Comments received on poems by Abdullah123
The Parting Hour
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write with the use of language that would make one think of an older time but with alterations. Antiquing seems to be the theme. Nice
February 21st, 2025 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write with the use of language that would make one think of an older time but with alterations. Antiquing seems to be the theme. Nice
February 21st, 2025 11:35
Poison & Ink
Poetic Licence said:
The pen has the real power, enjoyed the read
February 20th, 2025 11:38
Poetic Licence said:
The pen has the real power, enjoyed the read
February 20th, 2025 11:38
Poison & Ink
sorenbarrett said:
The pen is mightier that the sword. A metaphoric write and most lovely
February 20th, 2025 10:38
sorenbarrett said:
The pen is mightier that the sword. A metaphoric write and most lovely
February 20th, 2025 10:38
Limerick 3
Cassie58 said:
Your words are visual, provide imagery for the reader. This piece works as a metaphor or taken at face value.
February 20th, 2025 01:33
Cassie58 said:
Your words are visual, provide imagery for the reader. This piece works as a metaphor or taken at face value.
February 20th, 2025 01:33
Limerick 3
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is in reality and in metaphor as well. Nicely said
February 19th, 2025 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is in reality and in metaphor as well. Nicely said
February 19th, 2025 09:39
Fatuous Clay
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice wording here that is powerful and strong. Loved it
February 18th, 2025 10:28
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice wording here that is powerful and strong. Loved it
February 18th, 2025 10:28
LIMERICKS 1 AND 2
Poetic Licence said:
A fun way of delivering your message, nicely written
February 15th, 2025 07:56
Poetic Licence said:
A fun way of delivering your message, nicely written
February 15th, 2025 07:56
LIMERICKS 1 AND 2
sorenbarrett said:
Not just limericks but plays on words as well and a fun read it was.
February 15th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Not just limericks but plays on words as well and a fun read it was.
February 15th, 2025 04:40
A Description of Spring
Poetic Licence said:
Nice imagery in a lovely poem about the beauty of nature, enjoyed the read
February 14th, 2025 12:33
Poetic Licence said:
Nice imagery in a lovely poem about the beauty of nature, enjoyed the read
February 14th, 2025 12:33
A Description of Spring
sorenbarrett said:
The beauty of nature in this poem is well expressed in great images. A lovely write
February 14th, 2025 10:38
sorenbarrett said:
The beauty of nature in this poem is well expressed in great images. A lovely write
February 14th, 2025 10:38
Poison & Ink
Poetic Licence said:
A poetic way of describing a poet, enjoyed the read
January 24th, 2025 15:44
Poetic Licence said:
A poetic way of describing a poet, enjoyed the read
January 24th, 2025 15:44
The Tune (2 versions)
rin said:
Is it overflowing from within? That\'s wonderful.
January 7th, 2025 10:37
rin said:
Is it overflowing from within? That\'s wonderful.
January 7th, 2025 10:37
BENEATH RA?
rin said:
Which is better is a difficult question. In Japan, it is said that happiness lies in the latter.
January 7th, 2025 10:28
rin said:
Which is better is a difficult question. In Japan, it is said that happiness lies in the latter.
January 7th, 2025 10:28
The Tune (2 versions)
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed the read and my choice would be the first
December 25th, 2024 11:08
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed the read and my choice would be the first
December 25th, 2024 11:08
The Tune (2 versions)
sorenbarrett said:
They are both most beautiful but if forced to choose it would be the second for it touched me deeper
December 25th, 2024 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
They are both most beautiful but if forced to choose it would be the second for it touched me deeper
December 25th, 2024 09:40
TICK-TOCK
Buttercup said:
that was really good, sometimes I wish time could stop if we turned off the clock
December 21st, 2024 10:32
Buttercup said:
that was really good, sometimes I wish time could stop if we turned off the clock
December 21st, 2024 10:32
A Conversation (PARTS 1 AND 2)
Poetic Licence said:
A very engaging poem, well written, Thank you
December 6th, 2024 05:53
Poetic Licence said:
A very engaging poem, well written, Thank you
December 6th, 2024 05:53
Tugged
arqios said:
Compelled reading, better direction given than a film script. Like riding a roller coaster 🎢
December 3rd, 2024 14:13
arqios said:
Compelled reading, better direction given than a film script. Like riding a roller coaster 🎢
December 3rd, 2024 14:13
Tugged
FrasMac said:
this is a fascinating write, leading this reader to wonder where the puppet ends and the puppeteer begins. Maybe we are all puppets more than puppeteers. Good, thoughtful writing.
December 3rd, 2024 13:36
FrasMac said:
this is a fascinating write, leading this reader to wonder where the puppet ends and the puppeteer begins. Maybe we are all puppets more than puppeteers. Good, thoughtful writing.
December 3rd, 2024 13:36
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