lot due to his job,
He lived with only saddest thoughts,
He denied not anything for us,
Blood tears come to my eyes,
When I think of his sad life,
We sons were too young to pacify him
We didn\'t have the maturity to console,
Surely it is a curse inflicted by the Lord,
Whenever thoughts about him come,
My heart fill with deepest sorrows,
He was a genius in math and English,
I must life only once in this world,
After my death I know not my state,
I feel crucified over my dad\'s gloom,
I pray my parents must be in Heaven
Too late as my father died long back,
I am agonized whenever I think of him,
I LOVE THIS POEM AND MY THANKS !
March 23rd, 2025 10:26
Don\'t talk like that
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of meaning. Respect should be given to all and most of all to those that created us, parents and should we believe in God then the same. A lovely write.
March 23rd, 2025 07:51
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of meaning. Respect should be given to all and most of all to those that created us, parents and should we believe in God then the same. A lovely write.
March 23rd, 2025 07:51
We had so many days without the sun
sorenbarrett said:
A humble and unassuming poem of acceptance of the weather and of following and helping. Nicely done
March 23rd, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
A humble and unassuming poem of acceptance of the weather and of following and helping. Nicely done
March 23rd, 2025 04:20
We had so many days without the sun
Poetic Licence said:
The sun will return soon, take care
March 23rd, 2025 03:31
Poetic Licence said:
The sun will return soon, take care
March 23rd, 2025 03:31
Brother if I lose you some day
sorenbarrett said:
A touching poem of fraternity between brothers and although separated by distance not by love. Very nicely done
March 21st, 2025 13:53
sorenbarrett said:
A touching poem of fraternity between brothers and although separated by distance not by love. Very nicely done
March 21st, 2025 13:53
My conscious is clean
Poetic Licence said:
A clear message stated in a message to siblings
March 21st, 2025 03:20
Poetic Licence said:
A clear message stated in a message to siblings
March 21st, 2025 03:20
Think like a poet
sorenbarrett said:
A prayer like poem acknowledging the frailties of man and asking for help to fix the wrongs of the world. Nicely done
March 15th, 2025 06:05
sorenbarrett said:
A prayer like poem acknowledging the frailties of man and asking for help to fix the wrongs of the world. Nicely done
March 15th, 2025 06:05
Baby don\'t leave me
sorenbarrett said:
Hopefully not at least not soon. A heartfelt write
March 14th, 2025 13:39
sorenbarrett said:
Hopefully not at least not soon. A heartfelt write
March 14th, 2025 13:39
Please tell me
sorenbarrett said:
Trust is a difficult thing to build. A heartfelt plea nicely written
March 9th, 2025 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
Trust is a difficult thing to build. A heartfelt plea nicely written
March 9th, 2025 09:37
Please tell me
2781 said:
Look unto Abraham your father, and Sarah that bare you: for I called him alone, and blessed him, and increased him.
For the Lord shall comfort Zion: he will comfort all her waste place\'s; and he will make her wilderness like Eden, and her desert like the garden of the Lord; Joy and gladness shall be found therein, thanksgiving and the voice of melody.
March 9th, 2025 09:06
2781 said:
Look unto Abraham your father, and Sarah that bare you: for I called him alone, and blessed him, and increased him.
For the Lord shall comfort Zion: he will comfort all her waste place\'s; and he will make her wilderness like Eden, and her desert like the garden of the Lord; Joy and gladness shall be found therein, thanksgiving and the voice of melody.
March 9th, 2025 09:06
A universe of thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
Another poem of gratitude nicely said
March 8th, 2025 09:25
sorenbarrett said:
Another poem of gratitude nicely said
March 8th, 2025 09:25
show me the meaning of being together
poetaldo said:
Thanks for reading my poem
I am glad you liked it
March 7th, 2025 13:17
poetaldo said:
Thanks for reading my poem
I am glad you liked it
March 7th, 2025 13:17
show me the meaning of being together
sorenbarrett said:
Common everyday activities put poetically
March 7th, 2025 11:17
sorenbarrett said:
Common everyday activities put poetically
March 7th, 2025 11:17
Someone like me
sorenbarrett said:
Accepting oneself for who one is may be the key issue
March 6th, 2025 13:59
sorenbarrett said:
Accepting oneself for who one is may be the key issue
March 6th, 2025 13:59
Cómo Foi?
sorenbarrett said:
A lesson from the sun arise over blue sea and then to bed. Boungiorno
March 5th, 2025 07:48
sorenbarrett said:
A lesson from the sun arise over blue sea and then to bed. Boungiorno
March 5th, 2025 07:48
It is so hard to live without you My father
poetaldo said:
I am happy you enjoy reading my poem
March 4th, 2025 15:44
poetaldo said:
I am happy you enjoy reading my poem
March 4th, 2025 15:44
It is so hard to live without you My father
sorenbarrett said:
Thankfulness one of the most neglected and most important elements of life expressed so humbly in this wonderful poem that reads as a prayer
March 4th, 2025 11:27
sorenbarrett said:
Thankfulness one of the most neglected and most important elements of life expressed so humbly in this wonderful poem that reads as a prayer
March 4th, 2025 11:27
Father will be there
Cassie58 said:
I hope you will always have that faith to sustain you in times of need. I hear you poetaldo.
March 4th, 2025 03:27
Cassie58 said:
I hope you will always have that faith to sustain you in times of need. I hear you poetaldo.
March 4th, 2025 03:27
Father I feel so good to be loved by you
Cassie58 said:
We all need a loving father. A poem of thanks poetaldo.
March 2nd, 2025 17:32
Cassie58 said:
We all need a loving father. A poem of thanks poetaldo.
March 2nd, 2025 17:32
Father I feel so good to be loved by you
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of gratitude to one\'s father. A most lovely write.
March 2nd, 2025 15:08
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of gratitude to one\'s father. A most lovely write.
March 2nd, 2025 15:08
Father I feel so good to be loved by you
Poetic Licence said:
Enjoyed the read, take care
March 2nd, 2025 14:59
Poetic Licence said:
Enjoyed the read, take care
March 2nd, 2025 14:59
Without dreams we have nothing
Poetic Licence said:
I sense someone finding peace, enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2025 01:31
Poetic Licence said:
I sense someone finding peace, enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2025 01:31
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