Comments received on poems by CarnationsCaretaker
A Mannequin\'s Scars
Dan Williams said:
This is just exquisite. Phrasing and imagery can bring tears. Very nicely done.
September 23rd, 2024 00:17
Dan Williams said:
This is just exquisite. Phrasing and imagery can bring tears. Very nicely done.
September 23rd, 2024 00:17
A Mannequin\'s Scars
NinjaGirl said:
The worst part about being a mannequin is that they can position you and dress you how they want
September 22nd, 2024 16:30
NinjaGirl said:
The worst part about being a mannequin is that they can position you and dress you how they want
September 22nd, 2024 16:30
A Mannequin\'s Scars
Cheeky Missy said:
You know, that was the classic means to liven up casual passersby window-shopping: when one of the poised mannequins evinced a note of life. Nothing like being forever behind the glass, watching the world collecting all you wanted whiles you could not. Beautifully rendered with an excellently haunting poignancy which half eats at the reader\'s soul. Thank you for sharing.
September 22nd, 2024 13:46
Cheeky Missy said:
You know, that was the classic means to liven up casual passersby window-shopping: when one of the poised mannequins evinced a note of life. Nothing like being forever behind the glass, watching the world collecting all you wanted whiles you could not. Beautifully rendered with an excellently haunting poignancy which half eats at the reader\'s soul. Thank you for sharing.
September 22nd, 2024 13:46
That Final Page
Cheeky Missy said:
Well you done done it now, gone and made me whistle in concluding, nothing else to say thus after that. My la! What have you done?!
September 1st, 2024 15:20
Cheeky Missy said:
Well you done done it now, gone and made me whistle in concluding, nothing else to say thus after that. My la! What have you done?!
September 1st, 2024 15:20
Empty Skies
sorenbarrett said:
Images pregnant with meaning that bleeds through walls of words
August 28th, 2024 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
Images pregnant with meaning that bleeds through walls of words
August 28th, 2024 06:52
A Witch\'s Longing
sorenbarrett said:
I read this poem three times and it still echoes
August 26th, 2024 09:21
sorenbarrett said:
I read this poem three times and it still echoes
August 26th, 2024 09:21