Comments received on poems by Abdullah123
The Governor
sorenbarrett said:
Here in this poem metaphor is king. A most thought provoking write with vivid imagery. Well done
March 23rd, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Here in this poem metaphor is king. A most thought provoking write with vivid imagery. Well done
March 23rd, 2025 04:37
The Ashen Handshake
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write that makes you think a bit, nicely crafted
March 7th, 2025 09:51
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write that makes you think a bit, nicely crafted
March 7th, 2025 09:51
The Ashen Handshake
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor or literal it has great rhythm and rhyme and the meaning speaks to the heart for peace
March 7th, 2025 08:24
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor or literal it has great rhythm and rhyme and the meaning speaks to the heart for peace
March 7th, 2025 08:24
I Swear It (PART 2)
sorenbarrett said:
A sad truth that emotions like shadows come and go and we can not bring them back only the sun. A heart felt read.
February 24th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
A sad truth that emotions like shadows come and go and we can not bring them back only the sun. A heart felt read.
February 24th, 2025 04:28
I Swear It (PART 1)
Poetic Licence said:
Well expressed and written write around sadness of a broken relationship, see you for part 2
February 23rd, 2025 12:26
Poetic Licence said:
Well expressed and written write around sadness of a broken relationship, see you for part 2
February 23rd, 2025 12:26
I Swear It (PART 1)
sorenbarrett said:
Such a poetic expression of words unspoken that lead to a relationship broken. Very nicely worded and put together.
February 23rd, 2025 08:16
sorenbarrett said:
Such a poetic expression of words unspoken that lead to a relationship broken. Very nicely worded and put together.
February 23rd, 2025 08:16
The Parting Hour
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write with the use of language that would make one think of an older time but with alterations. Antiquing seems to be the theme. Nice
February 21st, 2025 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write with the use of language that would make one think of an older time but with alterations. Antiquing seems to be the theme. Nice
February 21st, 2025 11:35
Poison & Ink
Poetic Licence said:
The pen has the real power, enjoyed the read
February 20th, 2025 11:38
Poetic Licence said:
The pen has the real power, enjoyed the read
February 20th, 2025 11:38
Poison & Ink
sorenbarrett said:
The pen is mightier that the sword. A metaphoric write and most lovely
February 20th, 2025 10:38
sorenbarrett said:
The pen is mightier that the sword. A metaphoric write and most lovely
February 20th, 2025 10:38
Limerick 3
Cassie58 said:
Your words are visual, provide imagery for the reader. This piece works as a metaphor or taken at face value.
February 20th, 2025 01:33
Cassie58 said:
Your words are visual, provide imagery for the reader. This piece works as a metaphor or taken at face value.
February 20th, 2025 01:33
Limerick 3
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is in reality and in metaphor as well. Nicely said
February 19th, 2025 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is in reality and in metaphor as well. Nicely said
February 19th, 2025 09:39
Fatuous Clay
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice wording here that is powerful and strong. Loved it
February 18th, 2025 10:28
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice wording here that is powerful and strong. Loved it
February 18th, 2025 10:28
LIMERICKS 1 AND 2
Poetic Licence said:
A fun way of delivering your message, nicely written
February 15th, 2025 07:56
Poetic Licence said:
A fun way of delivering your message, nicely written
February 15th, 2025 07:56
LIMERICKS 1 AND 2
sorenbarrett said:
Not just limericks but plays on words as well and a fun read it was.
February 15th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Not just limericks but plays on words as well and a fun read it was.
February 15th, 2025 04:40
A Description of Spring
Poetic Licence said:
Nice imagery in a lovely poem about the beauty of nature, enjoyed the read
February 14th, 2025 12:33
Poetic Licence said:
Nice imagery in a lovely poem about the beauty of nature, enjoyed the read
February 14th, 2025 12:33
A Description of Spring
sorenbarrett said:
The beauty of nature in this poem is well expressed in great images. A lovely write
February 14th, 2025 10:38
sorenbarrett said:
The beauty of nature in this poem is well expressed in great images. A lovely write
February 14th, 2025 10:38
Poison & Ink
Poetic Licence said:
A poetic way of describing a poet, enjoyed the read
January 24th, 2025 15:44
Poetic Licence said:
A poetic way of describing a poet, enjoyed the read
January 24th, 2025 15:44
The Tune (2 versions)
rin said:
Is it overflowing from within? That\'s wonderful.
January 7th, 2025 10:37
rin said:
Is it overflowing from within? That\'s wonderful.
January 7th, 2025 10:37
BENEATH RA?
rin said:
Which is better is a difficult question. In Japan, it is said that happiness lies in the latter.
January 7th, 2025 10:28
rin said:
Which is better is a difficult question. In Japan, it is said that happiness lies in the latter.
January 7th, 2025 10:28
The Tune (2 versions)
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed the read and my choice would be the first
December 25th, 2024 11:08
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed the read and my choice would be the first
December 25th, 2024 11:08
The Tune (2 versions)
sorenbarrett said:
They are both most beautiful but if forced to choose it would be the second for it touched me deeper
December 25th, 2024 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
They are both most beautiful but if forced to choose it would be the second for it touched me deeper
December 25th, 2024 09:40
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