Comments received on poems by isa kemmy
The checkout
sorenbarrett said:
Puzzles and riddles plague the mind but once felt understood all calms. It doesn\'t seem to matter if correct or not. Ignorance is bliss but once the test results come in and are clear it is time to celebrate. Well done
January 19th, 2026 12:55
sorenbarrett said:
Puzzles and riddles plague the mind but once felt understood all calms. It doesn\'t seem to matter if correct or not. Ignorance is bliss but once the test results come in and are clear it is time to celebrate. Well done
January 19th, 2026 12:55
The checkout
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Isa, this is quietly electric. The tension builds in such an ordinary space, and that restraint makes the moment feel charged and intimate. It holds me right at the checkout line. Fantastic!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 19th, 2026 10:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Isa, this is quietly electric. The tension builds in such an ordinary space, and that restraint makes the moment feel charged and intimate. It holds me right at the checkout line. Fantastic!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 19th, 2026 10:53
the silent bloom of winter
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of ambivalence to even the beauty of the seasons where growing tired of cold and darkness outweighs the beauty of the season.
January 15th, 2026 11:00
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of ambivalence to even the beauty of the seasons where growing tired of cold and darkness outweighs the beauty of the season.
January 15th, 2026 11:00
the silent bloom of winter
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Isa, this spoke to that strange mix of wonder and loneliness winter can bring. Wanting to smile, to build, while still missing warmth is very human. I recognized myself in that tension. Very well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 15th, 2026 10:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Isa, this spoke to that strange mix of wonder and loneliness winter can bring. Wanting to smile, to build, while still missing warmth is very human. I recognized myself in that tension. Very well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 15th, 2026 10:48
wanna be friends?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I recognize this posture of learning while being watched, judged, and quietly undermined. The choice of silence and walking away reads as survival, not surrender. This resonates. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 3rd, 2026 13:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I recognize this posture of learning while being watched, judged, and quietly undermined. The choice of silence and walking away reads as survival, not surrender. This resonates. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 3rd, 2026 13:32
wanna be friends?
sorenbarrett said:
Many hold jealous thoughts in this world and being new one does not see the treachery and falseness held. A lovely write where the innocence of youth is both an advantage and disadvantage. Well done
January 3rd, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Many hold jealous thoughts in this world and being new one does not see the treachery and falseness held. A lovely write where the innocence of youth is both an advantage and disadvantage. Well done
January 3rd, 2026 04:33
The Battle Before Sleep
Mutley Ravishes said:
Before the sweetness of sleep
I breathe
Just like The Iceman
Then I stand
In a cold shower for a laugh
Before slipping into a hot bath
Then lying in the bed
I recall the events of the day
Without dread
Replaying anything
That had a deficit in nobility
And re-Imagine them
As they ought to have been
In my Imagination
January 2nd, 2026 21:06
Mutley Ravishes said:
Before the sweetness of sleep
I breathe
Just like The Iceman
Then I stand
In a cold shower for a laugh
Before slipping into a hot bath
Then lying in the bed
I recall the events of the day
Without dread
Replaying anything
That had a deficit in nobility
And re-Imagine them
As they ought to have been
In my Imagination
January 2nd, 2026 21:06
The Battle Before Sleep
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh...I so relate. Powerful write, my friend. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🌹
January 2nd, 2026 19:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh...I so relate. Powerful write, my friend. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🌹
January 2nd, 2026 19:03
The Battle Before Sleep
sorenbarrett said:
Insomnia is a most difficult disorder that is exhausting. Nicely written.
January 2nd, 2026 17:07
sorenbarrett said:
Insomnia is a most difficult disorder that is exhausting. Nicely written.
January 2nd, 2026 17:07
SPINNING TIME
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this poem holds repetition, identity, and fracture in a steady grip. The shifting faces, the wall that never opens, the doubt about what is real…all of it circles back on itself with purpose. Knowing this comes from lived observation gives it a quiet authority that lingers. Strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 26th, 2025 10:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this poem holds repetition, identity, and fracture in a steady grip. The shifting faces, the wall that never opens, the doubt about what is real…all of it circles back on itself with purpose. Knowing this comes from lived observation gives it a quiet authority that lingers. Strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 26th, 2025 10:34
SPINNING TIME
sorenbarrett said:
Weaving or textile comes to mind in this poem of spinning. A spider is a great metaphor here. Nicely done
December 26th, 2025 10:26
sorenbarrett said:
Weaving or textile comes to mind in this poem of spinning. A spider is a great metaphor here. Nicely done
December 26th, 2025 10:26
the last petal of christmass
sorenbarrett said:
It sounds like years of sadness associated with the date. Well done
December 24th, 2025 19:17
sorenbarrett said:
It sounds like years of sadness associated with the date. Well done
December 24th, 2025 19:17
Threads of day and night
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Isa, this is tender and observant. There’s a quiet patience running through it, like someone watching growth happen in real time without rushing it or correcting it. That gentleness gives the poem its strength. Wonderful job! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 24th, 2025 11:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Isa, this is tender and observant. There’s a quiet patience running through it, like someone watching growth happen in real time without rushing it or correcting it. That gentleness gives the poem its strength. Wonderful job! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 24th, 2025 11:07
Threads of day and night
sorenbarrett said:
\"Sleep reaper, thief of dreams\" great words there. A lovely write so well done in a write about the sun.
December 23rd, 2025 15:45
sorenbarrett said:
\"Sleep reaper, thief of dreams\" great words there. A lovely write so well done in a write about the sun.
December 23rd, 2025 15:45
2 shots
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is devastating in its clarity…the drinks, the labels, the false cures, and the way memory keeps bleeding through. You wrote addiction without spectacle and pain without disguise. That ending stays with me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 14th, 2025 09:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is devastating in its clarity…the drinks, the labels, the false cures, and the way memory keeps bleeding through. You wrote addiction without spectacle and pain without disguise. That ending stays with me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 14th, 2025 09:11
unpanned memories
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful write, Isa! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 14th, 2025 08:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful write, Isa! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 14th, 2025 08:57
2 shots
Paul Bell said:
The journey of the glass, that takes you up, takes you down, spins you around falling to the ground.
Memories wane after ten drinks, we explain.
One for the road, maybe two, the road goes on.
December 14th, 2025 07:36
Paul Bell said:
The journey of the glass, that takes you up, takes you down, spins you around falling to the ground.
Memories wane after ten drinks, we explain.
One for the road, maybe two, the road goes on.
December 14th, 2025 07:36
2 shots
sorenbarrett said:
So much distilled in this shot of words. A blend and powerful it is for the one that drinks it. At first it is rough to the taste but then it becomes smooth on the tongue and warms the throat as it descends. A wonderful write that quiets the mind to the outside roar. A fave
December 14th, 2025 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
So much distilled in this shot of words. A blend and powerful it is for the one that drinks it. At first it is rough to the taste but then it becomes smooth on the tongue and warms the throat as it descends. A wonderful write that quiets the mind to the outside roar. A fave
December 14th, 2025 05:27
unpanned memories
sorenbarrett said:
Such an interesting write where I can hear the caution abandoned and the questioning of why and how. Nicely written
December 13th, 2025 20:51
sorenbarrett said:
Such an interesting write where I can hear the caution abandoned and the questioning of why and how. Nicely written
December 13th, 2025 20:51
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sorenbarrett said:
A poem is often more interesting with neologisms and here we have some. A most engaging read
October 27th, 2025 14:08
sorenbarrett said:
A poem is often more interesting with neologisms and here we have some. A most engaging read
October 27th, 2025 14:08
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peto said:
The last two words seem the perfect title for this
Ceaseless commotion
Thoroughly enjoyed the read
October 27th, 2025 12:30
peto said:
The last two words seem the perfect title for this
Ceaseless commotion
Thoroughly enjoyed the read
October 27th, 2025 12:30
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay! First comment!!! That image—“glued on bitumen”—stuck with me. It’s so physical, gritty, and symbolic of what it means to be grounded against your will. Stark and brilliant. As such, \"Bitumen Dreams\" could be a cool title. Yet, this also feels like a hymn for the broken-winged. So, perhaps \"Gravity\'s Hymn\"? Those two came to me while reading. Regardless, beautiful poem! A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2025 09:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay! First comment!!! That image—“glued on bitumen”—stuck with me. It’s so physical, gritty, and symbolic of what it means to be grounded against your will. Stark and brilliant. As such, \"Bitumen Dreams\" could be a cool title. Yet, this also feels like a hymn for the broken-winged. So, perhaps \"Gravity\'s Hymn\"? Those two came to me while reading. Regardless, beautiful poem! A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2025 09:48
The Dark’s Honest Contract
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Isa, this piece breathes serenity. The rhythm, the natural imagery, the quiet resolve...it all folds into a hymn for solitude. Gentle, faithful, and true. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2025 09:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Isa, this piece breathes serenity. The rhythm, the natural imagery, the quiet resolve...it all folds into a hymn for solitude. Gentle, faithful, and true. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2025 09:05
The Dark’s Honest Contract
rhmn_7 said:
I like your style of writing, it really flows while reading.
October 26th, 2025 16:13
rhmn_7 said:
I like your style of writing, it really flows while reading.
October 26th, 2025 16:13
The Dark’s Honest Contract
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful sending a message that can be felt. Nicely written
October 26th, 2025 14:43
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful sending a message that can be felt. Nicely written
October 26th, 2025 14:43
The uneven pact
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reclamation after a relationship ruined. Powerful and I love the form and the reversal at the end. Well done 🔥
October 19th, 2025 11:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reclamation after a relationship ruined. Powerful and I love the form and the reversal at the end. Well done 🔥
October 19th, 2025 11:24
The uneven pact
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reclamation regarding a relationship taken advantage of. A lovely write.
October 19th, 2025 10:27
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reclamation regarding a relationship taken advantage of. A lovely write.
October 19th, 2025 10:27
TO you the Unbowed: final conversation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Isa, this is powerful…a thunderous elegy that still manages to kneel in respect. Every line carries both grief and gratitude. Remarkable tribute, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 18th, 2025 08:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Isa, this is powerful…a thunderous elegy that still manages to kneel in respect. Every line carries both grief and gratitude. Remarkable tribute, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 18th, 2025 08:08
TO you the Unbowed: final conversation
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads well and seems almost a soliloquy with rhyme. It is a poem of praise and yet spoken to break the fourth wall. Nicely done
October 18th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads well and seems almost a soliloquy with rhyme. It is a poem of praise and yet spoken to break the fourth wall. Nicely done
October 18th, 2025 04:34
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