Comments received on poems by Abdullah123
The Tune (2 versions)
rin said:
Is it overflowing from within? That\'s wonderful.
January 7th, 2025 10:37
rin said:
Is it overflowing from within? That\'s wonderful.
January 7th, 2025 10:37
BENEATH RA?
rin said:
Which is better is a difficult question. In Japan, it is said that happiness lies in the latter.
January 7th, 2025 10:28
rin said:
Which is better is a difficult question. In Japan, it is said that happiness lies in the latter.
January 7th, 2025 10:28
The Tune (2 versions)
TobaniNataiella said:
I enjoyed the read and my choice would be the first
December 25th, 2024 11:08
TobaniNataiella said:
I enjoyed the read and my choice would be the first
December 25th, 2024 11:08
The Tune (2 versions)
sorenbarrett said:
They are both most beautiful but if forced to choose it would be the second for it touched me deeper
December 25th, 2024 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
They are both most beautiful but if forced to choose it would be the second for it touched me deeper
December 25th, 2024 09:40
TICK-TOCK
Buttercup said:
that was really good, sometimes I wish time could stop if we turned off the clock
December 21st, 2024 10:32
Buttercup said:
that was really good, sometimes I wish time could stop if we turned off the clock
December 21st, 2024 10:32
A Conversation (PARTS 1 AND 2)
TobaniNataiella said:
A very engaging poem, well written, Thank you
December 6th, 2024 05:53
TobaniNataiella said:
A very engaging poem, well written, Thank you
December 6th, 2024 05:53
Tugged
arqios said:
Compelled reading, better direction given than a film script. Like riding a roller coaster π’
December 3rd, 2024 14:13
arqios said:
Compelled reading, better direction given than a film script. Like riding a roller coaster π’
December 3rd, 2024 14:13
Tugged
FrasMac said:
this is a fascinating write, leading this reader to wonder where the puppet ends and the puppeteer begins. Maybe we are all puppets more than puppeteers. Good, thoughtful writing.
December 3rd, 2024 13:36
FrasMac said:
this is a fascinating write, leading this reader to wonder where the puppet ends and the puppeteer begins. Maybe we are all puppets more than puppeteers. Good, thoughtful writing.
December 3rd, 2024 13:36
What Am I?
Aloo Denish Obiero said:
\"What am I?\" Very deep and masterfully penned. Keep giving us the reason to love poetry by bringing more of these.
November 5th, 2024 09:04
Aloo Denish Obiero said:
\"What am I?\" Very deep and masterfully penned. Keep giving us the reason to love poetry by bringing more of these.
November 5th, 2024 09:04
Shakespear, Shakepear
Tony36 said:
Double
Double
Toil
And
Trouble
As I look into the babbling brew
I can see what an excellent poem
That was penned by thee
November 1st, 2024 13:30
Tony36 said:
Double
Double
Toil
And
Trouble
As I look into the babbling brew
I can see what an excellent poem
That was penned by thee
November 1st, 2024 13:30
The Prison of God
David Wakeling said:
This certainly is an epic poem exploring all the myths and legends of religion.Well done
October 20th, 2024 16:42
David Wakeling said:
This certainly is an epic poem exploring all the myths and legends of religion.Well done
October 20th, 2024 16:42
A Conversation
NafisaSB said:
child seems to be wise beyond his years - because, yes, who knows how much time one has on the earth
beautiful lines
October 19th, 2024 01:56
NafisaSB said:
child seems to be wise beyond his years - because, yes, who knows how much time one has on the earth
beautiful lines
October 19th, 2024 01:56
Self-Conscious Am I
Bobby O said:
Dude, this is Elevated writing , no, itβs more than that I might struggle as I attempt to elucidate this complex impression that is alive and forming and yet is indelibly descriptive alive with nuance and spectral glimmer that suggests a talent dwells for certain
above and beyond , dancing in that rare air and space that is Prodigy. Or to choose a review that lived in the world of common parlance ,
I Really Liked That Shit You Wrote.
Props and thank you
October 18th, 2024 13:32
Bobby O said:
Dude, this is Elevated writing , no, itβs more than that I might struggle as I attempt to elucidate this complex impression that is alive and forming and yet is indelibly descriptive alive with nuance and spectral glimmer that suggests a talent dwells for certain
above and beyond , dancing in that rare air and space that is Prodigy. Or to choose a review that lived in the world of common parlance ,
I Really Liked That Shit You Wrote.
Props and thank you
October 18th, 2024 13:32
A Lover and Beloved
Thad Wilk said:
Amen! π
An awesome poem
eloquently penned!! βοΈ
Strong feelings and
message,
great read my friend!! π
Best regards βοΈ Thad
October 15th, 2024 19:24
Thad Wilk said:
Amen! π
An awesome poem
eloquently penned!! βοΈ
Strong feelings and
message,
great read my friend!! π
Best regards βοΈ Thad
October 15th, 2024 19:24
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