Comments received on poems by Abdullah123
Our Final Will And Testimony
Poetic Licence said:
Written beautifully, many wise words that should be heeded, as our world becomes evwrmore self-centered, greedy and selfish, a traight man is good at but is now taking it to new levels, nicely expressed and written
August 7th, 2025 10:44
Poetic Licence said:
Written beautifully, many wise words that should be heeded, as our world becomes evwrmore self-centered, greedy and selfish, a traight man is good at but is now taking it to new levels, nicely expressed and written
August 7th, 2025 10:44
Our Final Will And Testimony
RSM0812 said:
It reads like a wise prayer with both morality and advice. Nice write.
August 7th, 2025 09:16
RSM0812 said:
It reads like a wise prayer with both morality and advice. Nice write.
August 7th, 2025 09:16
Our Final Will And Testimony
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks from the dust. It echoes the past one filled with blood and violence where it was an eye for an eye and one had to guard what one had. We have not changed much and neither has the world. We still need to guard what we have or think we have for it seems that nothing really belongs to us. A powerful poem of guardianship that may be taken less literally and more metaphorically to guard what we are rather than what we have. Nicely penned
August 7th, 2025 07:04
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks from the dust. It echoes the past one filled with blood and violence where it was an eye for an eye and one had to guard what one had. We have not changed much and neither has the world. We still need to guard what we have or think we have for it seems that nothing really belongs to us. A powerful poem of guardianship that may be taken less literally and more metaphorically to guard what we are rather than what we have. Nicely penned
August 7th, 2025 07:04
The Star-Strangled Banner
sorenbarrett said:
A fun parody that strikes a blow at the arrogance of a nation that says it stands for freedom but is over legislated, over taxed, and tires to impose itself where it does not belong
August 6th, 2025 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
A fun parody that strikes a blow at the arrogance of a nation that says it stands for freedom but is over legislated, over taxed, and tires to impose itself where it does not belong
August 6th, 2025 10:10
O Cruel Sky (Villanelle)
Poetic Licence said:
I have no idea what a Villanelle is but I appreciate the write, it cries out in pain at the acts of man and the relentless quest for blood, nicely expressed and written
August 3rd, 2025 13:35
Poetic Licence said:
I have no idea what a Villanelle is but I appreciate the write, it cries out in pain at the acts of man and the relentless quest for blood, nicely expressed and written
August 3rd, 2025 13:35
O Cruel Sky (Villanelle)
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done. The form is a difficult one for me as well. This poem has an ominous tone to it. It cries from the paper
August 3rd, 2025 13:13
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done. The form is a difficult one for me as well. This poem has an ominous tone to it. It cries from the paper
August 3rd, 2025 13:13
The Ballad of Adin and Rue
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded a story of mystical and haunting proportions set to good rhyme and meter it flows toward its inevitable end. A fave
August 1st, 2025 05:24
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded a story of mystical and haunting proportions set to good rhyme and meter it flows toward its inevitable end. A fave
August 1st, 2025 05:24
The Ballad of Adin and Rue
Poetic Licence said:
Simply a very beautiful write, some lovely lines, enjoyed the read
August 1st, 2025 05:19
Poetic Licence said:
Simply a very beautiful write, some lovely lines, enjoyed the read
August 1st, 2025 05:19
Debut Poetry Chapbook!!
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write with deep meaning, and timely wisdom, enjoyed the read
July 31st, 2025 05:37
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write with deep meaning, and timely wisdom, enjoyed the read
July 31st, 2025 05:37
Debut Poetry Chapbook!!
sorenbarrett said:
This presents some deep thoughts that are mind provoking and even go beyond the scope of the poem. Very nicely written it has an earthy feel to the wisdom. A fave
July 31st, 2025 03:28
sorenbarrett said:
This presents some deep thoughts that are mind provoking and even go beyond the scope of the poem. Very nicely written it has an earthy feel to the wisdom. A fave
July 31st, 2025 03:28
I Spoke... Why are You Silent?
sorenbarrett said:
It is the message and how it is sent in this poem that gets the fave. Good questions that remain unanswered
July 30th, 2025 15:20
sorenbarrett said:
It is the message and how it is sent in this poem that gets the fave. Good questions that remain unanswered
July 30th, 2025 15:20
An Inquiry from Deatha
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and cleverly crafted write, appearing a lot deeper than first Thought, will we die again even in the after life, enjoyed the read
July 24th, 2025 05:50
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and cleverly crafted write, appearing a lot deeper than first Thought, will we die again even in the after life, enjoyed the read
July 24th, 2025 05:50
An Inquiry from Deatha
sorenbarrett said:
This lovely poem\'s meaning is deeper to me than the surface but dives into the grave. It speaks of life continuing after death in the slaying of death twice. The wording is quaint that lends to the feel of the poem and its meter is classic. The word choice is antiquated and well chosen for the topic as it speaks of age and death. Images are well chosen love of yolk with double meaning life and its burden. Very nicely composed and a definite fave
July 24th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
This lovely poem\'s meaning is deeper to me than the surface but dives into the grave. It speaks of life continuing after death in the slaying of death twice. The wording is quaint that lends to the feel of the poem and its meter is classic. The word choice is antiquated and well chosen for the topic as it speaks of age and death. Images are well chosen love of yolk with double meaning life and its burden. Very nicely composed and a definite fave
July 24th, 2025 04:23
Love, I Drowned
sorenbarrett said:
A clever use of similarities to resolve the problem presented by this poem. Nicely written with good rhyme and meter. Lovely
July 23rd, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
A clever use of similarities to resolve the problem presented by this poem. Nicely written with good rhyme and meter. Lovely
July 23rd, 2025 04:16
What is a Poem?
sorenbarrett said:
Well written and well thought out this poem speaks of the spirt of the poem the feeling encased in words. Very nicely written
June 6th, 2025 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
Well written and well thought out this poem speaks of the spirt of the poem the feeling encased in words. Very nicely written
June 6th, 2025 06:30
What is a Poem?
Salvia.S said:
What a beautiful and thought provoking poem! Well done
June 6th, 2025 06:21
Salvia.S said:
What a beautiful and thought provoking poem! Well done
June 6th, 2025 06:21
Moses-Thine Lord is Silent!
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor for todays strife and people often do not realize how deep metaphors go. Well written
May 17th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor for todays strife and people often do not realize how deep metaphors go. Well written
May 17th, 2025 04:02
YET, ONCE AGAIN
Poetic Licence said:
The passing on to another , it has been a good read
April 18th, 2025 14:06
Poetic Licence said:
The passing on to another , it has been a good read
April 18th, 2025 14:06
YET, ONCE AGAIN
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a continuing story where we pass on our selves to others. Dark but real it cakes its course. Well written in great poetic style.
April 18th, 2025 11:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a continuing story where we pass on our selves to others. Dark but real it cakes its course. Well written in great poetic style.
April 18th, 2025 11:43
YET AGAIN
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully written follow up, it appears the daughter is not how we as parent\'s hope they would be, nicely expressed and written
April 15th, 2025 12:06
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully written follow up, it appears the daughter is not how we as parent\'s hope they would be, nicely expressed and written
April 15th, 2025 12:06
YET AGAIN
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and intriguing on its own, the bitter fruit complaining seems almost to remind of the passage in Scriptures where the LORD asks and warns against criticizing the potter\'s creation. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a very haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 15th, 2025 11:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and intriguing on its own, the bitter fruit complaining seems almost to remind of the passage in Scriptures where the LORD asks and warns against criticizing the potter\'s creation. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a very haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 15th, 2025 11:44
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