Comments received on poems by VeryYrev



the last mosquito on a winter night
peet said:

Sad reality of every life form and well written.

October 11th, 2024 13:49

The flown birds
2781 said:

You may be onto something

September 28th, 2024 05:13

the cover of a poetry collection.
VeryYrev said:

这是一本诗集的封面。
黄绿的颜色因时间浸染上一层金属感，失去春季感觉的同时，它拥有了某种暗含魔力的语言，它对揽入怀中的形象耳语道：
在细密的根须抽离你的脐带之前，在纤弱稀疏的枝条与窄长的叶子分解你的躯体之前，在钟形花冠对着你悄悄歌唱之前，或者当你的分身处于休眠未知其最终形态，而你可能因缺乏扶持左右摇摆，长时间的不稳定令你失去成长的信心之前……你仍偶尔有梦，比如，当周围的一切花繁叶茂，那不属于你的朝霞一动不动的悬浮在倒映着你光秃枝节的死水上。


September 25th, 2024 06:27

So，why are you doing useless things?
Tony36 said:

The usefulness of both poetry and life, depends on how you fill in the blank pages

September 24th, 2024 14:42

So，why are you doing useless things?
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:

Thank you! Good poem.

September 24th, 2024 03:35

So，why are you doing useless things?
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:

Poetry are words on a page, but those words are ink drops from the tears of a poet, we write poetry to release emotions in ways that help us best.
And we\'re alive to understand and fulfill Gods plan for us.

September 24th, 2024 03:21

What has the world received from poets?
Lorenz said:

Poetry has the colors of useless ...

September 23rd, 2024 10:15

What has the world received from poets?
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

September 23rd, 2024 06:46

What has the world received from poets?
Doggerel Dave said:

Read this on two separate occasions, and while I find this an engrossing argument, I\'m not absolutely sure what your point is with respect to poets...

September 23rd, 2024 02:23

What has the world received from poets?
2781 said:

Without others though, there might be no poetry.

September 23rd, 2024 02:18