Comments received on poems by isa kemmy
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sorenbarrett said:
A poem is often more interesting with neologisms and here we have some. A most engaging read
October 27th, 2025 14:08
sorenbarrett said:
A poem is often more interesting with neologisms and here we have some. A most engaging read
October 27th, 2025 14:08
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peto said:
The last two words seem the perfect title for this
Ceaseless commotion
Thoroughly enjoyed the read
October 27th, 2025 12:30
peto said:
The last two words seem the perfect title for this
Ceaseless commotion
Thoroughly enjoyed the read
October 27th, 2025 12:30
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay! First comment!!! That image—“glued on bitumen”—stuck with me. It’s so physical, gritty, and symbolic of what it means to be grounded against your will. Stark and brilliant. As such, \"Bitumen Dreams\" could be a cool title. Yet, this also feels like a hymn for the broken-winged. So, perhaps \"Gravity\'s Hymn\"? Those two came to me while reading. Regardless, beautiful poem! A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2025 09:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay! First comment!!! That image—“glued on bitumen”—stuck with me. It’s so physical, gritty, and symbolic of what it means to be grounded against your will. Stark and brilliant. As such, \"Bitumen Dreams\" could be a cool title. Yet, this also feels like a hymn for the broken-winged. So, perhaps \"Gravity\'s Hymn\"? Those two came to me while reading. Regardless, beautiful poem! A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2025 09:48
The Dark’s Honest Contract
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Isa, this piece breathes serenity. The rhythm, the natural imagery, the quiet resolve...it all folds into a hymn for solitude. Gentle, faithful, and true. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2025 09:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Isa, this piece breathes serenity. The rhythm, the natural imagery, the quiet resolve...it all folds into a hymn for solitude. Gentle, faithful, and true. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2025 09:05
The Dark’s Honest Contract
rhmn_7 said:
I like your style of writing, it really flows while reading.
October 26th, 2025 16:13
rhmn_7 said:
I like your style of writing, it really flows while reading.
October 26th, 2025 16:13
The Dark’s Honest Contract
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful sending a message that can be felt. Nicely written
October 26th, 2025 14:43
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful sending a message that can be felt. Nicely written
October 26th, 2025 14:43
The uneven pact
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reclamation after a relationship ruined. Powerful and I love the form and the reversal at the end. Well done 🔥
October 19th, 2025 11:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reclamation after a relationship ruined. Powerful and I love the form and the reversal at the end. Well done 🔥
October 19th, 2025 11:24
The uneven pact
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reclamation regarding a relationship taken advantage of. A lovely write.
October 19th, 2025 10:27
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reclamation regarding a relationship taken advantage of. A lovely write.
October 19th, 2025 10:27
TO you the Unbowed: final conversation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Isa, this is powerful…a thunderous elegy that still manages to kneel in respect. Every line carries both grief and gratitude. Remarkable tribute, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 18th, 2025 08:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Isa, this is powerful…a thunderous elegy that still manages to kneel in respect. Every line carries both grief and gratitude. Remarkable tribute, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 18th, 2025 08:08
TO you the Unbowed: final conversation
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads well and seems almost a soliloquy with rhyme. It is a poem of praise and yet spoken to break the fourth wall. Nicely done
October 18th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads well and seems almost a soliloquy with rhyme. It is a poem of praise and yet spoken to break the fourth wall. Nicely done
October 18th, 2025 04:34
THE IRONY OF THE FULL HAND
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Isa, this is exquisite…a parable dressed as a poem. The rhythm, the insight, the restraint...it all builds to that final truth like ripened fruit ready to fall. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 17th, 2025 10:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Isa, this is exquisite…a parable dressed as a poem. The rhythm, the insight, the restraint...it all builds to that final truth like ripened fruit ready to fall. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 17th, 2025 10:58
THE IRONY OF THE FULL HAND
Paul Bell said:
Yes, sometimes happiness is just closing the door behind you and walking away.
Dead moss never grows on a Mick Jagger.
October 17th, 2025 08:42
Paul Bell said:
Yes, sometimes happiness is just closing the door behind you and walking away.
Dead moss never grows on a Mick Jagger.
October 17th, 2025 08:42
THE IRONY OF THE FULL HAND
sorenbarrett said:
A great moral in this poem. Many parents hold on too long and too hard creating rot on the tree. Nicely worded in most poetic form and rhyme
October 17th, 2025 08:26
sorenbarrett said:
A great moral in this poem. Many parents hold on too long and too hard creating rot on the tree. Nicely worded in most poetic form and rhyme
October 17th, 2025 08:26
THE IRONY OF THE FULL HAND
2781 said:
Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends.
October 17th, 2025 07:55
2781 said:
Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends.
October 17th, 2025 07:55
Migräne
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well written, Isa, and described as the beast a migraine is. Well done!
October 14th, 2025 07:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well written, Isa, and described as the beast a migraine is. Well done!
October 14th, 2025 07:58
Migräne
sorenbarrett said:
A wild beast that attacks when least expected a preditor of ambush. Well written
October 13th, 2025 11:56
sorenbarrett said:
A wild beast that attacks when least expected a preditor of ambush. Well written
October 13th, 2025 11:56
when leaves fall
isa kemmy said:
one thing about poetry , its open to different enterpretations. upon writing i wanted to bring the theme of letting go, am open to any analogy . i myself have been reading it and am seeing so many reflections of the poem, am curious to know whats ur perspective
October 5th, 2025 16:05
isa kemmy said:
one thing about poetry , its open to different enterpretations. upon writing i wanted to bring the theme of letting go, am open to any analogy . i myself have been reading it and am seeing so many reflections of the poem, am curious to know whats ur perspective
October 5th, 2025 16:05
when leaves fall
Paul Bell said:
Like this. It\'s like the coming of age.
The big step into the world, good or bad.
October 5th, 2025 13:36
Paul Bell said:
Like this. It\'s like the coming of age.
The big step into the world, good or bad.
October 5th, 2025 13:36
when leaves fall
sorenbarrett said:
The shedding of leaves leaves nudity of which many are ashamed. Pull them close about you or the wind will carry them to those that do not deserve. A good poem that provokes the mind
October 5th, 2025 10:44
sorenbarrett said:
The shedding of leaves leaves nudity of which many are ashamed. Pull them close about you or the wind will carry them to those that do not deserve. A good poem that provokes the mind
October 5th, 2025 10:44
older
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a raw and honest reflection, Isa. The fear is laid bare here...unfiltered and deeply human. That line about forgetting your own name hit especially hard. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2025 08:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a raw and honest reflection, Isa. The fear is laid bare here...unfiltered and deeply human. That line about forgetting your own name hit especially hard. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2025 08:22
older
sorenbarrett said:
You are only as old as you think and feel. I am old but in this I have no fear it is a blessing to have gotten this far. A poem well written
July 26th, 2025 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
You are only as old as you think and feel. I am old but in this I have no fear it is a blessing to have gotten this far. A poem well written
July 26th, 2025 05:49
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Poetic Licence said:
A sense of when provoked finds it difficult to not say how they feel, nicely expressed and written
July 7th, 2025 12:17
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of when provoked finds it difficult to not say how they feel, nicely expressed and written
July 7th, 2025 12:17
may be
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Isa…this flows like a mind on the edge of thought and thunder. 😮💨 That “belly” line? Wow. So much tension between knowing and almost knowing. You walk that line unafraid of the blur. Really powerful piece. 🌹👏
July 7th, 2025 08:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Isa…this flows like a mind on the edge of thought and thunder. 😮💨 That “belly” line? Wow. So much tension between knowing and almost knowing. You walk that line unafraid of the blur. Really powerful piece. 🌹👏
July 7th, 2025 08:53
may be
sorenbarrett said:
Premonitions and a foreboding to this poem. Nicely written
July 6th, 2025 17:40
sorenbarrett said:
Premonitions and a foreboding to this poem. Nicely written
July 6th, 2025 17:40
Windsbach
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Aurach, Germany? I have been to Frankfurt, if being in an \"airport counts\". So maybe it should say I touched over in Frankfurt on my way to India, but I\'ve always wanted to go for a proper visit. This renews that desire. Thanks for sharing, Isa. Well done. 🌹👏
April 28th, 2025 23:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Aurach, Germany? I have been to Frankfurt, if being in an \"airport counts\". So maybe it should say I touched over in Frankfurt on my way to India, but I\'ve always wanted to go for a proper visit. This renews that desire. Thanks for sharing, Isa. Well done. 🌹👏
April 28th, 2025 23:03
Windsbach
sorenbarrett said:
So Windsbach is a city. Aurach I could not find but assume to be a river. Nicely done
April 28th, 2025 09:49
sorenbarrett said:
So Windsbach is a city. Aurach I could not find but assume to be a river. Nicely done
April 28th, 2025 09:49
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