Comments received on poems by Abdullah123
Inheritance
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Abdullah, I appreciated how this avoids pretending the speaker is innocent or misunderstood. There’s real self-awareness here…an acknowledgment of harmful behavior without polishing it into something noble. That honesty makes the piece land much harder. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 19th, 2026 20:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Abdullah, I appreciated how this avoids pretending the speaker is innocent or misunderstood. There’s real self-awareness here…an acknowledgment of harmful behavior without polishing it into something noble. That honesty makes the piece land much harder. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 19th, 2026 20:17
Inheritance
sorenbarrett said:
The dispute of heredity or learning takes a stand in this poem. Well written
May 19th, 2026 12:15
sorenbarrett said:
The dispute of heredity or learning takes a stand in this poem. Well written
May 19th, 2026 12:15
Liquify
Thomas W Case said:
Feels like the body becoming landscape—everything internal spilling outward until emotion turns into weather,
There’s a heavy, visceral intensity in it, like distress rendered as flood and flood rendered as inevitability.
May 17th, 2026 09:02
Thomas W Case said:
Feels like the body becoming landscape—everything internal spilling outward until emotion turns into weather,
There’s a heavy, visceral intensity in it, like distress rendered as flood and flood rendered as inevitability.
May 17th, 2026 09:02
Theatrics
Hadeed musa said:
مرنے کی بھی کیسی عادت ڈال لی اُس نے
کہ اب زندہ ہونا بھول ہی گئی
\"celerity in dying\" wrecked me.
Because isn’t that what art is? Dying a hundred times so others can feel alive once.
Cleopatra or the actress — both are queens. One ruled Egypt, one rules the stage. 🤍
This is why I love poetry 💝
May 16th, 2026 14:02
Hadeed musa said:
مرنے کی بھی کیسی عادت ڈال لی اُس نے
کہ اب زندہ ہونا بھول ہی گئی
\"celerity in dying\" wrecked me.
Because isn’t that what art is? Dying a hundred times so others can feel alive once.
Cleopatra or the actress — both are queens. One ruled Egypt, one rules the stage. 🤍
This is why I love poetry 💝
May 16th, 2026 14:02
Liquify
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Abdullah, I really felt the sense of emotional overflow here…the idea of containment failing little by little until everything spills beyond its borders. The imagery carries that tension beautifully. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 14th, 2026 11:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Abdullah, I really felt the sense of emotional overflow here…the idea of containment failing little by little until everything spills beyond its borders. The imagery carries that tension beautifully. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 14th, 2026 11:25
Liquify
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sickness in this write whether real or emotional. Its being cast in a natural scene makes it the more vivid and open to interpretation. It is dark and a feeling of pollution takes over. Powerful and a fave
May 14th, 2026 07:50
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sickness in this write whether real or emotional. Its being cast in a natural scene makes it the more vivid and open to interpretation. It is dark and a feeling of pollution takes over. Powerful and a fave
May 14th, 2026 07:50
Theatrics
sorenbarrett said:
The scene famous, the wording well executed, meter conducive of good flow, it proceeds in steps line by line painting a dramatic picture. Very nicely done a fave
May 12th, 2026 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
The scene famous, the wording well executed, meter conducive of good flow, it proceeds in steps line by line painting a dramatic picture. Very nicely done a fave
May 12th, 2026 05:01
Carcass
Hadeed musa said:
Blue blood stains the page.
I am never looking at an exam the same way again..
😅😅
May 1st, 2026 08:20
Hadeed musa said:
Blue blood stains the page.
I am never looking at an exam the same way again..
😅😅
May 1st, 2026 08:20
Carcass
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem reflects on the inevitable decline of something once vibrant (the paper, the test-taker) and contemplates the lack of remembrance and significance attributed to these experiences.
May 1st, 2026 06:06
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem reflects on the inevitable decline of something once vibrant (the paper, the test-taker) and contemplates the lack of remembrance and significance attributed to these experiences.
May 1st, 2026 06:06
Carcass
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely metaphored (sic) this poem speaks in paper images of real atrocities blood in ink and the coolness of white paper where a folder is a coffin. So well conceived it must be a fave
May 1st, 2026 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely metaphored (sic) this poem speaks in paper images of real atrocities blood in ink and the coolness of white paper where a folder is a coffin. So well conceived it must be a fave
May 1st, 2026 04:13
Dead Roses
Hadeed musa said:
‘Honey does not rot’ hit me hard. The whole poem feels like holding onto something beautiful even when it hurts. The flies orbiting your ear is such a sharp, unsettling image.
And God, ‘not ever’ wrecked me. This feels like mourning something that still gives you sweetness. Please keep writing — your words linger like that scent up the arm.
April 28th, 2026 10:10
Hadeed musa said:
‘Honey does not rot’ hit me hard. The whole poem feels like holding onto something beautiful even when it hurts. The flies orbiting your ear is such a sharp, unsettling image.
And God, ‘not ever’ wrecked me. This feels like mourning something that still gives you sweetness. Please keep writing — your words linger like that scent up the arm.
April 28th, 2026 10:10
Dead Roses
NafisaSB said:
honey may never rot, but the roses do, and its time you steeled yourself to throw them away...that is what i would do - but maybe your perception is different..
April 27th, 2026 07:11
NafisaSB said:
honey may never rot, but the roses do, and its time you steeled yourself to throw them away...that is what i would do - but maybe your perception is different..
April 27th, 2026 07:11
Corrections
gray0328 said:
it’s like correcting someone’s small mistake at a party—suddenly, you’re not just talking anymore; you’re both aware of difference, and the mood shifts, even if neither of you intended it. Well Done
April 25th, 2026 09:57
gray0328 said:
it’s like correcting someone’s small mistake at a party—suddenly, you’re not just talking anymore; you’re both aware of difference, and the mood shifts, even if neither of you intended it. Well Done
April 25th, 2026 09:57
Jenga
Doggerel Dave said:
I really understand and can relate to the point where what could have been good, could have worked is so perverted and decayed the only wish is to see it destroyed. (to be concrete - this belongs to a committee I am part of).
Your meaning is clear for me.
PS: ...Except for \'Jenga\' - Prof. Google doesn\'t appear to know...
April 22nd, 2026 19:37
Doggerel Dave said:
I really understand and can relate to the point where what could have been good, could have worked is so perverted and decayed the only wish is to see it destroyed. (to be concrete - this belongs to a committee I am part of).
Your meaning is clear for me.
PS: ...Except for \'Jenga\' - Prof. Google doesn\'t appear to know...
April 22nd, 2026 19:37
Cuticle
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Abdullah, this carries a raw, immediate tension…like being caught in a moment you can’t step away from. That turn into something real and deeper stayed with me…how quickly it shifts from surface to something you feel. I’ve known that kind of restless pull too. This lands as intense, honest, and hard to shake. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 22nd, 2026 09:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Abdullah, this carries a raw, immediate tension…like being caught in a moment you can’t step away from. That turn into something real and deeper stayed with me…how quickly it shifts from surface to something you feel. I’ve known that kind of restless pull too. This lands as intense, honest, and hard to shake. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 22nd, 2026 09:21
Cuticle
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is filled with pain and injury it bleeds on the page soiling the mind with agony. Well expressed
April 22nd, 2026 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is filled with pain and injury it bleeds on the page soiling the mind with agony. Well expressed
April 22nd, 2026 05:35
Dead Roses
Allie561 said:
This was described so well I actually could feel the sensation of the flies and the humidity of death. It’s so hard to let go and in this poem you can feel the darkness starting to close around you as you hold on longer. Wonderful.
April 21st, 2026 10:31
Allie561 said:
This was described so well I actually could feel the sensation of the flies and the humidity of death. It’s so hard to let go and in this poem you can feel the darkness starting to close around you as you hold on longer. Wonderful.
April 21st, 2026 10:31
Dead Roses
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Abdullah, this is unsettling in the best way…there’s a slow creep to it that just keeps tightening. It lingers under the skin. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 21st, 2026 09:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Abdullah, this is unsettling in the best way…there’s a slow creep to it that just keeps tightening. It lingers under the skin. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 21st, 2026 09:09
Dead Roses
sorenbarrett said:
There is a deep message under the stickiness of this poem and the ageless virtue of honey. Nicely worked
April 21st, 2026 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
There is a deep message under the stickiness of this poem and the ageless virtue of honey. Nicely worked
April 21st, 2026 05:00
Corrections
NafisaSB said:
This is a very common mistake committed by many who still think of all Asians as Indians. Politics has kept us divided, but I have always found all the neighbors across the border as educated, enlightened , intelligent and warm
April 21st, 2026 03:28
NafisaSB said:
This is a very common mistake committed by many who still think of all Asians as Indians. Politics has kept us divided, but I have always found all the neighbors across the border as educated, enlightened , intelligent and warm
April 21st, 2026 03:28
God gives us Wealth
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
It is easy for a person to become confused. Sometimes you need to throw away the ballast in order to feel. Sometimes simplicity is needed so as not to get confused.
April 21st, 2026 00:14
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
It is easy for a person to become confused. Sometimes you need to throw away the ballast in order to feel. Sometimes simplicity is needed so as not to get confused.
April 21st, 2026 00:14
Commandment
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
Such realizations in themselves are already a return to conscience.
April 21st, 2026 00:09
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
Such realizations in themselves are already a return to conscience.
April 21st, 2026 00:09
God gives us Wealth
NafisaSB said:
that\'s a bit cynical - not all people are like that I hope....there are people who are truly thankful and grateful for whatever they get..
April 17th, 2026 23:48
NafisaSB said:
that\'s a bit cynical - not all people are like that I hope....there are people who are truly thankful and grateful for whatever they get..
April 17th, 2026 23:48
Commandment
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Abdullah, there’s a clear progression here…from learning, to internalizing, to confronting what happens when that line is crossed. It feels intimate and direct, and it doesn’t look away from the weight of it. It builds quietly, then leaves you sitting in it. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 11:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Abdullah, there’s a clear progression here…from learning, to internalizing, to confronting what happens when that line is crossed. It feels intimate and direct, and it doesn’t look away from the weight of it. It builds quietly, then leaves you sitting in it. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 11:29
Commandment
sorenbarrett said:
A heavy poem said with the power of the last lines that contradict the first command in the poem. Nicely done
April 17th, 2026 09:31
sorenbarrett said:
A heavy poem said with the power of the last lines that contradict the first command in the poem. Nicely done
April 17th, 2026 09:31
Corrections
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
This happens often. A person is not speaking to you, but to the image of you in their own mind. An illusion of control, labels, and all that. At least in this clash there is a heart. Perhaps these things need to truly break apart, exposing the hearts underneath. Cool.
April 15th, 2026 00:26
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
This happens often. A person is not speaking to you, but to the image of you in their own mind. An illusion of control, labels, and all that. At least in this clash there is a heart. Perhaps these things need to truly break apart, exposing the hearts underneath. Cool.
April 15th, 2026 00:26
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