Comments received on poems by CarnationsCaretaker



Lay your Eyes
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 5th, 2024 12:25

A Mannequin\'s Scars
Dan Williams said:

This is just exquisite. Phrasing and imagery can bring tears. Very nicely done.

September 23rd, 2024 00:17

A Mannequin\'s Scars
NinjaGirl said:

The worst part about being a mannequin is that they can position you and dress you how they want

September 22nd, 2024 16:30

A Mannequin\'s Scars
Cheeky Missy said:

You know, that was the classic means to liven up casual passersby window-shopping: when one of the poised mannequins evinced a note of life. Nothing like being forever behind the glass, watching the world collecting all you wanted whiles you could not. Beautifully rendered with an excellently haunting poignancy which half eats at the reader\'s soul. Thank you for sharing.

September 22nd, 2024 13:46

The Serpent\'s Cocktail
redenanimous said:

Excellent write

September 12th, 2024 10:02

That Final Page
Cheeky Missy said:

Well you done done it now, gone and made me whistle in concluding, nothing else to say thus after that. My la! What have you done?!

September 1st, 2024 15:20

The Serpent\'s Cocktail
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 30th, 2024 09:40

Queen of the Night
Tony36 said:

Love it

August 29th, 2024 06:45

Queen of the Night
sorenbarrett said:

Fanciful, short and nicely done

August 29th, 2024 05:52

Empty Skies
sorenbarrett said:

Images pregnant with meaning that bleeds through walls of words

August 28th, 2024 06:52

A Witch\'s Longing
sorenbarrett said:

I read this poem three times and it still echoes

August 26th, 2024 09:21