Comments received on poems by Princess Osariemen Aihie
Bent but not broken
sorenbarrett said:
A shame to ridicule what one has no control over. A sad write but in the very least at least you had each other many face it on their own. Well done.
October 12th, 2025 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
A shame to ridicule what one has no control over. A sad write but in the very least at least you had each other many face it on their own. Well done.
October 12th, 2025 09:51
A bed of pain
sorenbarrett said:
Another write of being dominated by a stronger force. Once again the question from the helpless as to what has to be done to escape. Nicely written
October 9th, 2025 10:36
sorenbarrett said:
Another write of being dominated by a stronger force. Once again the question from the helpless as to what has to be done to escape. Nicely written
October 9th, 2025 10:36
Truth revealed
NinjaGirl said:
Well, if that\'s the truth, it\'s certainly one that should be shared!
October 8th, 2025 20:26
NinjaGirl said:
Well, if that\'s the truth, it\'s certainly one that should be shared!
October 8th, 2025 20:26
Truth revealed
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of helplessness and hopelessness in a brutal situation. Hard to read and dark. Well written and powerful
October 8th, 2025 16:03
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of helplessness and hopelessness in a brutal situation. Hard to read and dark. Well written and powerful
October 8th, 2025 16:03
Trapped
sorenbarrett said:
Ah open ended this could be what ever the reader is in the mood for. A lovely way to leave things hanging. Nicely penned
October 7th, 2025 18:14
sorenbarrett said:
Ah open ended this could be what ever the reader is in the mood for. A lovely way to leave things hanging. Nicely penned
October 7th, 2025 18:14
Heart beat
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the unknown that is felt but not understood as many things are. There is a sense of apprehension in this poem
October 6th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the unknown that is felt but not understood as many things are. There is a sense of apprehension in this poem
October 6th, 2025 04:14
Lost father
sorenbarrett said:
A most unique story two victims with a bonding tie not only in blood but abuse. I ask myself is this about support or relationship. Nicely written
October 5th, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
A most unique story two victims with a bonding tie not only in blood but abuse. I ask myself is this about support or relationship. Nicely written
October 5th, 2025 04:06
A cold night
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of aloneness, threat, danger, exposure to the elements, hunger, dirtiness to this poem that feels dark and with little hope. This is countered by the ending statement where hope seeps in just a bit in a question. Nicely written it is raw and cold.
October 4th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of aloneness, threat, danger, exposure to the elements, hunger, dirtiness to this poem that feels dark and with little hope. This is countered by the ending statement where hope seeps in just a bit in a question. Nicely written it is raw and cold.
October 4th, 2025 04:05
A cold night
Poetic Licence said:
Feels like a very desparate and sad road to be traveling, but clearly traveling it for good reason, hopefully it is an angel you found, take care
October 4th, 2025 02:12
Poetic Licence said:
Feels like a very desparate and sad road to be traveling, but clearly traveling it for good reason, hopefully it is an angel you found, take care
October 4th, 2025 02:12
Peace but pieces
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of questioning oneself and actions in this poem that leaves outcome in the air. Nicely done
October 3rd, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of questioning oneself and actions in this poem that leaves outcome in the air. Nicely done
October 3rd, 2025 04:42
Peace but pieces
Brokensoul1425 said:
I love you poem, your work reminds me a lot of my own.
October 3rd, 2025 02:39
Brokensoul1425 said:
I love you poem, your work reminds me a lot of my own.
October 3rd, 2025 02:39
Black heart
sorenbarrett said:
Physical abuse a danger in that if not stopped it can grow and be life threatening. If reporting does not work due to cultural bias one must consider leaving. A tragic and sad poem of abuse.
October 2nd, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Physical abuse a danger in that if not stopped it can grow and be life threatening. If reporting does not work due to cultural bias one must consider leaving. A tragic and sad poem of abuse.
October 2nd, 2025 04:06
National freedom: At 65
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to a country. Nicely written
October 1st, 2025 10:57
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to a country. Nicely written
October 1st, 2025 10:57
Shattered silence
sorenbarrett said:
This is a tragic poem of abuse and sadness. The direct question of reporting pulls the reader to say absolutely but may be more complicated than that. Would reporting put one\'s life at risk, what would happen after, would it be heard, further abuse. Can one get out another way. I love poems that create so many questions and leave it to the reader to answer them they are mind provoking and that is one of the elements that makes a good poem. A fave
September 30th, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
This is a tragic poem of abuse and sadness. The direct question of reporting pulls the reader to say absolutely but may be more complicated than that. Would reporting put one\'s life at risk, what would happen after, would it be heard, further abuse. Can one get out another way. I love poems that create so many questions and leave it to the reader to answer them they are mind provoking and that is one of the elements that makes a good poem. A fave
September 30th, 2025 04:21
Can anything come out of my Nation?
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for your contribution to the fusion
September 29th, 2025 19:40
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for your contribution to the fusion
September 29th, 2025 19:40
Can anything come out of my Nation?
Paul Bell said:
Yes, if a nation is rich in materials, you just know it is going to get exploited.
You can see why populations are on the move all around the world.
September 28th, 2025 08:39
Paul Bell said:
Yes, if a nation is rich in materials, you just know it is going to get exploited.
You can see why populations are on the move all around the world.
September 28th, 2025 08:39
Can anything come out of my Nation?
sorenbarrett said:
Valid questions raised in this poem as I in a developed nation would raise others, the obverse of what good is development where many don\'t experience it, where it uses its strength to bully less developed nations and threaten other strong nations where corruption runs rampant and and development is bought by loss of freedom.
September 28th, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
Valid questions raised in this poem as I in a developed nation would raise others, the obverse of what good is development where many don\'t experience it, where it uses its strength to bully less developed nations and threaten other strong nations where corruption runs rampant and and development is bought by loss of freedom.
September 28th, 2025 04:58
Wishes
sorenbarrett said:
Never liked envy and how old can one get if a horse they last about 20 to 30 years. A fun poem and made me think
September 27th, 2025 17:04
sorenbarrett said:
Never liked envy and how old can one get if a horse they last about 20 to 30 years. A fun poem and made me think
September 27th, 2025 17:04
Lonely
David Welch said:
Definitely shows the pitfalls on the online friendship situation.
September 26th, 2025 21:19
David Welch said:
Definitely shows the pitfalls on the online friendship situation.
September 26th, 2025 21:19
Great Benin:Ancient Benin
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic statement of one\'s culture most nicely done
September 25th, 2025 19:23
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic statement of one\'s culture most nicely done
September 25th, 2025 19:23
Missing Poetry
sorenbarrett said:
Glad to hear from you again. Nicely written a love for poetry.
September 24th, 2025 17:14
sorenbarrett said:
Glad to hear from you again. Nicely written a love for poetry.
September 24th, 2025 17:14
Addict Plea
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Fantastic- the understated, unforced style with the absence of melodrama makes it hit so hard.
August 26th, 2025 09:35
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Fantastic- the understated, unforced style with the absence of melodrama makes it hit so hard.
August 26th, 2025 09:35
Drugs
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write, the ever increasing dangers and addictions to medication, and the consequences that follow, nicely expressed and written
August 13th, 2025 13:43
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write, the ever increasing dangers and addictions to medication, and the consequences that follow, nicely expressed and written
August 13th, 2025 13:43
Drugs
Demar Desu said:
Wait which drugs are we talking about? I need my coffee !
August 13th, 2025 13:22
Demar Desu said:
Wait which drugs are we talking about? I need my coffee !
August 13th, 2025 13:22
Drugs
sorenbarrett said:
Many times the side effects of medication are worse that the ailment for which it is taken. A powerful read
August 13th, 2025 13:14
sorenbarrett said:
Many times the side effects of medication are worse that the ailment for which it is taken. A powerful read
August 13th, 2025 13:14
Tech -kill
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Nice write! It is a call out asking if artificial intelligence is a help or foe? For me, it depends. It is here to stay. It\'s here to help, but when man tries to replicate human essence or replace humanity with it, then it could be more dangerous to us than we think.
August 12th, 2025 17:57
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Nice write! It is a call out asking if artificial intelligence is a help or foe? For me, it depends. It is here to stay. It\'s here to help, but when man tries to replicate human essence or replace humanity with it, then it could be more dangerous to us than we think.
August 12th, 2025 17:57
Tech -kill
Poetic Licence said:
I sense will technology bring around death to us all, interesting and nicely written write
August 12th, 2025 16:19
Poetic Licence said:
I sense will technology bring around death to us all, interesting and nicely written write
August 12th, 2025 16:19
Tech -kill
sorenbarrett said:
Is death the answer is the question either by others or oneself? A mind provoking write.
August 12th, 2025 16:07
sorenbarrett said:
Is death the answer is the question either by others or oneself? A mind provoking write.
August 12th, 2025 16:07
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