Comments received on poems by isa kemmy
TO you the Unbowed: final conversation
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads well and seems almost a soliloquy with rhyme. It is a poem of praise and yet spoken to break the fourth wall. Nicely done
October 18th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads well and seems almost a soliloquy with rhyme. It is a poem of praise and yet spoken to break the fourth wall. Nicely done
October 18th, 2025 04:34
THE IRONY OF THE FULL HAND
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Isa, this is exquisite…a parable dressed as a poem. The rhythm, the insight, the restraint...it all builds to that final truth like ripened fruit ready to fall. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 17th, 2025 10:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Isa, this is exquisite…a parable dressed as a poem. The rhythm, the insight, the restraint...it all builds to that final truth like ripened fruit ready to fall. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 17th, 2025 10:58
THE IRONY OF THE FULL HAND
Paul Bell said:
Yes, sometimes happiness is just closing the door behind you and walking away.
Dead moss never grows on a Mick Jagger.
October 17th, 2025 08:42
Paul Bell said:
Yes, sometimes happiness is just closing the door behind you and walking away.
Dead moss never grows on a Mick Jagger.
October 17th, 2025 08:42
THE IRONY OF THE FULL HAND
sorenbarrett said:
A great moral in this poem. Many parents hold on too long and too hard creating rot on the tree. Nicely worded in most poetic form and rhyme
October 17th, 2025 08:26
sorenbarrett said:
A great moral in this poem. Many parents hold on too long and too hard creating rot on the tree. Nicely worded in most poetic form and rhyme
October 17th, 2025 08:26
THE IRONY OF THE FULL HAND
2781 said:
Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends.
October 17th, 2025 07:55
2781 said:
Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends.
October 17th, 2025 07:55
Migräne
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well written, Isa, and described as the beast a migraine is. Well done!
October 14th, 2025 07:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well written, Isa, and described as the beast a migraine is. Well done!
October 14th, 2025 07:58
Migräne
sorenbarrett said:
A wild beast that attacks when least expected a preditor of ambush. Well written
October 13th, 2025 11:56
sorenbarrett said:
A wild beast that attacks when least expected a preditor of ambush. Well written
October 13th, 2025 11:56
when leaves fall
isa kemmy said:
one thing about poetry , its open to different enterpretations. upon writing i wanted to bring the theme of letting go, am open to any analogy . i myself have been reading it and am seeing so many reflections of the poem, am curious to know whats ur perspective
October 5th, 2025 16:05
isa kemmy said:
one thing about poetry , its open to different enterpretations. upon writing i wanted to bring the theme of letting go, am open to any analogy . i myself have been reading it and am seeing so many reflections of the poem, am curious to know whats ur perspective
October 5th, 2025 16:05
when leaves fall
Paul Bell said:
Like this. It\'s like the coming of age.
The big step into the world, good or bad.
October 5th, 2025 13:36
Paul Bell said:
Like this. It\'s like the coming of age.
The big step into the world, good or bad.
October 5th, 2025 13:36
when leaves fall
sorenbarrett said:
The shedding of leaves leaves nudity of which many are ashamed. Pull them close about you or the wind will carry them to those that do not deserve. A good poem that provokes the mind
October 5th, 2025 10:44
sorenbarrett said:
The shedding of leaves leaves nudity of which many are ashamed. Pull them close about you or the wind will carry them to those that do not deserve. A good poem that provokes the mind
October 5th, 2025 10:44
older
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a raw and honest reflection, Isa. The fear is laid bare here...unfiltered and deeply human. That line about forgetting your own name hit especially hard. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2025 08:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a raw and honest reflection, Isa. The fear is laid bare here...unfiltered and deeply human. That line about forgetting your own name hit especially hard. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2025 08:22
older
sorenbarrett said:
You are only as old as you think and feel. I am old but in this I have no fear it is a blessing to have gotten this far. A poem well written
July 26th, 2025 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
You are only as old as you think and feel. I am old but in this I have no fear it is a blessing to have gotten this far. A poem well written
July 26th, 2025 05:49
I
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of when provoked finds it difficult to not say how they feel, nicely expressed and written
July 7th, 2025 12:17
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of when provoked finds it difficult to not say how they feel, nicely expressed and written
July 7th, 2025 12:17
may be
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Isa…this flows like a mind on the edge of thought and thunder. 😮💨 That “belly” line? Wow. So much tension between knowing and almost knowing. You walk that line unafraid of the blur. Really powerful piece. 🌹👏
July 7th, 2025 08:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Isa…this flows like a mind on the edge of thought and thunder. 😮💨 That “belly” line? Wow. So much tension between knowing and almost knowing. You walk that line unafraid of the blur. Really powerful piece. 🌹👏
July 7th, 2025 08:53
may be
sorenbarrett said:
Premonitions and a foreboding to this poem. Nicely written
July 6th, 2025 17:40
sorenbarrett said:
Premonitions and a foreboding to this poem. Nicely written
July 6th, 2025 17:40
Windsbach
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Aurach, Germany? I have been to Frankfurt, if being in an \"airport counts\". So maybe it should say I touched over in Frankfurt on my way to India, but I\'ve always wanted to go for a proper visit. This renews that desire. Thanks for sharing, Isa. Well done. 🌹👏
April 28th, 2025 23:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Aurach, Germany? I have been to Frankfurt, if being in an \"airport counts\". So maybe it should say I touched over in Frankfurt on my way to India, but I\'ve always wanted to go for a proper visit. This renews that desire. Thanks for sharing, Isa. Well done. 🌹👏
April 28th, 2025 23:03
Windsbach
sorenbarrett said:
So Windsbach is a city. Aurach I could not find but assume to be a river. Nicely done
April 28th, 2025 09:49
sorenbarrett said:
So Windsbach is a city. Aurach I could not find but assume to be a river. Nicely done
April 28th, 2025 09:49
Tell me
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I feel the pain and frustration in this, my friend. If he says those things about you, he ain\'t worth it. Your poem ends with that resolve. Well expressed, Isa! 🌹👏
April 26th, 2025 12:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I feel the pain and frustration in this, my friend. If he says those things about you, he ain\'t worth it. Your poem ends with that resolve. Well expressed, Isa! 🌹👏
April 26th, 2025 12:33
Tell me
sorenbarrett said:
If it doesn\'t fit don\'t stay with it. A poem of ill fit. Nicely said
April 26th, 2025 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
If it doesn\'t fit don\'t stay with it. A poem of ill fit. Nicely said
April 26th, 2025 05:23
The ice cream
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the melting of the heart, enjoyed the read
April 7th, 2025 02:20
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the melting of the heart, enjoyed the read
April 7th, 2025 02:20
The ice cream
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor ice cream sweet that melts. Kindness that melts a heart but does it? Very well done. For such a good metaphor a fave
April 6th, 2025 11:59
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor ice cream sweet that melts. Kindness that melts a heart but does it? Very well done. For such a good metaphor a fave
April 6th, 2025 11:59
Bloom
sorenbarrett said:
The flight of the bee, and like a bee we all follow our senses that draw us to the flowers in our lives. Very nice
March 15th, 2025 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
The flight of the bee, and like a bee we all follow our senses that draw us to the flowers in our lives. Very nice
March 15th, 2025 06:03
HE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, Isa! You have such empathy, which shines through in your writing. Love this piece. 🌹👏
January 28th, 2025 19:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, Isa! You have such empathy, which shines through in your writing. Love this piece. 🌹👏
January 28th, 2025 19:46
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