Comments received on poems by poetaldo
Give this child what she needs
sorenbarrett said:
A poem asking those things that all children of any age need. Very nice
March 30th, 2025 14:27
sorenbarrett said:
A poem asking those things that all children of any age need. Very nice
March 30th, 2025 14:27
I had a wrong impression Of him
sorenbarrett said:
How do we tret others and what do they suffer. A metaphor
March 29th, 2025 05:25
sorenbarrett said:
How do we tret others and what do they suffer. A metaphor
March 29th, 2025 05:25
Amor I love you
sorenbarrett said:
A great sense of gratitude of what one has and is given. Very nicely done
March 28th, 2025 08:59
sorenbarrett said:
A great sense of gratitude of what one has and is given. Very nicely done
March 28th, 2025 08:59
Sunny boy
Bragee said:
Sometimes true happiness comes in the form of solitude.
Great writing!
March 27th, 2025 07:51
Bragee said:
Sometimes true happiness comes in the form of solitude.
Great writing!
March 27th, 2025 07:51
Sunny boy
sorenbarrett said:
Better to avoid those that look only for money in a relationship. It is better to remain single than have that type of companionship. Good write
March 27th, 2025 07:30
sorenbarrett said:
Better to avoid those that look only for money in a relationship. It is better to remain single than have that type of companionship. Good write
March 27th, 2025 07:30
Mother Nature is being a bitch
sorenbarrett said:
A longing for spring being tired of winter comes through in this poem. Very nice
March 26th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
A longing for spring being tired of winter comes through in this poem. Very nice
March 26th, 2025 04:40
I will avoid the aggravation
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of gratitude and sense of security that feels calming
March 25th, 2025 10:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of gratitude and sense of security that feels calming
March 25th, 2025 10:34
We will come us we are
sorenbarrett said:
Few realize how much their actions affect those around them. A sad write
March 24th, 2025 15:54
sorenbarrett said:
Few realize how much their actions affect those around them. A sad write
March 24th, 2025 15:54
Don\'t talk like that
mvvenkataraman said:
I, at times, think bad of my father,
My brother used to criticize him,
But, my father led a simple life,
Two old pants, and two old shirts,
Even for every joyful festivals,
He will get us new clothes,
But, won\'t buy for him new dress,
He didn\'t have even a cycle to ride,
He used to worry a lot due to his job,
He lived with only saddest thoughts,
He denied not anything for us,
Blood tears come to my eyes,
When I think of his sad life,
We sons were too young to pacify him
We didn\'t have the maturity to console,
Surely it is a curse inflicted by the Lord,
Whenever thoughts about him come,
My heart is filled with deepest sorrows,
He was a genius in math and English,
I must life only once in this world,
After my death I know not my state,
I feel crucified over my dad\'s gloom,
I pray my parents must be in Heaven
Too late as my father died long back,
I am agonized whenever I think of him,
I LOVE THIS POEM AND MY THANKS !
March 23rd, 2025 10:26
mvvenkataraman said:
I, at times, think bad of my father,
My brother used to criticize him,
But, my father led a simple life,
Two old pants, and two old shirts,
Even for every joyful festivals,
He will get us new clothes,
But, won\'t buy for him new dress,
He didn\'t have even a cycle to ride,
He used to worry a lot due to his job,
He lived with only saddest thoughts,
He denied not anything for us,
Blood tears come to my eyes,
When I think of his sad life,
We sons were too young to pacify him
We didn\'t have the maturity to console,
Surely it is a curse inflicted by the Lord,
Whenever thoughts about him come,
My heart is filled with deepest sorrows,
He was a genius in math and English,
I must life only once in this world,
After my death I know not my state,
I feel crucified over my dad\'s gloom,
I pray my parents must be in Heaven
Too late as my father died long back,
I am agonized whenever I think of him,
I LOVE THIS POEM AND MY THANKS !
March 23rd, 2025 10:26
Don\'t talk like that
mvvenkataraman said:
I, at times, think bad of my father,
My brother used to criticize him,
But, my father led a simple life,
Two old pants, and two old shirts,
Even for every joyful festivals,
He will get us new clothes,
But, won\'t buy for him new dress,
He didn\'t have even a cycle to ride,
He used to worry a lot due to his job,
He lived with only saddest thoughts,
He denied not anything for us,
Blood tears come to my eyes,
When I think of his sad life,
We sons were too young to pacify him
We didn\'t have the maturity to console,
Surely it is a curse inflicted by the Lord,
Whenever thoughts about him come,
My heart fill with deepest sorrows,
He was a genius in math and English,
I must life only once in this world,
After my death I know not my state,
I feel crucified over my dad\'s gloom,
I pray my parents must be in Heaven
Too late as my father died long back,
I am agonized whenever I think of him,
I LOVE THIS POEM AND MY THANKS !
March 23rd, 2025 10:26
mvvenkataraman said:
I, at times, think bad of my father,
My brother used to criticize him,
But, my father led a simple life,
Two old pants, and two old shirts,
Even for every joyful festivals,
He will get us new clothes,
But, won\'t buy for him new dress,
He didn\'t have even a cycle to ride,
He used to worry a lot due to his job,
He lived with only saddest thoughts,
He denied not anything for us,
Blood tears come to my eyes,
When I think of his sad life,
We sons were too young to pacify him
We didn\'t have the maturity to console,
Surely it is a curse inflicted by the Lord,
Whenever thoughts about him come,
My heart fill with deepest sorrows,
He was a genius in math and English,
I must life only once in this world,
After my death I know not my state,
I feel crucified over my dad\'s gloom,
I pray my parents must be in Heaven
Too late as my father died long back,
I am agonized whenever I think of him,
I LOVE THIS POEM AND MY THANKS !
March 23rd, 2025 10:26
Don\'t talk like that
mvvenkataraman said:
I, at times, think bad of my father,
My brother used to criticize him,
But, my father led a simple life,
Two old pants, and two old shirts,
Even for every joyful festivals,
He will get us new clothes,
But, won\'t buy for him new dress,
He didn\'t have even a cycle to ride,
He used to worry a lot due to his job,
He lived with only saddest thoughts,
He denied not anything for us,
Blood tears come to my eyes,
When I think of his sad life,
We sons were too young to pacify him
We didn\'t have the maturity to console,
Surely it is a curse inflicted by the Lord,
Whenever thoughts about him come,
My heart fill with deepest sorrows,
He was a genius in math and English,
I must life only once in this world,
After my death I know not my state,
I feel crucified over my dad\'s gloom,
I pray my parents must be in Heaven
Too late as my father died long back,
I am agonized whenever I think of him,
I LOVE THIS POEM AND MY THANKS !
March 23rd, 2025 10:26
mvvenkataraman said:
I, at times, think bad of my father,
My brother used to criticize him,
But, my father led a simple life,
Two old pants, and two old shirts,
Even for every joyful festivals,
He will get us new clothes,
But, won\'t buy for him new dress,
He didn\'t have even a cycle to ride,
He used to worry a lot due to his job,
He lived with only saddest thoughts,
He denied not anything for us,
Blood tears come to my eyes,
When I think of his sad life,
We sons were too young to pacify him
We didn\'t have the maturity to console,
Surely it is a curse inflicted by the Lord,
Whenever thoughts about him come,
My heart fill with deepest sorrows,
He was a genius in math and English,
I must life only once in this world,
After my death I know not my state,
I feel crucified over my dad\'s gloom,
I pray my parents must be in Heaven
Too late as my father died long back,
I am agonized whenever I think of him,
I LOVE THIS POEM AND MY THANKS !
March 23rd, 2025 10:26
Don\'t talk like that
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of meaning. Respect should be given to all and most of all to those that created us, parents and should we believe in God then the same. A lovely write.
March 23rd, 2025 07:51
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of meaning. Respect should be given to all and most of all to those that created us, parents and should we believe in God then the same. A lovely write.
March 23rd, 2025 07:51
We had so many days without the sun
sorenbarrett said:
A humble and unassuming poem of acceptance of the weather and of following and helping. Nicely done
March 23rd, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
A humble and unassuming poem of acceptance of the weather and of following and helping. Nicely done
March 23rd, 2025 04:20
We had so many days without the sun
Poetic Licence said:
The sun will return soon, take care
March 23rd, 2025 03:31
Poetic Licence said:
The sun will return soon, take care
March 23rd, 2025 03:31
Brother if I lose you some day
sorenbarrett said:
A touching poem of fraternity between brothers and although separated by distance not by love. Very nicely done
March 21st, 2025 13:53
sorenbarrett said:
A touching poem of fraternity between brothers and although separated by distance not by love. Very nicely done
March 21st, 2025 13:53
My conscious is clean
Poetic Licence said:
A clear message stated in a message to siblings
March 21st, 2025 03:20
Poetic Licence said:
A clear message stated in a message to siblings
March 21st, 2025 03:20
Think like a poet
sorenbarrett said:
A prayer like poem acknowledging the frailties of man and asking for help to fix the wrongs of the world. Nicely done
March 15th, 2025 06:05
sorenbarrett said:
A prayer like poem acknowledging the frailties of man and asking for help to fix the wrongs of the world. Nicely done
March 15th, 2025 06:05
Baby don\'t leave me
sorenbarrett said:
Hopefully not at least not soon. A heartfelt write
March 14th, 2025 13:39
sorenbarrett said:
Hopefully not at least not soon. A heartfelt write
March 14th, 2025 13:39
Please tell me
sorenbarrett said:
Trust is a difficult thing to build. A heartfelt plea nicely written
March 9th, 2025 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
Trust is a difficult thing to build. A heartfelt plea nicely written
March 9th, 2025 09:37
Please tell me
2781 said:
Look unto Abraham your father, and Sarah that bare you: for I called him alone, and blessed him, and increased him.
For the Lord shall comfort Zion: he will comfort all her waste place\'s; and he will make her wilderness like Eden, and her desert like the garden of the Lord; Joy and gladness shall be found therein, thanksgiving and the voice of melody.
March 9th, 2025 09:06
2781 said:
Look unto Abraham your father, and Sarah that bare you: for I called him alone, and blessed him, and increased him.
For the Lord shall comfort Zion: he will comfort all her waste place\'s; and he will make her wilderness like Eden, and her desert like the garden of the Lord; Joy and gladness shall be found therein, thanksgiving and the voice of melody.
March 9th, 2025 09:06
A universe of thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
Another poem of gratitude nicely said
March 8th, 2025 09:25
sorenbarrett said:
Another poem of gratitude nicely said
March 8th, 2025 09:25
show me the meaning of being together
poetaldo said:
Thanks for reading my poem
I am glad you liked it
March 7th, 2025 13:17
poetaldo said:
Thanks for reading my poem
I am glad you liked it
March 7th, 2025 13:17
show me the meaning of being together
sorenbarrett said:
Common everyday activities put poetically
March 7th, 2025 11:17
sorenbarrett said:
Common everyday activities put poetically
March 7th, 2025 11:17
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