Comments received on poems by Abdullah123
Moses-Thine Lord is Silent!
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor for todays strife and people often do not realize how deep metaphors go. Well written
May 17th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor for todays strife and people often do not realize how deep metaphors go. Well written
May 17th, 2025 04:02
YET, ONCE AGAIN
Poetic Licence said:
The passing on to another , it has been a good read
April 18th, 2025 14:06
Poetic Licence said:
The passing on to another , it has been a good read
April 18th, 2025 14:06
YET, ONCE AGAIN
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a continuing story where we pass on our selves to others. Dark but real it cakes its course. Well written in great poetic style.
April 18th, 2025 11:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a continuing story where we pass on our selves to others. Dark but real it cakes its course. Well written in great poetic style.
April 18th, 2025 11:43
YET AGAIN
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully written follow up, it appears the daughter is not how we as parent\'s hope they would be, nicely expressed and written
April 15th, 2025 12:06
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully written follow up, it appears the daughter is not how we as parent\'s hope they would be, nicely expressed and written
April 15th, 2025 12:06
YET AGAIN
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and intriguing on its own, the bitter fruit complaining seems almost to remind of the passage in Scriptures where the LORD asks and warns against criticizing the potter\'s creation. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a very haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 15th, 2025 11:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and intriguing on its own, the bitter fruit complaining seems almost to remind of the passage in Scriptures where the LORD asks and warns against criticizing the potter\'s creation. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a very haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 15th, 2025 11:44
YET AGAIN
sorenbarrett said:
I remember the last and this one fits well as a sequel. Some are such by nature and can not be taught otherwise. Should we blame them for that that they are not capable? Good write so well worded and structured
April 15th, 2025 10:09
sorenbarrett said:
I remember the last and this one fits well as a sequel. Some are such by nature and can not be taught otherwise. Should we blame them for that that they are not capable? Good write so well worded and structured
April 15th, 2025 10:09
YET
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write that requires some reading to understand the possibly meanings and message, nicely written
April 14th, 2025 11:41
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write that requires some reading to understand the possibly meanings and message, nicely written
April 14th, 2025 11:41
YET
sorenbarrett said:
A poem one has to think a great deal about and each time I read it I get a different meaning. I love poems that give different meanings.
April 14th, 2025 10:20
sorenbarrett said:
A poem one has to think a great deal about and each time I read it I get a different meaning. I love poems that give different meanings.
April 14th, 2025 10:20
To The Executioner, To Time
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is so classical in form and style I love it and it speaks to me with great metaphor and rhyme. Lovely a fave
April 11th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is so classical in form and style I love it and it speaks to me with great metaphor and rhyme. Lovely a fave
April 11th, 2025 04:22
To The Executioner, To Time
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write, enjoyed the read
April 11th, 2025 03:20
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write, enjoyed the read
April 11th, 2025 03:20
The Road
sorenbarrett said:
A social commentary in this entrancing poem. Very nicely penned it has great imagery and flows well. Very nicely done
April 5th, 2025 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
A social commentary in this entrancing poem. Very nicely penned it has great imagery and flows well. Very nicely done
April 5th, 2025 05:43
The Governor
Salvia.S said:
A richly symbolic and evocative poem exploring the tensions between nature, society, and the human condition. Well written!!!
March 31st, 2025 13:16
Salvia.S said:
A richly symbolic and evocative poem exploring the tensions between nature, society, and the human condition. Well written!!!
March 31st, 2025 13:16
The Governor
sorenbarrett said:
Here in this poem metaphor is king. A most thought provoking write with vivid imagery. Well done
March 23rd, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Here in this poem metaphor is king. A most thought provoking write with vivid imagery. Well done
March 23rd, 2025 04:37
The Ashen Handshake
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write that makes you think a bit, nicely crafted
March 7th, 2025 09:51
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write that makes you think a bit, nicely crafted
March 7th, 2025 09:51
The Ashen Handshake
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor or literal it has great rhythm and rhyme and the meaning speaks to the heart for peace
March 7th, 2025 08:24
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor or literal it has great rhythm and rhyme and the meaning speaks to the heart for peace
March 7th, 2025 08:24
I Swear It (PART 2)
sorenbarrett said:
A sad truth that emotions like shadows come and go and we can not bring them back only the sun. A heart felt read.
February 24th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
A sad truth that emotions like shadows come and go and we can not bring them back only the sun. A heart felt read.
February 24th, 2025 04:28
I Swear It (PART 1)
Poetic Licence said:
Well expressed and written write around sadness of a broken relationship, see you for part 2
February 23rd, 2025 12:26
Poetic Licence said:
Well expressed and written write around sadness of a broken relationship, see you for part 2
February 23rd, 2025 12:26
I Swear It (PART 1)
sorenbarrett said:
Such a poetic expression of words unspoken that lead to a relationship broken. Very nicely worded and put together.
February 23rd, 2025 08:16
sorenbarrett said:
Such a poetic expression of words unspoken that lead to a relationship broken. Very nicely worded and put together.
February 23rd, 2025 08:16
The Parting Hour
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write with the use of language that would make one think of an older time but with alterations. Antiquing seems to be the theme. Nice
February 21st, 2025 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write with the use of language that would make one think of an older time but with alterations. Antiquing seems to be the theme. Nice
February 21st, 2025 11:35
Poison & Ink
Poetic Licence said:
The pen has the real power, enjoyed the read
February 20th, 2025 11:38
Poetic Licence said:
The pen has the real power, enjoyed the read
February 20th, 2025 11:38
Poison & Ink
sorenbarrett said:
The pen is mightier that the sword. A metaphoric write and most lovely
February 20th, 2025 10:38
sorenbarrett said:
The pen is mightier that the sword. A metaphoric write and most lovely
February 20th, 2025 10:38
Limerick 3
Cassie58 said:
Your words are visual, provide imagery for the reader. This piece works as a metaphor or taken at face value.
February 20th, 2025 01:33
Cassie58 said:
Your words are visual, provide imagery for the reader. This piece works as a metaphor or taken at face value.
February 20th, 2025 01:33
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